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asdf
Posts: 218/303 |
01) Bears an uncanny resemblance to the original Yoshi's Island submap...
02) Actually, no. The pallete and the perspective are out of wack. The woman in the top left looks fine, albeit horribly out of place.
03) The goal post looks like it's hovering. No biggie, though.
04~09) Nothing wrong here.
10+11) That ? block looks out of place, as does the cliff segment above it.
12~18) Nothing wrong here.
And I also agree with Hyperhacker that this looks too much like the original. |
KawaiiImoto-e
Posts: 926/1068 |
Thanks for the commets.
I'll spacen things up, to three Block gaps, and some ExGFX and new Yoshi's Island Submap.
in the meantime, you may consider to try my Demo of my Hack. |
HyperLamer
Posts: 6011/8210 |
Nice, but looks too much like the original SMW. The overworld, especially, needs to be reworked. |
PumpkinPie
Posts: 745/1158 |
All right.
In the second overworld shot, what is that woman doing there? It is quite, quite, out of place. 
Other than that, the level design seems okay for the most part, but you might want to consider stretching your boxes and items out. They seem scrunched up. For example, elevating the boxes three spaces off of the ground, as opposed to two, makes it so that big mario has to jump to hit it, rather than just tap the button and not even move off of the ground.
Yep, seems okay. |
Glyph Phoenix
Posts: 391/745 |
If you fixed all the glitches and fixed the godawful palette, the airship might be nice. But that's the only thing I've seen so far that looks even remotely interesting from these screenshots. |
KawaiiImoto-e
Posts: 922/1068 |
Thanks for the suggestions, Golden Yoshi, I gonna fix those.
fabio, it looks like it, but it certainly aren't just altered level, as I once read in a tutorial, it's best to erease the hole level, and that's what I just did. It's coincidence.
About ExGFX, I'm not so sure about that one, may a basic FG / BG replacement, nothing extraordinary.. but what to use?
Ah.. I got my SNES back.. time for some real testing ^^ |
Chris
Posts: 644/922 |
It looks like it's comming along nicely to me... It needs a little work here and there. Other than that, it looks good.  |
fabio
Posts: 245/1479 |
Looks great but at the beginning of Let's-a Go!, it feels like the beginning of Yoshi's Island 2 where you kill all those red koopas with a shell that gives you a 1-up if you do it right. That's the only thing I see that looks like the original. |
Golden Yoshi
Posts: 496/693 |
I don't think the ship submap looks particularly good. It seems to be in many sporadic pieces and doesn't really resemble the shape of a ship. I'd recommend organizing it a little better, plus the palette of the pipe on top of the submap needs work.
The level design is looking pretty good. The levels do still resemble the originals (Yoshi's Island 1 and 3 particularly). You definitely will want to change it up a bit so they don't look like the original levels which we've all seen umpteen times. Just some little FG/BG type and/or palette tweaking will go a long way in making the level have a whole new feel to it. There are a couple minor errors with your positioning of objects. The goal gate on the clouds usually doesn't look that great, since the outermost edges of the gate float above the clouds. Those ledges floating on top of the ? blocks look funky also. Whenever you place objects on top of each other, they should be on flat surfaces that way you avoid these types of errors.
The status bar item box looks pretty good on the other hand, nice.
Needs some work but I think you'll be able to pull it off. |
Ikuzou
Posts: 151/181 |
Omega:
Hey! That was, like sooooo flaming.
Imoto:
Your hack looks good. I like how the 2nd OW turned out.
And the idea of using the supmap as the map of the ship.
The levels look interesting and pretty challenging to play,
but it needs some ExGFX.
Only just some of it makes it much better.
Oh yeah, Is there a storyline?
I'd like to see it.
Keep it up. I like it. |
Omega45889
Posts: 295/335 |
Looks boring, uninspired, and irritating to play. I know im being brutally honest, but please, there are so many hacks already. You have to do something special to have something cool and origional... not just add a few hard jumps in. |
KawaiiImoto-e
Posts: 921/1068 |
As some allready guessed, I'm working on a SMW-hack also. Wanted since the release of Demo World TLC, but now, I finally came around to it.
It's nothing that great, and the first few levels do not spot any ExGFX at all.
Last errors I spotted and palette issues solved and please try my Demo.
Screenshots (in order of appearance):
Overworld
Mushroom Kingdom
The black square in the middle is fixed, and yes, it looks plain.... but. that's not all.
That looks better, doesn't it? I may change that, thanks to a suggestion from Kawa-chan.
Levels
Mushroom Kingdom
The old Yoshi House.
Lets-a go!
     
Left & Right
        
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