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Yoshi Master
Posts: 31/138 |
I hate it! It's horrible!!!!!...LOL just kidding. It's okay but needs work. It has good style though. |
SoNotNormal
Posts: 56/793 |
Umm, huh? LOL sorry, don't really get what you mean. Do you mean put a green Mario path tile ON TOP of the castle? And the ghost house . . don't really get that. Just put a normal path tile behind it?
EDIT: Wait, I think I do get what you mean, so never mind  |
Keikonium
Posts: 1832/-2459 |
That looks really nice. There are only 3 problems that I can see:
1. There is something behind that far left pipe. Remove it.
2. No tile behind the #1 castle.
3. No tile behind the ghost house.
For 2 and 3, I mean all there is, is grass. You need a green path tile behind the castle, and a whiteish one behind the ghost house.
Other than thoes, it looks pretty good. |
SoNotNormal
Posts: 52/793 |
Great, thank you.  |
ExKay
Posts: 820/1114 |
A lot better. |
SoNotNormal
Posts: 51/793 |
Hmm, thanks, but couldn't find the bottoms of the hill tiles - which one do you guys mean? All the smallers, teal ones?
EDIT: Got it, here is the new OW. How does IT looks. Shouldn't be too obvious now . .
I added bottoms as you guys said, so hows it look now?
YET ANOTHER EDIT: While we're on the topic of OWs, I had a question. I wanted to make a bigger pool of water in this OW, but whenever I made cliffs going into water, the water wouldn't show up next to them. Instead it would be a dark blue spot to fill the rest of the tile. Can I fix that? |
Chris
Posts: 614/922 |
Doesn't look too good at the moment. Most of the hill tiles are...cut. You should get the bottoms to those tiles, and maybe things will look better. Other than that, it looks pretty decent. |
KATW
Posts: 3141/3959 |
Its good, but the hills have bottom tiles for a reason 
Also, try and make where youre going a little less obvious. Stick some little bumps in, make more roundabouts, make it INTERESTING. A bigger pool of water cant hurt |
SoNotNormal
Posts: 50/793 |
Here is a pic of my first world overworld - it's all - green, I know. But so was Forest of Illusion in the original, and we all - *loved* that OW, didn't we? ANyway, comments please before I make more.
Not all the events are revealed, but a few levels are hidden on the left side, along with a few down near the south end pipe. There is also a very secret level hidden in the green circle on the left. This is my first world, and it was made to be green, so how is it? |
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