Acmlm's Board - I2 Archive - Modern Art - Beauty, almost done (NSFW: Nudity)
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Dark Vampriel
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I found the hand tutorial I was thinking of a couple of days ago that can help you out. 
http://www.polykarbon.com/tutorials/hand2/hands.htm |
Ran-chan
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You say that you can |
Dark Vampriel
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Awesome drawing and shading. As for the right hand look up tutorials on how to draw hands. Seeing as I'm not good in that category myself. |
Danielle
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Originally posted by Simon
Originally posted by Tarale
The ear seems a little small, and the lower leg also seems a bit... off... although I can't put my finger on why.
The ear seems small? Hmmm... Didn't really notice that, might be because I've got really small ears myself  . About the lower leg, it might be a little crooked in the middle, could that be it? Perhaps I'll see if I can straighten it up a bit.
I think it seems unusually big.. compared the the rest of her body, they could do being smaller. That's what I see. I also think the ear is a bit small, but nothing too terrible. Overall this looks great, I envy your ability to draw so well. Keep working on it and be sure to show the finished product! |
Cruel Justice
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Almost done sums it up. I like the movement represented with the hair. Now if you can trace and refine your own picture, it would be excellent! |
Thomas
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You are a really good artist!!! I have tried to do drawings that good many times but I just don't have the talent. The best one I ever did was a copy of a picture of Pikon from DBZ. xP |
Cymoro
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The hair looks a little off, like the strands are in giant clumps. Now, you said some areas were manga-influenced, and that may be one, but I don't think out-of-the-water hair will do that. |
Simon
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Originally posted by Tarale
The ear seems a little small, and the lower leg also seems a bit... off... although I can't put my finger on why.
The ear seems small? Hmmm... Didn't really notice that, might be because I've got really small ears myself . About the lower leg, it might be a little crooked in the middle, could that be it? Perhaps I'll see if I can straighten it up a bit. |
Keikonium
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It looks pretty good to me. The hair reminds me of DBZ tho... . I have no tips on drawing the hand, except maby make it so its stretched out. Like open your hand as if you are trying to grab something, and draw the hand from the back (so we see the back of the hand. Maby a slight curve so you can slightly see the palm?
The only thing that bothers me when looking at the picture is the leg and foot. They seem rushed, and way to thin. I know that sitting on a leg like that should make it look thin, but for some reason it just looks odd to me.
Other than that, nice work. I wonder what this would look like with Tarale's shading and colouring. I bet it would look awesome.
Keep up the good work, and I hope you get the hand figured out. |
Tarale
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Well, it's looking very very good. I'm impressed I'm also mildly jealous that you can draw hands, but that's another story 
Well, with that hand, I'm not sure what to suggest, but when I put my hand back behind me like that, it seems to bend backwards a little...
Your linework is very nice, and your shading is also good. You have a good sense of anatomy. I can see very little that I can think of that might need correcting. The ear seems a little small, and the lower leg also seems a bit... off... although I can't put my finger on why. The rest is excellently done, you've done a great job on chest and abdomen, some problem areas I have
And I'm going to put a warning in the thread title; because of the nudity -- simply because we might have some people viewing from work, or school, or with nosy parents hovering behind them For future reference -- if you post nudity in Modern Art (and you are MORE than welcome to) just put a warning in the thread title Cheers. |
Simon
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I started drawing this last night and I'm quite satisfied with what I've got so far, especially the face. I'm not that experienced in drawing hair but I think it came out alright. Anyway, It's kind of an attempt at capturing the beauty of the female body, it's a bit manga influenced in some areas. I've almost finished it but there's one tiny problem, I just can't get the left hand right. Got any tips or suggestions?
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