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HyperLamer
Posts: 6219/8210 |
Yeah, left to right, top to bottom is usually the order you should go for. Maybe a slightly bigger font, too. |
Thomas
Posts: 294/298 |
That is what someone told me on another forum. I am gonna try to work on that in the future.... |
Peardian
Posts: 1034/1696 |
It's pretty good, but a little hard to tell what text box comes first... |
Thomas
Posts: 242/298 |
Well Mesia, this is my first comic, so I am doing my best on it. I am glad that you don't think it is shit, but I think it at least deserves a 6/10... |
Xkeeper
Posts: 3339/-863 |
SHITOMETER!
Shit Not Bad Good
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T H I S
Not terribly great but it's at least showing signs of improvement, definitely  |
fabio
Posts: 248/1479 |
 The chicken was funny when Link could finally understand what the chicken said. Keep up the good work. |
Thomas
Posts: 239/298 |
Issue 10:
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fabio
Posts: 108/1479 |
This story is funny is intresting. I look foward to Mario and Luigi's adventure and Link for that matter. I like the beginning when Mario and Luigi attacked Professor Oak with hammers. That was funny. Keep up the good work. |
Chris
Posts: 612/922 |
It looks pretty neat and interesting to me. Very nice work, so far.  |
Thomas
Posts: 130/298 |
Issue 9 - Link Joins The Team
I decided to give it a little storyline...so expect more comedic/adventure issues coming. |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 2508/3271 |
So Mario and Luigi appear in various Nintendo games? Is that the Saga? Not a bad idea.
It was pretty lame at first.. but I think the moment the font changed, the material actually improved. Nothing too interesting yet, though I'm still curious to see where you go with this. |
Thomas
Posts: 119/298 |
XD as in the face as in random crap as I come up with it so don't crticize this comic cause it doesn't have a good storline or it doesn't make sense.
The First 8 episodes:
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