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HyperLamer
Posts: 5337/8210 |
1: Boooooooring.
2: Blocks look cool, except the weird yellow one. The green stuff in the background looks out of place. Water looks too plain (though maybe not when animated). Status bar colours, though good, are inconsistent.
3: Using the goo = cool, but it's too bright. The gray blocks are too dark.
4: Good, but the red blocks seem odd and the SMB3 blocks seem to be miscoloured.
5: Good but 'Lv1' is crappy, just '1' would be better. |
Darkmatt
Posts: 200/212 |
Here's what I think you should change.
1. Blah, nothing to say. Because not much has changed.
2. I think they're a too single-colored. If it can be helped. Try adding some darker colors and make it a bit more 16-bit.
Seriously my eyes hurt when I first layed eyes on that screenshot.
3. I think the goo clashes too much with the pallete. Good job though.
4. Semi-poor pallete on the wooden blocks. Interesting level.
5. Try making the OV a bit more realistic. ( Making angled sides and edges that aren't 45 degrees.  ) And replace the land tiles you have with the plain green tile. Can't find it? It's there. |
Chris
Posts: 536/922 |
Not bad, I guess. Stuff that you really need to try improving on. But for a first hack, it isn't too bad. Good work.  |
mikepjr
Posts: 171/242 |
Ok, time for me to nitpick just a tiny little bit, and you do not have to do this, it is your hack after all.
But the title needs to be changed to something a little more creative as super mario world: bla bla bla,
has been done to death.
It could be Super mario in: the moo moo effect, just as an example that is, but like i said, it is you hack and you can do whatever you want, just know that not as many people will play just for that one reason.
But those shots are not bad at all.
Good luck. |
Keikonium
Posts: 1442/-2459 |
Originally posted by smwedit
I like the BG in the 2nd screen, is that original?
Seaside Plains, the first level!
The ocean is animated, and the BG is all by me!
hmmm.... |
ExKeeper
Posts: 372/512 |
I like the BG in the 2nd screen, is that original? |
Pikachu025
Posts: 76/96 |
Originally posted by Heian-794
I like the eyes on those stone-like blocks in the 3rd screenshot. If you can break those, with the Panzer (?) falling down next to you and the other enemies, that'll be a good challenge, especially if they shoot fire at different intervals. Looking forward to playing it!
Those are miscolored brown blocks. <.< |
Rainbow Yoshi
Posts: 297/496 |
Looks quite good for your first.
Overworld is pretty good too. |
Heian-794
Posts: 734/896 |
I like the eyes on those stone-like blocks in the 3rd screenshot. If you can break those, with the Panzer (?) falling down next to you and the other enemies, that'll be a good challenge, especially if they shoot fire at different intervals. Looking forward to playing it! |
Ikuzou
Posts: 81/181 |
My first hack!
Please forgive me that it seems noobish it's my first.
I tried to do my best on it!
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I updated some stuff:
(+) Made "Lv1" to plain "1".
(+) Edited "The Weird Red Block". It turned out to be better, Thx!
Here's what it looks like now:
It disappears when "Off".
(+) Edited "The green stuff in the BG". They are now trees and plants!
I also worked on the "MARIO" Pallete a bit...
The "Ugly Yellow Block" is actually a muncher.
It is supposed to be angry and hot. (Except it hurts your eyes a little)
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First post screens:
The title screen.
In progress, actually( ^ _ ^ ; )
Seaside Plains, the first level!
The ocean is animated, and the BG is all by me!
An underground level. The goo is from SML2.
"Mountain Challenge", an Air Platform level.
The Overworld. Since I planned only a few levels the OW is one screen.
I know the hack is small. So, I put some easter eggs inside!
It is fairy easy to find it, just beat all the levels.
Any comments?
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labmaster
