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Violent J
Posts: 391/749 |
*sigh* You wouldn't get it. REINSERT BAN because he was already perma-banned once, and SAVE AND QUIT because he will kinda quit the board when banned. GET IT? |
kinhad
Posts: 130/131 |
I don't get it. |
Violent J
Posts: 390/749 |
REINSERT BAN TO SAVE AND QUIT |
Legion
Posts: 4101/5657 |
INSERT QUARTER TO CONTINUE |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 2070/3271 |
Originally posted by dragon master
They were in this world and he played an game and mario jumped out of it.
But they are not surently in angame.
Eh.. well the world they're currently in is Mario-themed, so that point doesn't come across so well. |
Captain moneybags
Posts: 228/447 |
They were in this world and he played an game and mario jumped out of it.
But they are not surently in angame. |
Legion
Posts: 4097/5657 |
NO! NO NO NO NO NO! 
Ok, for starters, if Falco kicked the shit out of the tv and Mario jumped out? Then how come Mario is still in the game and so is Falco? It's like Falco is the one who crossed world and not Mario. wtfs? |
Captain moneybags
Posts: 227/447 |
Next one.
Im getting better... Right? |
alte Hexe
Posts: 3934/5458 |
Bob 'n' George already went there.
Don't you try it  |
Peardian
Posts: 798/1696 |
That forth one is good, but the lines separating the panels are inconsistent. Plus, it would be funnier if Mario said something in the last frame like "Crud."
Otherwise, you're improving.  |
Dylan
Posts: 1377/1407 |
The random comic starts, eh? Well, hopefully it'll end soon! |
Legion
Posts: 4011/5657 |
Ok, the third one is now officially the worst web comic ever.
Not so much the actual imagery, but the dialouge. |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 2062/3271 |
Originally posted by dragon master
Ever heard about giving suggestions....
Yeah I got some.
-No JPGs for sprites. I know you fixed that with the last two comics, but this needs to be pointed out. There's no excuse.
-With #4, that's just.. no one's going to want to follow that. And if they do, it won't be worth it. A sprite comic with only "action" like that will always suck.
-SPELL CHECK
Oh and also
I dont really understand this one myself.
If you know it's bad, why do you waste your time? You don't need to work with every idea that pops in your head. Pause, and THINK about what you're going to do before you do it. |
Captain moneybags
Posts: 226/447 |
Number four....
I dont really understand this one myself. |
Peardian
Posts: 797/1696 |
That one's much better, but there's still a typo or two... |
Captain moneybags
Posts: 225/447 |
Ever heard about giving suggestions....
Here the next one whether you like it or not.
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Cymoro
Posts: 1619/2216 |
Originally posted by Valcion Kaizer
You are the reason sprite comics should be outlawed, taken out back, shot, imploded, exploded, exploded again, then touched in weird ways by Michael Jackson..
See, I needed to fix that one tiny bit for you. |
Valcion Kaizer
Posts: 37/109 |
You are the reason sprite comics should be outlawed. |
Peardian
Posts: 791/1696 |
The text is a little too small and too far to the right.
...
Needs work. |
Captain moneybags
Posts: 224/447 |
Well they are supossed to be random... |
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