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Peardian
Posts: 782/1696 |
It's okay, but the story is kinda hard to follow. You can't see the tree or the fruit in the first frame. The BG's cool, though. KDL3 had great backgrounds.
Paint is good by itself, but Jasc will definately help.  |
Luigi-San
Posts: 361/736 |
He shown me a couple more, and I must admit, they're good!
Advice: Get PSP! (Paint Shop Pro  ) |
Legion
Posts: 3831/5657 |
Originally posted by Koopa Myster
Ok, ok, it sucks noodles. But it's my first try! It'll get better, I promise. Oh, this was made on paint, so it has it's limits.
You owe us then. 
On a side-note, you have a great attitude about it. And if you stick with it, you'll definitely get results. |
Magikoopa Myster
Posts: 134/553 |
Ok, ok, it sucks noodles. But it's my first try! It'll get better, I promise. Oh, this was made on paint, so it has it's limits. |
Legion
Posts: 3825/5657 |
You owe me the 596.72 dollars it took me for the eye surgery I had to have after the viewing of this caused my retinas to burst into flames. |
JDavis
Posts: 619/815 |
I liked it too... But then, I am quite parital to Ukiki.
Still, I've got to point out that the Ukiki do not appear to be walking (because they don't walk, they either hop or run, only doing the latter when carrying something), and something needs to be done about the barely readable "SQUISH", the invisible fruit, and Whispy Wood's arms... which make me cry. |
Sukasa
Posts: 736/1981 |
I guess I have no eye for art, because I think it's kinda funny. Besides, it's koopa's first. Just give him time and he'll be great. |
Yoshi Dude
Posts: 2047/3271 |
This is bad.
Not the sort of bad where someone could take this comic and point out everything wrong with it, so that other sprite comic artists can avoid these mistakes, and perhaps get a little chuckle.
It's just bad.
The best advice I can give is that you should come up with material before getting started on a comic. |
Valcion Kaizer
Posts: 20/109 |
You're the reason why sprite comics should be outlawed. |
Magikoopa Myster
Posts: 133/553 |
...is a comic that I made about those ukikis from Yoshi's Island! Here's the first one I made:
Well? |
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