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Keikonium
Posts: 1116/-2459 |
First off, EVERY single shot except the OW pic have terrible palettes. They need to be fixed, and there are too many errors to point them all out . The jpeg compression doesn't help any.
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1. I am going to say that I love this shot. ONLY because it uses that BG in a forest and I was hoping that no one else would do that (I did in my game thats why ) This level can look very good if you give the FG palette a nightish colour. The regular forest palette darkened then purple tintd would look very good .
2. OMG!!!!!! Just....painful. The palette scares my eyes . Please change it.
3. This actually doesn't look that bad. If your going for a dirty water effect, change the waterfall to that brown colour. If your going for clean water, make the straight water the same color as the falls.
4. Not that bad either. The green may seem abit bright but that may be bacuse of the darkened BG. I suggest raising the BG up so u see more trees, and changing the palette on the stumps.
5. BG is nice, FG is nice. This pic isn't that bad actually. Half of a tree is missing in the BG tho (on one of the hills). Fix the palette on the status bar and this will look good !
6. Looks fine. Just fix what ||Bass pointed out and the bridges at the bottom look weird. Maby make a one tile space around the sides so it looks more like its crossing a pit and not sitting on the ground
So this doesn't look THAT bad. Lots of palette errors, but they shouldn't be to hard to fix. |
||bass
Posts: 305/817 |
Pick ONE perspective.
Unless that is supposed to be some type of ramp, it looks strange. |
gnkkwinrrul
Posts: 585/647 |
Actually, when I posted a demo people told me that it was too ridiculously hard  and I used savestates because I was just playing through quickly to get to the last part. |
Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 5773/7620 |
The palettes are hideous and the live count makes it seem like your hack is ridiculously easy. |
gnkkwinrrul
Posts: 584/647 |
Umojia Forest 1.
More of Umojia Forest 1...
Umojia secret 1.
Umojia Secret 2...a little bare looking right now, it isn't finished yet.
Umojia Forest 2.
And the Umojia Forest 
Obviously, there are status bar problems, but I will fix them when I get around to it.
I did use Peter ac's Mario here. |
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