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Peardian
Posts: 467/1696 |
Haha... silly Knuckles. Why is everything white with black outlines? Is that Brumbland?
I think you need a new Link sprite... Try one of the sprites from the 2D rooms. |
Shyguy
Posts: 327/1998 |
 Personally, I like the second part better. |
Peardian
Posts: 463/1696 |
Oh... I see it now... I like the sketch. |
JDavis
Posts: 562/815 |
I think he's supposed be doing this: 
... But they did a bad job of it. |
Peardian
Posts: 460/1696 |
The speech bubbles are cool. What's with Psy's eyes? |
Violent J
Posts: 272/749 |
You should get Photoshop CS. I have it and look at my fancomic for Fireball20xl.com, it's beutifull!
Incase you cant tell the picture is Psy holding a banana. |
Shyguy
Posts: 320/1998 |
Originally posted by Valcion
A guy puts a couple of sprites in his comic and he thinks he's the funniest guy ever.
Your comic sucks.
TOP VIEW SPRTIES DO NOT GO IN A SIDE VIEW COMIC.
Got me a sore throat..... |
Peardian
Posts: 448/1696 |
I'm interested in where this is going.
Try moving the text over a little... |
Valcion
Posts: 817/1139 |
A guy puts a couple of sprites in his comic and he thinks he's the funniest guy ever.
Your comic sucks.
TOP VIEW SPRTIES DO NOT GO IN A SIDE VIEW COMIC. |
JDavis
Posts: 560/815 |
Uh... yeah, they do. |
Ramadan Roy
Posts: 608/816 |
Originally posted by Master M
only had one grammar error.
Two, actually. One doesn't say "gut feeling". |
Black Lord
Posts: 228/453 |
It's better then your last attempt, but really not much better... the sprites don't match up too well with eachother, especially the self made things. And for being 17 years old, I'd think you could think of some better dialogue. |
Shyguy
Posts: 315/1998 |
That's my feeble attempt at day transition. The comic takes place early in the morning. |
JDavis
Posts: 558/815 |
You still have text touching, and sometimes going outside, the borders of the text boxes... And when I said they should be pointed at the mouth I didn't mean they should go over the people's faces like that, I just meant that the general direction they should be pointed is toward the mouth.
Other than that... It's better than the first one, but what's with the stripes in backgrounds of the fourth and eighth panels? |
Shyguy
Posts: 313/1998 |
No, it was action. Not comedy..... and I only had one grammar error. |
windwaker
Posts: 1318/1797 |
1) was that supposed to be funny? (seriously)
2) grammar.  |
Shyguy
Posts: 310/1998 |
Here is my second comic. I'm sorry for making a new thread about my comics, but this one is part of a series. It's nothing like my first one. It's an adventure.
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