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Sketchie
Posts: 71/356 |
You don't bump week/month/year old threads. This thread is almost 2 weeks old. Now a mod will come in and lock this thread... I think 
If you really have to tell gnkkwinrrul about something that nobody else would benefit/care about, just PM him next time Devil. Don't bump old threads just to leave a message just for one person. |
gnkkwinrrul
Posts: 497/647 |
Erm...first of all, which was already said, a demo was made. Second of all, I've already fixed this. Third, you just bumped a thread for not much reason  |
cpubasic13
Posts: 915/1346 |
You know he made a demo, right?
I thought you might wanna know... so commenting on screenies when you could see it in game seems kind of pointless... |
Devil_Evilone_RA
Posts: 57/64 |
I found a few OW island glitches...
...Not that I wouldn't do that, its just that i would look better if you fixed these mistakes. |
turtleman
Posts: 4/119 |
This makes absolutely no sense at all. A bush on a mushroom?
welll it IS a game where an italian plumber goes on a quest to save a princess
that was kidnapped by a dinosaur type thing with a spiked shell.....
@gnkkwinrrul:looks great!
cant wait ta play!
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Magikoopa Myster
Posts: 82/553 |
Looks nice.
Ooooo. Creepy.
You still have some pallette problems here. My eyes hurt from looking at it.
It's...ok...do a little pallette tweaking.
This makes absolutely no sense at all. A bush on a mushroom?
It's okay, but all those sprites should and will cause slowdown.
It's fine.
Pipe maze! Yay! Erm... yeah. It's ok.
It's good. In a pipey sort of way...
"And Mario saves the ocean by destroying the processing plant." Pretty good. Is the lava floating? Oh wait. It's not.
All in all, it's good. Kinda. Change some pallettes and it'll look great! |
gnkkwinrrul
Posts: 467/647 |
World 2 is complete! More screens here 
Re-done world 2. It was a nice green plain that got overrun with polluted waters :x
Re-done shot of the castle...
Sunset cliffs, redone for all of you complaining about it :p
Arid Islands 1. Its all polluted and yucky :o
Arid Isles 2...
Arid Ocean 1. How can an ocean be arid? I dunno :p
Arid Isles Mansion. Spooky :o
Arid Isles 3. Its a pipe maze
Arid Ocean 2.
And the processing plant, the source of the pollution.
Feedback is appreciated  |
PumpkinPie
Posts: 66/1158 |
Uhm...alot of the time I don't even know what I'm looking at I like the overworl, but the levels look like they were patched together without care. And yes, it is kind of cluttered. Tell me this: is it fun, though? Also, outside the hot springs - half of that platform is missing. wth?
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gnkkwinrrul
Posts: 464/647 |
Thank you all for your feed back
Firstly...the OW is old. I took the pictures a while ago and they look better now ^^
And I will change the lava...water stuff. The background may need to be a bit...toned down too :p
It isn't saying f you...LOL. It's saying this is a test oF YOUr strength...I didn't even notice I took a shot of the f you part of it :p The weird stuff around the pics is because I didn't crop them right...left a bit of garbage in the picture. |
HyperLamer
Posts: 3712/8210 |
Looks neat. A bit cluttered, but also some nice ideas.
1) Maybe a message box would work better? 
2) Ice background with lava?
3) The bottom chunk of land looks really flat.
4) Cool, I hope that's not a midway gate at the beginning though.
5) Looks very interesting.
6) Ooh, how's Mario gonna get up there? There seems to be a gap at the bottom though.
7) Nice, but could stand to lose one of the chucks. That's a lot of enemies in a small space.
8) Er, why is there a goal point between those trees?
9) Looks hard. Hope all those sprites with the layer 3 water don't cause slowdown...
10) Nice plant. You did put a Yoshi at the beginning right?
11) Ooh, it's all dank and spooky-like. Meteorites don't often carve underwater mazes though, usually just craters.
12) Ball-and-chains swinging off ? blocks? Way to take ideas from SMB3, people don't do that enough.  Looks hard.
13) Ooh, big castle. Kinda plain OW though. Maybe some rocks, islands and/or boats in the water?
14) Don't suppose you could move the camera up? Being at the top with the scorebar makes it look cluttered and hard to see. Those platforms in the background might be a bit confusing too.
15) Nice. Bowser statues don't really look right on diagonal slopes though...
16) Eh, this looks pretty crappy. The waterfalls, which look more like blue blocks, somehow make 90-degree turns and flow sideways? They disappear into blocks, even. It doesn't look like Mario's swimming at all, and the BG colour is too bright.
17) Those islands look very flat. Not necessarily a bad thing, just that it implies they're barely above the water, which might not be what you wanted. (It is a cool idea though.) Unless it's like a flooded place or something, they should be a bit more beach-coloured. The dotted path going diagonally doesn't look so good either, you'd probably be better using one that turns.
18) Not bad, colours need some work though.
Other than those little things (a lot of them, but that's a lot of pics too ) it looks pretty nice. |
Juggling Joker
Posts: 609/1033 |
The levels either feel too empty or too cluttered. You need to work on your sprite placement a bit. The overworld could also use some touchups, especially when lining up your cliff edges. Besides that, you're not doing a bad job with the original tilesets. |
Sketchie
Posts: 61/356 |
Hm... I'm no ROM hacker, but can you like... move the rapids down a bit so it looks more natural?
You know, move the water layer down a bit so the water actually looks like it's touching the rock.
Or are they both on the same layer, making it a moot point?  |
Luigi-San
Posts: 227/736 |
It is made from the Lava GFX
Perhaps it's supposed to be rapids... |
Sketchie
Posts: 60/356 |
Originally posted by Luigi-San
It's supposed to be a waterfall.
Yes, I know, but look at the river leading down to becoming a waterfall. Look closely. ...it's FLOATING!!!  It's just not natural ;; |
Jesper
Posts: 2241/2390 |
Not too shabby. I like the Ganon Tower-ish Dark Spire. |
Luigi-San
Posts: 225/736 |
It's supposed to be a waterfall. |
Sketchie
Posts: 58/356 |
The bottom part of the first world map is kinda flat, though. Are you trying to show that it's an island or something? If so, then maybe you should put a beach around it to make it pop out and look more "3D-ish".
Dark Spire? Looks very interesting  But the OW is kinda plain. Maybe put some rocks or islands in the water, and put some trees and hills on the cliffs? Same goes with Arid Islands. They just look like patches of deserts that got flooded or something. Unless that's what you're going for, I'd suggest you put some green patches there and here... after all, islands has a lot of water surrounding them, and that causes greenery...
The Sunset Cliffs... bleh. The water just doesn't look very natural. It's like... FLOATING off the ground. O_o;;
But otherwise, they look nice.
And Happy Birthday to you!
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Luigi-San
Posts: 222/736 |
Originally posted by Kyouji Craw
It probably says Honk if you love hockey.
My thoughts exactly
Might want to improve on the Arid Islands OV, otherwise this is good
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Alastor the Stylish
Posts: 5428/7620 |
It probably says ____ if you ____. |
Sukasa
Posts: 186/1981 |
Looking good!
Just one thing-what in the #$%@ is the first shot saying?! It looks like "F You" inthe screenshot. |
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