Acmlm's Board - I2 Archive - Sim-Battle Arena - TR3 MetalMan88 vs. Sion
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Dracoon
Posts: 2838/3727 |
I have to disagree with Schwa on a few points...
I didn't see any real violations or anything, at least that were horribly bad, just two people escalating into a greater power. God-Modding should probably be when one character hugely over matches another. Over all, a good fight, but MM88 edges Sion out by a faction of a precent of a fraction. Great fight you two, took me a while to decide. |
Schwa
Posts: 1263/2214 |
Here's the deal... Sion, wtf? Man, you blew it early in the fight with that Pheonix thing. It was a HUGE God-Mod. You didn't charge up for the attack, plus you pulled off 2 techs in the same turn which is a more minor no-no, but still not respectable.
MetalMan88, you got pretty powerful too, but I could tell it was only so you could try to be evenly matched with Sion. I can tell that kind of style anywhere, I call it "Desperate Defending", or DDing. You did the right thing by not asking him to edit the post, at least not if it wasn't a PM at least. MetalMan88 gets my vote.
Sion, you're usually a nice fighter, but this fight was a little over the top. That's all I have to say.
Remember, fellow fighters, this bit of advice: SBing should be kept realistic, even though it's fantasy. Fantasy should be realistic in the sense that not anything goes. Sure, the author af a fantasy novel can incorporate anything into his story, but there needs to be a REASON for everything. Sion, how did you become so powerful just like that? MetalMan88, why does your character become a crazed angel? Details, gentleman, will make your fantasies seem real! And that, in turn, will not only bring you "closer to your creations", which is the goal for SBing (IMO), but... it also earns the appeal of the judges.
That said, kudos Metal, well done Sion, and I look forward to the next fight when hopefully you'll have improved more. Good luck! |
Grey the Stampede
Posts: 2090/3770 |
Time's up! This battle is officially over. Each fighter can make one final closing post, and then the rest is up to the judges....
It's 9:30, my time, as I write this. If you want to make another post, be sure to do it before Midnight. |
Super Sion
Posts: 1981/2472 |
Sion absorbs the force of the kick and lands on his feet...sliding backwards a little from the impact. The kick to the head made Sion a little dizzy...but not nearly as much as having all the gates open in his body caused.
Sion:*if only I could use my jutsus...or maybe...*
EARTH CUTTER!!!!!
Sions fist smashes into the ground, causing the earth to rise. A massive piller of Stone stands before Sion. In hundreds of rapid punches Sion carves the stone into a large pipe.
Not a second later Sion grabs the pipe spins around and swings for Metals legs. |
MetalMan88
Posts: 107/232 |
* Metal gets up, obviously tired and weary. However, seeing the oncoming Sion, he just... stands there. When Sion reaches him, however, the truth is revealing. He leaps forward.... and then kicks the back of Sion's head, landing on the ground. * |
Super Sion
Posts: 1980/2472 |
Sion chops the pole in the middle of Metals vault. With no support Metal loses balance giving Sion an opportunity to attack..with pole palms straight out in front of him Sion slams his hands into Metals "off-balance" body, sending him yet again flying in another direction.
Sion: *breathing heavily* ALL OR NOTHING!!!
Sion chases after Metals body.... |
MetalMan88
Posts: 106/232 |
* A sickening crack would be heard. Metal tumbled to the ground... apparently lifeless... and headless. However... the headless body stood up! *
"Oh, darn, you broke my favorite helmet.. I hate when that happens."
* ...In a cruel, anticlimactic moment, Metal had survived yet again. He shook himself off... then pole-vaulted at Sion.... he moved to strike him with his staff, on the head; except this time, Metal would win for real! Or would he? Who knows... * |
Super Sion
Posts: 1976/2472 |
Sion-*with all the gates open its win or die*
Not a second after hitting the floor Sion kicked off the ground sending his body zooming towards Metal. Coming within a few inches of Metal Sion lifted his leg and brought it down with extreme force onto Metals head. |
MetalMan88
Posts: 105/232 |
"But for all the thunder in the clouds, the ground remains unmoved."
* With some strange saying, he fell... intentionally falling into the oncoming attack. Somehow, he had set it up so that his descent would overtake the ascent of his worthy opponent, breaking the attack and damaging Siof in the process. Once again, he had to take a hit, and even then, hit the ground, which dealt even more damage to him, but he remained determined. *
"I shall survive the bellowing of the storm." |
Super Sion
Posts: 1973/2472 |
The rain had not stopped yet so there was no Sun to blind Sions view, however if there was a Sun it wouldnt effect Sion anyways. Seeing what Metal was up to Sion launched himself up into the air, leaving a massive crator around the area he was standing.
With an outstreched Punch Sion collided with the Jet, ripping through it like a Knife through Buttter. Once the Jet was sliced in two pieces and Sion was safely at the other end the Jet exploded in mid air, sending large chunks of flaming debree everywhere.
Sion floating in the air watching Metal as he fell, seeing an opportunity to attack Sion rushed at Metal before he could reach the ground.... |
MetalMan88
Posts: 104/232 |
* Overwhelmed by the massive power that Sion threw at him, Metal was flung high up into the air. Very high up. Look! A jet! *
"I shall not lose.... no matter what it takes!"
* Using the last of his upward momentum, Metal landed atop the Jet. Then, he climbed inside... made sure everyone had parachutes, and scared them off the plane. Meanwhile, Sion might be thinking that he had sent Metal into the sun. *
"And now.... for the ultimate comeback!"
* Metal sent the controls downward at full speed, calculated to hit Sion at maximum explosive power. Metal then bailed out, using a parachute, and waiting for the horrific explosion. * |
Super Sion
Posts: 1972/2472 |
Sion stoop there lifeless as Metal walked closer. As Metal approaches Sion he lifted his head slowly...his eyes were still white and lifeless.
Before Metal had anytime to reacte an immense blast of energy exploded from Sions body. His eyes changing from lifeless white to blazing red, his aura shown with the same flaring red.
Metal was launched backwards by the blast of energy. Sion did not let him fall however, just before Metals body hit the floor Sion was behind him. His speed was now increased to super sonic speeds, to anyone watching the fight it seems more like he teleported at Metal.
Following the "instant transmission" Sion let out a powerful uppercut sending Metal hurling up into the stormy sky. |
MetalMan88
Posts: 99/232 |
"I will continue to oppose you as long as I have enough functional body matter!"
* The bleeding, cut-up, limping Metal walked towards Sion, with the staff in his hands. Determined, he did not appear to be willing to give up. He was waiting for... something. He had stopped using magical attacks, and thus, was unable to keep Sion back. He walked brazenly towards the most probably magical onslaught, his staff keeping him aloft, and his eyes piercing all which he looked at. * |
Super Sion
Posts: 1971/2472 |
Sion was not disoriented in the slightest. Speed was his speacialty and being swung around was nothing. The problem was the fall...knowing he was going to hit the debree Sion tried his best to avoid getting any serious damage. As he collided with the debree he covered up his Torso using both his arms and legs.
As Metal marched mindlessly towards the pile of debree he heard a strange sound...It was Sion rising slowly, hid arms and legs bled heavily from gashes delivered by the jagged debree. His left arm hung lifelessly to his side, blood flowing off of it onto the ground.
Sion: Your...*cough* a Monster!!! *ill have to unseal ALL the gates and risk death to stop this monster*
Sions eyes faded into a white nothingness. His body became limp but he remained standing. |
MetalMan88
Posts: 95/232 |
"Foolish being. Your kicks are useless."
* With that, Metal walked into the kicks, taking great damage.... but pushing Sion back with sheer force. It was then that he was on his last bit of energy... but he was not concerned. His now battered body mercilessly walked into the kicks, and then began punching back. Metal was not flinching... this was completely unnatural. Then.... as another kick flew towards him... he just grabbed the incoming leg. *
"Checkmate."
* With that, Metal began spinning around wildly, lifting Sion off of the ground and probably disorienting him. The speed continued to build, and one could hear the air itself whistling. At the last moment, Metal let go, sending Sion flying into the air.... and then into a large, jagged pile of debris. Uncaring, Metal picked up his battered staff and marched towards the pile of stones, like a mindless killing machine... even though he was bleeding heavily and had a broken leg, as well as a few other broken bones. *
"Resistance will only lead to pain. Surrender!" |
Super Sion
Posts: 1968/2472 |
Sions energy was not a field but a flowing power that eminating from inside his body. Therefore it was that a field that could be shattered. Metals pole was simply blasted back at him from the Chakra waves. Sion seeing an opportunity to attack lunged at Metal spinning rapidly. The move resembled the Konoha Whirldwind he used earlier however this time it was even faster and destructive. The ground crumbled beneath Sion spinning body, he zoomed towards Metals pocitions ready to unleash a thousand lightning fast kicks! |
Grey the Stampede
Posts: 2020/3770 |
Hey guys, just a reminder that all fights will be ending on April 5th, as opposed to March 28th. Due to lack of activity, the fights will last for a month instead of three weeks. Keep on fightin'! |
MetalMan88
Posts: 93/232 |
* Glowing, insane, and filled with the last of his energy, Metal began a speech. *
"The time has come to end this tough battle. To the victor, goes fame and glory. To the loser... well, not much. Our energies are completely balanced at this point, but that is not to be. For now... I shall destroy you with your own energy!"
* Metal suddenly threw the staff, which was now charged with all of his energy. His own field dissipated, and he was blasted back. The damage from that, however, was nothing compared to what happened next. The staff pierced the energy around Sion just a bit... causing the energy field to collapse. A huge explosion, centered around Sion, occurred. This was then added to as the innate magical energies within the staff destabilized and exploded as well, creating a horrific explosion on top of that. Metal had to get up and flee to avoid being immolated by the sheer magical energy. As he ran, the blinding explosion of energy burnt the ground and threw the bits of the ruined battlefield about... an unimaginable amount of energy being discharged in the center. *
"Gahhhh!!!!" |
Super Sion
Posts: 1956/2472 |
Sion slowly rose to his feet, his body seemed fatigued but that incredible Aura still surrounded his body.
Sion: ETERNITY GATE OPEN!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sions body exploded with even more energy. The storm over the Arena also exploded with energy as the rain began to pour even more heavily and the thunder boomed throughout the sky.
In a blast of Speed Sion rushed at Metal stopping just a few feet away from his body. Sion did not stop of his own free will however, the sheer force of thier opposite Auras caused him to stop dead in his tracks as the force fields battled with each other. Sion pushed harder as the friction between the fields sent large shocks of energy in every direction. |
MetalMan88
Posts: 92/232 |
* But all was not as it seemed. Metal stood his ground, taking the onslaught. He was insane, after all, and his life was not meaningful while so much energy flowed in his mind. He took a great many blows, and was bleeding all over; however, he predicted Sion's last incredibly blow before it occurred, stopping it in its tracks with his staff. As Sion was probably amazed by the timing, Metal would begin more rambling. *
"Speed is nothing if foresight is your guide. Let it be shown that you cannot win with overwhelming speed alone!"
* Metal then glowed, swinging wildly. He missed many times, as Sion dodged at high speeds. However, that was when things got unpredictable. At the end of one attack, he made a strange swerve and tripped Sion. It was at this point that the anger surged through Metal's body. *
"The limits of Chakra cannot stop my superior wits. Surrender!"
* At this point, Metal's anger surged through the staff, and he smacked the stunned Sion away. As Sion probably got back on his feet, however, he would find Metal prepared for the next attack, now surrounded by energy. *
"This is your last chance. Surrender now!"
* With that, he concentrated one last bit of energy... the last which he could use for this battle. * |
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