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ETG
Posts: 38/60 |
You still need to adjust the type. Atleast get rid of one of those smears below the 'a' so it dosen't repeat. (add a spill to another letter if you like it, it just looks too cookie cutter for a random grungy mess.) |
Itachi86
Posts: 13/16 |
are you serious???? I tested this layout in IE and firefox, thats not happening to me, I'll take it off right away, and see if i can fix it.  |
Peardian
Posts: 376/1696 |
That looks better, but the f is kinda hard to read. And, Itachi86, your layout just consumed Vyper's post...  |
Kario
Posts: 1381/2082 |
Much better on the first one. The Vash one is still my favorite. |
Vyper
Posts: 51/256 |
Updated!
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Itachi86
Posts: 11/16 |
you should work on your blending for the vash sig. Other than that, good job. |
Peardian
Posts: 374/1696 |
Looks good, but the letters L,A, and D are kinda hard to read. I like donuts... |
ETG
Posts: 37/60 |
Pretty good. The way the finger just comes out of nowhere to hold the donut on the Vash one bothers me. You could convert the text to paths and edit the text in the first one to make it more readable. |
Kario
Posts: 1367/2082 |
Kinda looks like Sharow Elare, but it still looks cool.
Vash one is awesome. |
Tarale
Posts: 1490/2720 |
Not a fan of the Vash one, just cause I don't think I like the way it fades out. Might've been better if you'd just left the extraction complete and found a different way to blend into the background.... |
Vyper
Posts: 50/256 |
Ooooh, that is a nifty font 
I'll experiment another time with different fonts, I'm getting tired 
I just got done with another one, this for a friend.
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Keikonium
Posts: 1015/-2459 |
That looks really good. The L's dont seem bad at all, but the A's don't really look like A's...more like triangles....
I found this one font:
that may look good if you wanted to use it...it can be downloaded Here if you run windows and Here if your running a Mac. |
Vyper
Posts: 49/256 |
Thanks guys, I'll look into a better grunge font. Got any suggestions? |
Itachi86
Posts: 8/16 |
Yea, it looks good. Everything seems to fit in nicely, and I agree, the A's and L's need to be fixed or something. |
windwaker
Posts: 1234/1797 |
That's great, man. The A's and L could be a bit more distinct, though. |
Vyper
Posts: 48/256 |
Ok, I made this yesterday and am looking for some more comments on it. It's supposed to be non-color (hense the name Shadow Flare). I believe I've improved tremendously in this one, and I've gotten some good comment so far.
How is it? |
