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Hiryuu
Posted on 02-20-07 06:21 AM (rev. 2 of 04-17-07 10:10 PM) Link | Quote | ID: 1855

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I mentioned this over on Board1: http://acmlm.no-ip.org/archive3/thread.php?id=9979 LINK UPDATED (4/17)

I just wanted to let people know that there has been progress.

Chapter 14.

For those of you that aren't familiar with it already, the 'here' link goes to all the original chapters.

Hiryuu
Posted on 03-23-07 08:21 AM Link | Quote | ID: 18346

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Just added some more conceptual stuff.

I doubt Kawa (or anyone for that matter) will ever make a game with something this insanely complex, but I just figured I'd add some stuff that could very well be used if I ever get around to writing out 15. Had some ideas but you know...

Anya
Posted on 03-23-07 11:29 AM Link | Quote | ID: 18376


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....ARE YOU SERIOUS? OOps...didn't know I had CAPs on. Anyway...are you serious? That's pretty awesome what you have typed out there.

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Hiryuu
Posted on 03-23-07 03:34 PM Link | Quote | ID: 18399

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Well, that one I've been working on for a little over a year. It's a good start, if nothing else.

Honestly, I really haven't gone far enough for the final portion of it. That'd be V3 if I ever got the time to get it done. Besides, I would hope that he'd have item use in-fighter (like you see sometimes) or else that person will be screewwwwed.

I might get Chapter 15 done one of these days. I've got a gap to bridge coming up to about 18 or 19.

Hiryuu
Posted on 04-11-07 08:28 AM Link | Quote | ID: 25779

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Ironically, I came up with a lot of material in the past month and thanks to the vacation and consultation with another author I think I might have the will and some material to push forth with this coming up here rather soon.

I'll probably see what I can get out in about a week's time. I don't imagine it will be anything too special but I have some things I need to bridge towards and it's getting incredibly difficult writing out something that's going to make sense and keep the readers up and not bored (or, at least, too much).

I swear, the death of the writing in the past two months is killing me. I have an idea of what's going to happen but I have no idea how I want to convey it. I fucking hate WB (not Warner Bros.).

Hiryuu
Posted on 04-17-07 09:30 AM Link | Quote | ID: 27577

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Okay...

Well it definitely turned out differently than I had expected but I think this might lead to some interesting new truths. I had thought I had backed myself into a corner for something I wrote in Chapter 14 but it seems that it just led me to something that I wanted to write anyways.

So instead of being cryptic:

I'll just link you to the 15th chapter.

Hey, you guys actually read this stuff or what?

Anya
Posted on 04-19-07 05:11 PM (rev. 3 of 04-19-07 07:21 PM) Link | Quote | ID: 28015


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......

I was bored, so sue me, and I found this in my little Google search of randomness. Its probably listed in plain site somewhere, but whatever. This is what I am talking about. F'ing funny.

Love the part with Anya and Rain and the whole "hole in the wall" bit.

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Anya (off-screen): “Hey where’s your incredible balance and fighting skills on that one?” lolz

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Rain: “Oh my…Colin…we should meet like this more often.”

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......OMFG........ hahhahaha ------> TJ: “Okay you two c’mon…we’re--OH GOD DON’T DO THAT HERE!!”

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Ooops, got the link wrong...odd, I copied and pasted it as I saw it...hmmm.......


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Hiryuu
Posted on 04-19-07 07:23 PM (rev. 2 of 04-19-07 07:27 PM) Link | Quote | ID: 28028

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Oh wow, that's pre-Element. I forgot I even had that on the server.

I have another one of those FOR Element. Take a look in the link in the first post.

Anya
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Yea, I've been trying to read a bit more, but recently, my attention span has dropped extremely. Its like I want to read, but I just cannot sit still. Its not only with reading though...

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Anya
Posted on 04-21-07 02:58 PM Link | Quote | ID: 28508


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Okay, here is the deal. I've been thinking *shock* and I might get an account over at WordPress and set up a little place for this "saga". Got the idea from the writer's blog thread. I've been reading a bit more on your stuff (like bios and what have you) and I want to finish this damn back story already. All I need is for you to bother the heck out of me so I can do this. I know, I know, I've been talking about doing this for how many years now and I keep putting it off, but, hopefully this time around, it won't be like that. I won't be able to set up the account until Tuesday though (no, I am not putting it off, its that I have to go to work today, Pokemon comes out on Sunday and I have work duty on Monday as well, which would be more Pokemon madness), so if I don't come back here with a link or something on Tuesday, shoot me. You see, my main problem, what's holding me back, is that it feels a bit odd writing about characters that are from someone else. But then again, this is just the back story that I am working on (at least for now) so I really shouldn't have to worry about that. There's a few times when we SF'ed something Ramna-ish and the whole Sofie's kingdom, but I think I can leave that out. And now, I want some pancakes....hmmm.....

Oh and..


*laughs* This is so true:

This script sucks," Anya said flatly.

"How so?"

"Well, it doesn't have a thing about me in it."




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Hiryuu
Posted on 04-21-07 10:09 PM Link | Quote | ID: 28575

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The way I look at it is you end up being the director of what you want to happen. If you can at least stay true, somewhat, to how the characters acted, then you'll be able to pull off a good version of whatever you're trying to accomplish.

That's why when you get a good fanfic author, let's say, that stays true to that, you'll get a lot of reads out of it than someone that doesn't really do that...or that sucks in writing period.

Hiryuu
Posted on 05-06-07 08:08 AM Link | Quote | ID: 33249

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Well, I think I finished up what I wanted to do with the move list. Again, I doubt it ever gets used, but it's a nice little look as to what it could be if it ever was in a fighter...you know with the drama and all for a KOF-like backstory or something.

Hell, I dunno...I'm just bored:

Version 3.0 of movelist

Hiryuu
Posted on 05-21-07 11:04 AM Link | Quote | ID: 37173

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Got through about half of the sixteenth chapter last time. I have a feeling where I want it to draw into with the next few.

I didn't say a few days ago but I did updated that movelist, now 3.01, slightly. There were a few things I needed to change. It's not entirely done yet but it's a good start. I may get Chapter 16 done and out by this week. I'm not sure yet. I've got about 8 or so pages written thus far and I've only got two out of the four things I've wanted to hit on done.

Hiryuu
Posted on 05-27-07 12:06 PM Link | Quote | ID: 38897

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Okay guys...it's been a while, but I did get what I was trying to get done:

Chapter 16.

Sofie
Posted on 06-07-07 07:35 PM Link | Quote | ID: 43302

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Just letting you know I'll read as soon as classes are over o/

Hiryuu
Posted on 06-07-07 10:23 PM Link | Quote | ID: 43351

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Posted by Sofie
Just letting you know I'll read as soon as classes are over o/


All I can say is: HOLY SHIT YOU POSTED ^____________^

Hiryuu
Posted on 06-16-07 07:47 AM Link | Quote | ID: 46041

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Okay guys...just wrote out the outlines for the last story arc. Although it's not much, it encompasses the next three chapters that I'll write out. I may put some time and effort into getting them done, but my goal is to have 17, 18, and 19 out one a week and have this arc taken care of by mid-July.

Sofie
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Reading it right now, and you know I registered just to push you on a bit, right? D;

Hiryuu
Posted on 06-18-07 06:58 AM Link | Quote | ID: 46484

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Yes.

Very yes.

Hiryuu
Posted on 06-22-07 08:36 AM Link | Quote | ID: 47821

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Got five pages in on the next chapter. I'm hoping to get a chapter out each Sunday in the next several weeks. That's the goal, if nothing else. Not really sure I can do it and make it coherent enough.
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