A Kingrayon's Tale + download (Last updated 5/5/2012)

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Scrydan

Posted on 05-05-12 07:25 AM (rev. 2 of 05-05-12 07:26 AM)

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It has been awhile since I actually updated the download but it should be updated in a week or so.

A Kingrayon's Tale is a short story off of my main big trilogy called Dimension Project. Kingrayons are the focus of the story. Sara is one of the main characters who used to have a normal life in 2077 until disaster came and took her literally to another world. And she has been changed forever - literally as a Kingrayon. A humanoid experiment that combines several DNA of random creatures into one creature of extreme power. Through the use of Powernite, they have the ability to manipulate matter and dimensions. Giving them the power to shape shift into different creatures.

I'll edit this thread with more details. Should you be interested in a futuristic science fiction that is well worth a good read, click here and enjoy!
Here is the original thread over at SMWC. Much more detailed.

I also have another story which is the main book but that's even older and I want to update it again before releasing any download for it. Unless you want to request it then you can PM me here. Enjoy!

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Posted on 06-05-12 05:28 PM

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Posted by Scrydan
It has been awhile since I actually updated the download but it should be updated in a week or so.

A Kingrayon's Tale is a short story off of my main big trilogy called Dimension Project. Kingrayons are the focus of the story. Sara is one of the main characters who used to have a normal life in 2077 until disaster came and took her literally to another world. And she has been changed forever - literally as a Kingrayon. A humanoid experiment that combines several DNA of random creatures into one creature of extreme power. Through the use of Powernite, they have the ability to manipulate matter and dimensions. Giving them the power to shape shift into different creatures.

I'll edit this thread with more details. Should you be interested in a futuristic science fiction that is well worth a good read, click here and enjoy!
Here is the original thread over at SMWC. Much more detailed.

I also have another story which is the main book but that's even older and I want to update it again before releasing any download for it. Unless you want to request it then you can PM me here. Enjoy!

So far I like your writing of this, my only critique is this.
Try not to stay to focused on the main character so much, and start to take the story in a different path with other playing roles.

Your writing seems that of R.L stine books a little which is a good way to start off from.

Mystery first, next the drama, followed up by a lie is which is what I am sensing out of this.

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