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Since: 04-10-10
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I wrote this hell a long time ago. Never got to finish it, But I want someone to fix the errors I made (prolly alot)
And it went like this.
Appearing in a land, where a big gate is placed with a lot of chains inside your own imagination...? I later see the chains break, opening the gate. The mist coming outside of the door engulf the area, until I don't see anything. My visibility lowered to zero froze me in thought, yet a certain feeling taking over my body seem to force me on stepping forward. It soon began turning dark, until I saw absolutely nothing, not even my own hands. My consciousness was wavering, and I could not hang on much longer. Of course I awaken later, but upon opening my eyes, I saw various gears. Ones were floating in the air, and some were attached to steel bars. Some were whole, and some were cracked, or missing chunks of metal. I stood up and looked upon the ground. Apparently I was standing on a golden platform, and in front of me was a great bronze gear impaling the platform. The gear was enormous enough to reach the height four times of mine. I walked over and examined the gear. It seemed to have claw markings on it. I dazed on the markings in shock, thinking that a monster with unimaginable strength exists in this realm. I looked around the place nervously trying to find an exit, yet I found none. Thus I decided to walk around the platform. I later found other platforms, so I decided to jump trough a few. I reached a dead end. I looked back towards where the previous platforms were, but there were surprisingly none. I also noticed that, the platform I stood on began to crumble. Upon noticing that I abruptly stood towards the center of the platform, frozen in shock. I could not even speak out anything because of my own fear of death upon. Soon I fell. Watching as I fall towards the ground, have made me think of every bad thing I have made. I soon closed my eyes, thinking this is the end. Minutes pass, and I began to think if I am still falling. I opened my eyes, to see that I am floating just above the ground..
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