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CaptainEagle
Posted on 12-11-08 06:44 AM Link | Quote | ID: 96504


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Short simple poem i wrote last year for english.


The grass is green
The sky is blue
The water gives a bright sheen
My only desire is to be with you

I could have stopped it
Sacrificed my life
But i was afraid
afraid of getting hit

Why now?
Why today?
How?
The answer is grey

But its all over now
It had to end sometime
it was just so soon
i just have to ask: How?

SHUT UP I SUCK AT GRAMMAR




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Xeruss
Posted on 12-12-08 01:40 AM Link | Quote | ID: 96606


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You'd have to help me interpret it, cause frankly all I see are a bunch of scattered sentence fragments that don't really pull the poem any one direction. I'd also recommend changing the word "grey" to "gray", in the interest of making things appear more rhythmic.

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deshaun182
Posted on 06-30-10 06:42 PM Link | Quote | ID: 132530


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Ohh i rofled Soo hard. But i like it

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