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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 218/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Goomba Level: 12 Posts: 17/21 EXP: 7521 Next: 400 Since: 07-08-07 Last post: 5981 days Last view: 4824 days |
That was extremely funny, I'd think of some constructive criticism if I could could think of something bad about it Hopefully you'll make more!
EDIT: I know it sounds like I'm the worlds biggest kiss-ass but I do really think it's good! |
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Panser DOOM FOR VON DOOM Level: 42 Posts: 161/343 EXP: 502001 Next: 19361 Since: 02-21-07 Last post: 5485 days Last view: 5483 days |
I'll complement freakishblob
-Not funny, the only "joke" is that the author of this sprite comic can't put together a story and the main character is calling him on it !!!!!! I haven't seen that before -The custom sprite is a) a megaman edit and b) an ugly one -It's a sprite comic -The fourth panel is especially hideous, aside from the skewed imported graphics the setting is made up of like five lines with solid color between them Basically it's not funny or original and it doesn't look like much effort or creative thought went into it. The only things it has going for it vs. the other 80000 sprite comics on the internet are that it's legible and literate and you can see what order the speech bubbles go in. ____________________ |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 219/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Panser DOOM FOR VON DOOM Level: 42 Posts: 164/343 EXP: 502001 Next: 19361 Since: 02-21-07 Last post: 5485 days Last view: 5483 days |
Well I can see you're putting more effort into the visuals, but a sprite comic with decent visuals is still below the level of stick figure comics. The dialogue is still following the standard trajectory for sprite comics. Here's a tip! Self-deprecation doesn't make it ok. The fact that you point out the flaws in the comic doesn't fix them. If you can't come up with an interesting story, don't make a story about your inability to come up with a story, because that's been done five billion times!! ____________________ |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 220/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
Actually, the comic is exactly what I intended.
I chose to make a sprite comic. Why? Because it sucks. I chose to have not have any plot. Why? Because it sucks. I chose to point out the flaws and break the fourth wall all the time. Why? Because it sucks. I could make a comic with good drawings and a good plot if I wanted to, but I chose to make it like this. If that makes my comic suck, then may it suck. ____________________ |
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Goomba Level: 12 Posts: 18/21 EXP: 7521 Next: 400 Since: 07-08-07 Last post: 5981 days Last view: 4824 days |
Even though it's apparently supposed to be terrible, I can't help but like it!
It's got that kind of "So bad it's good" charm to it |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 221/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Cape Luigi Level: 131 Posts: 2007/4792 EXP: 26170051 Next: 254569 Since: 03-15-07 Last post: 3706 days Last view: 3618 days |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 223/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Red Goomba Level: 16 Posts: 8/40 EXP: 19834 Next: 422 Since: 05-30-07 Last post: 4918 days Last view: 4918 days |
Okay, you're making this funnier and funnier.... Keep it up! ____________________ MKWII Rating: 9999 VR 3 Stars |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 224/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Panser DOOM FOR VON DOOM Level: 42 Posts: 165/343 EXP: 502001 Next: 19361 Since: 02-21-07 Last post: 5485 days Last view: 5483 days |
Posted by Smallhacker NSNick already called you out on this one, but come on. This is complete bullshit until you back it up. Why would you create an intentionally shitty comic if you could create a good one? There're already plenty of shitty comics on the internet. We don't need more. It seems more likely you know you'll get praise from people like "freakishblob" and "Scion" and you can cover your ass in the case of actual criticism by claiming it's supposed to be bad. That's some pussy shit. If you want to put something you created out in public, have some pride in it. ____________________ |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 226/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Haha, I really like these. |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 228/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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Panser Swedish weirdo times eleven Level: 42 Posts: 231/339 EXP: 493349 Next: 28013 Since: 02-19-07 From: Stockholm, Sweden Last post: 5156 days Last view: 5155 days |
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