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Luigi-San Ptooie ZOMG Wii is teh pwn                   Since: 11-18-05 From: The Mushroom Kingdom a.k.a Buffalo, NY Wii: Yes Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| Just a poem I made for English class last year....
Don't know what Mighty Taco is? Wikipedia is your friend WARNING: This poem bashes Taco Oh, Mighty Taco, How I love you so There's just no better place to go You are so much better than Taco Bell A place I consider just like hell Mightys to El Ninos, everything is a must It leaves the competition in the dust You guys never stop, never take a nap Unlike those guys with that stupid Crunchwrap Gorditas, Chalupas, keep them away 'Cause Taco Bell, I wouldn't pay 'Cause Mighty Taco, It just can't be beat What happened to the Chihuahua, did you use him for meat? Taco Bell, you're going down 'Cause Mighty's the best taco place in town And I guess it's time for me to tell Mighty's the only taco that rings my bell! |
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Silvershield   580  Since: 11-19-05 From: Emerson, New Jersey Last post: 6308 days Last view: 6296 days |
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Well, until a Mighty Taco pops up in North Jersey, I'll be content with my Taco Bell  .
I don't want to take this poem too seriously and give you any sort of grave critique of it, but I thought I might just make a quick remark or two. Line 4 is awkwardly phrased - it's a consequence of the rhythm of the poem, I know, but you might be able to rework it in some way to make it sound better. Line 6 sounds like it has too few syllables to me. Same with Line 13. Overall though, it's clever. Some good turns of phrase and witty lines, even if it's just a quick, light poem. The last line is especially fun, I think. |
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Uki-Ki-rby Poppy Bros. Jr   Since: 01-27-07 From: New York City Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6296 days |
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| hehe ANYTHINGS better than taco bell till they get over that E.Coli business there with the green onions I myself prefer Taco Bueno hehe |
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