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Yoshi_Fanboy
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Posted on 12-24-06 12:41 AM Link | Quote
I've been making comics and putting them on my website for a while, then I found this site, particurally comics that go together. So, I'm making comics here too now!
Here is my first in a new series, Take Me Out To The Ball Game.
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Posted on 12-24-06 12:42 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Yoshi_Fanboy
I've been making comics and putting them on my website for a while, then I found this site, particurally comics that go together. So, I'm making comics here too now!
Here is my first in a new series, Take Me Out To The Ball Game.
Yeah, that. That sure is a picture. A comical picture.
Yoshi_Fanboy
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Posted on 12-24-06 12:56 AM Link | Quote
Well how do you post a picture? When I made the thread, it had a little thing at the bottom that had a Browse button and I THOUGHT it would just post the picture. Please help!


(edited by Yoshi_Fanboy on 12-23-06 07:14 PM)
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Posted on 12-24-06 04:01 AM Link | Quote
The attachment thing doesn't usually work right for me, so I use Imageshack.
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Posted on 12-24-06 04:43 AM Link | Quote


Did it work?

PHOOIE!

And I know it's kinda stupid but give me a break! I am only 11!


(edited by Yoshi_Fanboy on 12-23-06 11:10 PM)
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Since: 11-18-05
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Posted on 12-24-06 04:52 AM Link | Quote
You want to copy the address of the picture, not the web page. the picture's address is http://wildworld-crossing.lenzus.com/content/40176065/97915522.jpg I'm not sure if they allow hotlinking or not
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Since: 11-17-05
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Posted on 12-24-06 04:52 AM Link | Quote
It would be http://wildworld-crossing.lenzus.com/content/40176065/97915522.jpg (assuming they allow hotlinking - I'd have hosted it on tinypic).

Also, this is neither funny nor interesting. What is supposed to be funny or interesting about this?


(edited by Emperor Dalek on 12-23-06 10:53 PM)
Yoshi_Fanboy
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I know it's kinda stupid, but give me a break! I'm 11!

More(hopefully, funnier)comics will follow.

And also, if you are worried wildworld-crossing.lenzus.com has a problem with this link, I am the owner of wildworld-crossing.com(THANX LENZUS!!!)

And IF 1 of you actually complements my comics, these are not my sprites. They belong to Tonberry2K on www.psyguy.com. The sprite sheet says "If used please give credit", so I did.


(edited by Yoshi_Fanboy on 12-23-06 11:18 PM)
(edited by Yoshi_Fanboy on 12-23-06 11:55 PM)
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Posted on 12-24-06 05:49 AM Link | Quote
*sigh* As many others have already said on this board - age doesn't matter.

And ... it .. doesn't even make sense May I suggest any of the following?

a) Background
b) Don't make your panels different sizes
c) Make it easy to tell whos talking



(edited by S.N.N. on 12-23-06 11:50 PM)
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Posted on 12-24-06 05:54 AM Link | Quote
Some Points.

There are plenty of tutorials how to do a good sprite comic on the internet.

Some points.

-backgrounds
-text bubbles
-Storyline
-LOGIC?

Also like quite a few people say, age does not matter, if you as a person feel that you are two "young" to make a sprite comic then don't. Do not expect people to go easy on you because of your age.



Also last thing, change what sprites you use per frame. That comic says to me "5 second run through lol".


(edited by Darkdata on 12-31-06 11:28 AM)
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Posted on 12-24-06 06:10 AM Link | Quote
I am not good at shading, so I don't know about background. I'll give it a shot though.

I have used colored words to show who's talking for a while, partially to save room, but I think I'll add connecting lines from the words to the speaker as well.

And as for storyline and logic, I don't know a thing about baseball, "Take me out to the ballgame" was just the first thing that came to mind. I think I'll quit this comic set. But I'll be back(and I'll do my best to actually have funny comics).

BTW, when I said I saw some comics in a set, how do I say this?
"Kamek's Revenge" I really like the comic! I think it should continue!
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Since: 11-18-05
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Posted on 12-24-06 06:51 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Emperor Dalek
It would be http://wildworld-crossing.lenzus.com/content/40176065/97915522.jpg (assuming they allow hotlinking - I'd have hosted it on tinypic).

Also, this is neither funny nor interesting. What is supposed to be funny or interesting about this?


Hey alastor welcome to five seconds ago
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Posted on 12-24-06 06:53 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Yoshi_Fanboy
BTW, when I said I saw some comics in a set, how do I say this? "Kamek's Revenge" I really like the comic! I think it should continue!


Thanks, but it won't. Not for a very, very, very long time

And for backgrounds - you don't need to be good at shading. Just rip a BG from a game and paste it or something like that. It isn't difficult.
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Posted on 12-24-06 07:19 AM Link | Quote
Well, the background isn't THAT good, but you know what they say. "When you fall off your horse, you gotta get right back on it." I'm already working on my new comic. BUT I AM GOING TO PUT MORE EFFORT INTO IT THAN THAT LAST 1!
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Posted on 12-31-06 12:52 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Yoshi_Fanboy
I know it's kinda stupid, but give me a break! I'm 11!



Haha, that cry sounds all too familiar. I feel like 2005 again.

Nobody cares what your age is, most expectations remain the same.

And guessing by your random appearance, they were quite low. If you know it isn't good, don't release it until you think it's good.

At least you give credit.


(edited by Riku on 12-30-06 06:57 PM)
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