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Clockworkz

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Since: 11-18-05

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Posted on 10-29-06 05:44 PM Link | Quote
Straightforward and to the point.
Good.

Done 1 week ago:
Keira, a character from Innocence Gone
Combative Francine, posing

Done just now:
Kevin is too sexy for his shirt. Actually, I think his muscles destroyed it, but whatever.
OMG I drew Shojo Style. What the fuck.

I want attention.
Thank you.



(edited by Clockworkz on 10-29-06 04:46 PM)
(edited by Clockworkz on 10-29-06 05:04 PM)
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Since: 11-18-05
From: Pittsburgh

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Posted on 10-29-06 10:17 PM Link | Quote
kevin needs a new pair of shoulders, and a thicker head for all that bulk. His right forearm seems oddly shaped and muscles overall seem to need some workings

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I kinda scribbled over one of your drawings, it's kinda hard scribbling with a mouse, it's obviously not perfect in any form of the word, but maybe it could help with some flaws I seen? I'm no anatomy expert. (god theres that dreaded word again) and plus that brush-tool can get abit jumpy on me

yeah.

you're welcome.
Clockworkz

Birdon


 





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Posted on 10-29-06 10:46 PM Link | Quote
Actually, Francine's thumb is tucked uner her fingers. That's what I inferred from the reference I used.
And Kevin's proportions are exaggerated as part of "omg ridiculously shonen styled man" proportions.
Thanks for the crit, setz; I'll use it to my advantage
Jilkon

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Since: 11-27-05
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Posted on 10-30-06 08:13 AM Link | Quote
I really wouldn't call that shoujo style, it looks fairly shounen. Shoujo is more along the lines of.. say.. this. On a related note, the title of that manga is disturbing.


(edited by Jilkon on 10-30-06 07:14 AM)
Cruel Justice
I have better things to do.


 





Since: 11-18-05
From: At my house!

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Posted on 10-30-06 11:01 AM Link | Quote
They aren't refined quite yet. Don't be afraid to trace over your existing drawings or pen them in photoshop.

Remember what you need to do with lines.

Thickest lines - Outer form
Thick lines - Significant parts
Thinnest lines - Minor details/hair

Really, your compositions are great but you need to polish them man!!!
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