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Kattwah Acro RIP Acmlm's Board: Feb. 18 2007                    Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| I only have one thing to say...
This... is not going to end well  |
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S.N.N. wtf  Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| That was quick
@Tristis: Well, I can't really tell you if it gets messed up, but I'll assure you it won't be what you expected @Peardian: Pink shy-guys never feel the 
@mynameisbob: Oh, I have something extra special planned for the Chomps, don't worry
@Danielle: After reading this post, I suddenly got a deliciously evil idea for the Chomps .... 
@KATW: Or will it? #10 will be up soon, been working at it, but making the copter effects is tough  |
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quaker3332 Micro-Goomba Since: 03-04-06 Last post: 6360 days Last view: 6302 days |
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| *Posts for the sake of supporting YIKR*
Keep them coming, please.  |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Thanks
Here's #10: 
He's not a very smart one ...
The next time you see the Shy-Guys, they fly, but as for next issue, I have a little treat for you fans who have been waiting ...  |
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The Red Snifit Ropa  Since: 03-05-06 From: Here Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Now will it be fuuny?
It's taking a while.  |
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ZTaimat  260  Since: 11-19-05 Last post: 6366 days Last view: 6300 days |
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| family guy reference |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Originally posted by The Red Snifit How funny do you want it to be though? I mean, I've been more focused on a plot, while throwing in random elements of humour...I tried random funny before and it sucked. I don't really know what else you're expecting of me ...  |
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Shadic The Adventure of Link Perfect Member Since: 11-18-05 From: Olympia, Washington Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6302 days |
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I got bored, so I decided to play around and spent 20 seconds attempting to clean up that splash panel from a few comics back:
And one other problem: The staircase in comic 4 shortens mid-comic. I may be the only person to realize it, but I caught on the second I saw the panel. Aside from that, these aren't bad. Seems like the starter comics for some of the old, big comics before everybody started reading them. I would say, clean up the text boxes or something, because they still look a bit primative. And I enjoy the facial exp |
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Darkdata 980  Since: 02-25-06 From: Newfoundland Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Your comics are a good start. Everything improves with practice.
Aside from that, these aren't bad. Seems like the starter comics for some of the old, big comics before everybody started reading them. I would say, clean up the text boxes or something, because they still look a bit primative. And I enjoy the facial exp I agree with above. S.N.N You might have a bigger fan following
Your comics are funny but improve, improvise, maake the pink shyguy the mascot.(Like onion Kid.) (Who has the comics saved to their computer?) (edited by Darkdata on 07-07-06 07:16 PM) |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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@Shadic: I never really got the text boxes looking how I would have liked them to, I just sort of made them like that for now, until I could find a better replacement. I don't want to alter them too much, as is would look a bit strange having them change every comic, but I'll do my best to fix them up somehow. I never noticed the staircase issue, but thanks for pointing it out to me  Facial exp
@Darkdata: The pink shy-guy IS the mascot it was sort of intended that he would be the one to be unlucky in everything, and screwing everything up, and from there on ... I sorta made him like that
Thanks for the constructive feedback guys, it's much appreciated |
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Shadic The Adventure of Link Perfect Member Since: 11-18-05 From: Olympia, Washington Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6302 days |
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Here was me playing around with the default paint tools to make a better speech bubble:
I've comiced myself, and I must say the the "Lines connecting character and speech bubble" that you use in your comic are one of the biggest stylistic downfalls for newer-comic makers. |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Actually I do in fact like that text bubble better. I'll have to play around with those tools and make one like that, but didn't want to completely copy Hmmm....
Gotta tweak some things up before I release the next comic |
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Shadic The Adventure of Link Perfect Member Since: 11-18-05 From: Olympia, Washington Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6302 days |
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| Well, just to let you know, those speech bubbles are completely free for you to copy.
It was just me looking at the style you had, the style that I like to use, and finding a middle ground between the two. The speech bubbles that I make are in photoshop anyways, but something that looks like that is what I do when I'm in paint for some reason or another. |
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Danielle  6730 Administratorrrr HELLO THERE   Since: 11-17-05 From: California Rate me ^_^ Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| I thought they'd be flying in this panel
Chop chop, I want to see how this Shyguy-copter works. |
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The Red Snifit Ropa Since: 03-05-06 From: Here Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| I suspect that this will be funny in the next one.
I didn't want to sound mean on that last comment, I just wanted funny. |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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I think some of you folks may have not read my comment for this issue:
Originally posted by S.N.N. See what I mean now!: 
Introductions don't ALWAYS have to be pleasant
The Shy-Copter FLIES in the next YIKR (edited by S.N.N. on 07-11-06 12:18 PM) |
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The Red Snifit Ropa Since: 03-05-06 From: Here Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Yay! Yoshi!
And, I found something... according to Issue 1 they are late by a whole day. |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6304 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Originally posted by The Red Snifit Exactly. It was dawn when they were forming the Shy-Copter, which was when they were supposed to be attacking Yoshi. But now it's in the middle of the night, and they still aren't there... |
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Ninetales banned by request Since: 11-17-05 From: Gone. Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| These comics are pretty good, especially the last one.
I think it might have been funnier if it had been one of those talking message blocks from YI talking instead of just a yellow box, but that's just me. |
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Danielle 6730 Administratorrrr HELLO THERE Since: 11-17-05 From: California Rate me ^_^ Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Yoshi looks like a cone head in that hat.
That was cute, but I'm still waiting the copter... |
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