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S.N.N. wtf                    Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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I had this sudden urge to make a series of comics, so...I started  This is my first comic...ever, so hopefully it's half-decent and whatnot.
Gotta love swap switches, huh? Any comments, anything I could improve on? (edited by S.N.N. on 06-17-06 09:52 PM) |
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Luigi-San Ptooie ZOMG Wii is teh pwn Since: 11-18-05 From: The Mushroom Kingdom a.k.a Buffalo, NY Wii: Yes Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Haha, nice! The Shy Guy launching the Toady to who knows where is hilarious. | |||
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Alastor Fearless Moderator Hero  Since: 11-17-05 From: An apartment by DigiPen, Redmond, Washington Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| It's not funny.
It's just... Eh. It looks like every other ameteur comic around here. It needs to be funny. Okay, sure it's better than Ansem's comic, but... Eh... Also, it needs to not stretch the tables in 1024x768. (edited by Alastor the Stylish on 06-17-06 09:26 PM) |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by Alastor the Stylish I understand that. But then, I know it takes a lot to make you laugh, so yeah
Of course, it is just the first comic ... I'm sure I can think of some better jokes in the future 
(and yeah, I noticed it stretches after I posted  )(edited by S.N.N. on 06-17-06 09:28 PM) (edited by S.N.N. on 06-17-06 09:37 PM) (edited by S.N.N. on 06-17-06 09:52 PM) |
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SqueakyReaper Mumbies  Since: 05-17-06 From: In a comphy, yet lonely, cell with white walls. Last post: 6505 days Last view: 6315 days |
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| Well, 'tis okay. But shy-guys rule, so its potentially good. PLEASE KEEP MARIO OUT OF YOUR COMIC! He makes me sick. And no yoshi-kirby mix-up. Its awesome, but used already. | |||
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| I didn't plan on using Kirby...just Yoshi and Baby Mario for now
Here's the second one....hopefully better than the first. 
Flowers = drugs ...comments? |
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Alastor Fearless Moderator Hero Since: 11-17-05 From: An apartment by DigiPen, Redmond, Washington Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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That joke would be MUCH better with a fuzzy and with no explanatory comment. It's alright, but that would just... Yeah. |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by Alastor the Stylish Well, I guess that's a step-up from my first, so thanks  I guess you're right about the fuzzy too...I was considering putting some in later, but now that I look at it, it would have fit in well there...
EDIT: Alright, here's the 3rd one. 
Damn sprite interaction
(P.S. that's my new permanent font, I swear )(edited by S.N.N. on 06-18-06 11:40 AM) |
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Omega Mole  Since: 04-27-06 From: Los Angeles,CA Last post: 6301 days Last view: 6297 days |
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I don't want to sound mean but,it wasn't really funny I mean you're other ones were funny but,this one made no sense.Ok,so,a shy guy falls and lands on a balloon big deal.Not your best work S.N.N but I did like the first one I thought it was funnyXD! |
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Kingpin Since: 11-21-05 From: Amarillo, TX Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| I completely disagree with Mr Juarez. That was the funniest one so far. my suggestion, don't make a comment on your own comic right afterwards unless its "to be continued...." or something. It seems like "Damn Sprite Interaction" was supposed to make the comic funnier, when it did no such thing. | |||
The Red Snifit Ropa  Since: 03-05-06 From: Here Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| I have advice,
When it's night (like you first comic), Don't make the borders black.
Otherwise, it looks good. (But you could work on your funniness.) |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by Kario Nah, not really trying to make it funnier, just sort of a finishing comment. I do see your point though, and I will take that advice. @Snifit: Good point on the borders...glad you like it
I'll post #4 in a while |
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Alastor Fearless Moderator Hero Since: 11-17-05 From: An apartment by DigiPen, Redmond, Washington Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| I agree with Juarez. Where is the source of humor? A bunch of random things that happen rarely work. It just makes no sense.
Don't make me start posting my comics again. |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by Alastor the Stylish I....wasn't really trying to make it random. Nor am I trying to make every single panel a laugh-your-ass-off sensation. I was mainly just trying to make it entertaining, like the other comics on the board do. If I fail at it, I'll stop. I was just doing it out of fun |
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Alastor Fearless Moderator Hero Since: 11-17-05 From: An apartment by DigiPen, Redmond, Washington Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| Eh. It has potential. It doesn't need to be really funny or anything, but... Eh. There's nothing really interesting here |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by Alastor the Stylish Well, considering you're one of the more intelligent members of the board, do you really think I should continue and try to shape up some things, or call it quits? As I said earlier, I was mainly doing it for fun. I won't really get offended or anything |
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Danielle     6730 Administratorrrr HELLO THERE   Since: 11-17-05 From: California Rate me ^_^ Last post: 6298 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| While they may not be the funniest comics I've seen, they are far from the worst, and I think you have a lot of room for improvement if you make the effort. And I know that you're an intelligent member of the board, and WILL make the effort, so I say keep going.
Just work on your jokes, keep it looking clean, and make sure you have a plot that will last, because making random comments with no storyline aren't very good. |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by Danielle Thanks, I appreciate it  ...I'll try my best at making it better, because now that I actually reread over #3, I realize how stupid the balloon joke actually is
I gave another shot at it, and I'm actually pretty proud of the results this time, so here's #4: 
Yoshi better get his guard up...he has a whole bunch of crazy Shy-Guys coming his way. But will they make the jump ok?
yes (edited by S.N.N. on 06-18-06 05:16 PM) |
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fabio Ameboid  Since: 11-17-05 From: Texas Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Our worst time yet... Now, I wonder where I heard that one before? _¬ Hint: Super Mario RPG. Sergeant Flutter and his troops said that |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6303 days Last view: 6297 days |
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Originally posted by fabio Damn you, I didn't think anyone would get that reference (edited by S.N.N. on 06-18-06 05:49 PM) (edited by S.N.N. on 06-18-06 05:49 PM) |
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