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| Acmlm's Board - I3 Archive - Modern Art - My first sprite comic: Link and the great journey.(Stupid name) |
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman                   Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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| This is my first ever sprite comic, so please show me a little sympothy and please post all you can, to help me I need it.
Part 1: The joureny begins 
I will post more later when I get replies. (edited by Ansem on 05-28-06 11:39 PM) |
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Riku Sledge Brother Unpredictable. Watch your backs. Or not. Whichever. I want Metal Gear Solid 4 so badly.   Since: 11-17-05 From: Tompkinsville Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Nice graphics.  Err.
Fix up the grammer and the text boxes and it'll look better and less... N00Bish. |
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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Thanks, Riku here is some more of part 1 enjoy(hopefully).
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Pasgeti_;   560  Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6338 days Last view: 6309 days |
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| The last panel should have been "How do i look"
"My eyes the goggles do nothing!!!!" |
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Peardian N-Z KvSG #193 is up!  Since: 11-17-05 From: Pearl Island Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| The grammar needs a little more fixing (run-on sentences), but otherwise it's pretty good. The panels are kinda big, though. | |||
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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| I don't know if anyone saw this, but the Link in the first panel is diffrent then all the rest. | |||
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Peardian N-Z KvSG #193 is up! Since: 11-17-05 From: Pearl Island Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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 I never noticed that... Don't I feel silly.  |
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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Here is another part that just got finished about a minute ago.  Good thing nobody hadn't noticed it yet. That I know of.
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Riku Sledge Brother Unpredictable. Watch your backs. Or not. Whichever. I want Metal Gear Solid 4 so badly. Since: 11-17-05 From: Tompkinsville Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Awesome sword. |
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Peardian N-Z KvSG #193 is up! Since: 11-17-05 From: Pearl Island Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Just curious, but who is the other guy? He looks... hairy.  |
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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| The guy with the Red hair is Tyjet...it said that earlier..
Here is the begining of part 2 Part 2: Deku and the octorock soldiers.  (edited by Ansem on 05-29-06 07:23 PM) |
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Peardian N-Z KvSG #193 is up! Since: 11-17-05 From: Pearl Island Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Oh.  Didn't see that. Sorry.
Now the plot thickens! |
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Cirvania Cyball I guess this is as close as Xkeeper will get to spell it right. :< Since: 11-17-05 From: The Island of Puerto Rico. Last post: 6301 days Last view: 6299 days |
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Nice 
And the neo cyber-punk Link owns. |
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Riku Sledge Brother Unpredictable. Watch your backs. Or not. Whichever. I want Metal Gear Solid 4 so badly. Since: 11-17-05 From: Tompkinsville Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| I think its a little hard to navigate the text. If you can put what they say closest to the top, it should be better. | |||
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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| I'l try to put what they say in order. |
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Riku Sledge Brother Unpredictable. Watch your backs. Or not. Whichever. I want Metal Gear Solid 4 so badly. Since: 11-17-05 From: Tompkinsville Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Can't wait for the next part. |
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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Well, here you go. The next part of part 2
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Sukasa Birdo Not quite as active as before. Xkeeper supporter Xk > ||bass I IP Banned myself! Twice!  Since: 11-17-05 From: Somewhere over there Last post: 6300 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| Nice new Megaman edit, Ansem. It's kinda hard to place now (the feet and unedited face section gave it away.)
Perhaps you should work on your text boxes a bit, with those that come first being higher than those which come after them. |
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Lord SkyLart Cukeman Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6348 days Last view: 6348 days |
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Here is another part of part 2. Please enjoy and post all comments.
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Riku Sledge Brother Unpredictable. Watch your backs. Or not. Whichever. I want Metal Gear Solid 4 so badly. Since: 11-17-05 From: Tompkinsville Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6299 days |
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| How did they get out of the base? Because we met with Deku and now you're suddenly hanging out in the street. |
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