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Kirbynite

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Posted on 05-20-06 03:23 AM Link | Quote
Well.. finally decided to revive this thing... I hope there'll be some activity..

The setting of this story is the modern SF universe (Uh.. I guess it'd be like.. SF 2007 or 2008.. It's still being debated over)

A lot has happened since the beginning of the tale. Danielle, Queen of the floating kingdom of Zeal, decided to stir up some excitement in the nearest city, located at ground level of course. The cause for this was just extreme boredom. Her magnificent Mewtwo was away, dealing with some business. Birdo was probably out flirtting with Yoshi. Schala... well, she's been missing for a few years now.

Meanwhile, Kirbynite, who was in his human form at the moment, received a letter from Schala:


Originally posted by Schala Zeal
My dearest Kirbynite,
It's been ages, hasn't it? We must do some catching up. Perhaps we can do that over some treasure hunting, yes? With this letter is a box that I placed a mystical treasure map that will guide us to treasure and to each other. You will come and help me hunt for the treasure, of course, won't you? I'll meet you at Rogueport. (That means you MUST come!)
Yours truly,
Schala Zeal



Unknown to Kirby, the letter was actually faked by Dani. She needed someone with a pure heart to open up a treasure box, and since Kirby was the purest one she knew of that was gullible...

Unfortunately for Danielle, was caught off guard by a peddler, and was drained of her mana and captured. She was brought into a secret base, run by a group called the X-Nauts. Gim-like robots were running all around the place, and the man behind it was non-other than Melvin's arch nemesis, Edgar. Well, I don't know if they still are rivals..

Meanwhile, Kirbynite meets up with Melvin, Smithy, Fem, and a slew of others. One thing led to another, and everyone was drawn into a quest to look for Star Stones (which were the only reason why Kirby was on the quest since those were his only clues to meeting Schala again after so long), pointed out by the map Kirby had obtained from the box Dani had sent him.

After a little trip through the sewers, everyone appeared in Fungeria, and eventually fought a wicked dragon to rescue Jack's dad. It was a fierce battle, but with everyone's combined strengths proved to be more than a match for the arrogant dragon. Kirby was wounded badly, but that didn't stop him from using all of his rage and rushing into the dragon's belly, and basically punching out the Star Stone that was inside of Hooktail's stomach.

Father and son were reunited, and Grey somehow learned Earth Tremor after yoinking the Star Stone.

At the same time, Danielle became acquainted with the computer AI system at the X-Naut base, ROB. After an awkward trade of words, Dani was able to send a message to Kirbynite, though she was still using the guise of Schala... ROB sent the message immediately, but for some reason, the message was taking a very long time in being received by Kirbynite...

Meanwhile, Mewtwo was summoned by Birdo, and informed of Kirby's exploits. Mewtwo didn't care too much until Birdo finally told him that Dani was captured. Mewtwo, obvioiusly enraged, took off in search for Dani.

Kirby and company found themselves in a land filled with a monocrhomatic layout. The trees, grass, rivers, everything was in black and white. They were definitely standing out, and were barely noticed by a trio of ninjas, calling themselves the Shinobi Sirens. After a quick scuffle, the ninjas ran away. The group of adventurers continued forward, led by two small creatures, named Punio and Piki, both Punis.

The Boggly Tree, home to the Puni creatures, was taken over by X-Nauts. It didn't take much for the heroes to dispose of the X-Nauts, as well as finding the two responsible for taking over the tree. A puni by the name of PLICK, and a strangely familar person going by the name of "Crump". Crump had attacked the heroes with a large mech, but eventually was taken care of.


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Kirby collapsed onto his rear, still panting very hard. His hands were still covered with glass from his attempt to punch through the cockpit of the mech. His hearing was slowly coming back to him, but he couldn't make out what anyone was saying.

Crump had managed to run away... as for PLICK...





(edited by Brixikyent on 05-20-06 02:23 AM)
(edited by Brixikyent on 05-20-06 02:27 AM)
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Posted on 05-20-06 03:35 AM Link | Quote
PLICK: Wait! Pimon says to give me a break! What's happening?... All my evil power is gone!

Fem: (What power? We took him out with one kick. )

PLICK: Even when we were friends, you were always too good, Punio. I despise you.

Punio: Feeling's mutual.

PLICK: You haven't seen the last of me! I'll be back, and I won't forget this!

PLICK turned around to scurry out of a small hole in the back of the room, only to be confronted by Piki, who took out the evil Puni with one punch (Or was it a kick? It's hard to tell with these things).

Thanks to Punio, Piki, and our heroes, that was the end of the evil PLICK!


Fem: (No it isn't, he's only unconsious )

The gangs returned to class and became honor Punis.

Pami was rescued in time to finish her shopping.

Yes... all was once again peaceful in the Boggly Tree.
Skydude

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Posted on 05-20-06 04:08 AM Link | Quote
I would just like to let it be known that I am boycotting this story because it purports to tell what I consider to be a false SF history.
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!!








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Posted on 05-20-06 04:09 AM Link | Quote
((Your characters are not referenced in the story, so you're not affected ))

Birdo - Oooh! You should really try out the Mega 'Shrooms!

Mewtwo - ~... No thank you. ~

Mewtwo and Birdo, along with a few female mages, were walking on the path to Fungeria. It was the only place they could find clues on Dani's location. So far, the road that was leading them there was filled with bricks, boxes filled with golden coins, and mushrooms.

Mewtwo - ~I am not enjoying it too much here.~

Birdo - Oh, come on, you need to lighten up!

Mewtwo - ~... You're starting to sound like that damn fool, Kirbynite.~

Birdo - Aie! Alright, I'll be quiet, sir.

---------------------------

There was a little jingle, a familar 1up sound, coming from Kirby's pocket. Kirby didn't seem to respond to it, but his breathing was starting to slow down.


(edited by Brixikyent on 05-20-06 03:10 AM)
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Posted on 05-20-06 04:12 AM Link | Quote
You know exactly what it is that pisses me off about this, and why I am very much affected by it.
Schweiz oder etwas
[12:55] (Dr_Death16); I swear, the word drama needs to be stricken from the dictionary, for I've heard it so many times, it will permanently be imprinted on my brain








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Posted on 05-22-06 02:30 AM Link | Quote
Grey: "Hey, Kirb... You're beeping."

Without a word, Grey casts off his detective coat and it disappears into nothingness. He keeps the hat, though. It's pretty pimp. Having done his usual schpiel of hiding like a coward during Crump's attack, he emerged from his hiding spot, covered in a spat of new vestaments, revealed to be beneath his coat. His gun remained, but it hung from a holster that was strapped to a dark green vest and a pair of khakis. He had also apparently, and without explanation, changed his shoes from the reasonably fashionable leather loafers to a simple pair of black sneaks. There was no word about his appearance uttered from his mouth. He simply nonchalantly reached into Kirb's pocket, pulled out the PET that was inside, and hit a button on the reciever, waiting for a response.

"Now let's see what we've got here..."
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

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Posted on 05-22-06 02:54 AM Link | Quote
Megaman.EXE: Kirbynite, you've got mail-- Oh!

The screen on the Personal Terminal device Grey had yoinked flickered on with the image of figure wearing a blue helmet.

Megaman.EXE: You're not Kirby! Where's Kirbynite at? He's got a message that says its from Schala.

Kirby seemed to have been infused with life as he sprung to his feet and lunged at Grey.

Kirby: What what what? Gimme!

----------------------

Random Fungerian: Greetings! And welcome to... to.. to... EEK! LACE YOUR DOORS WITH DARK STONES! IT'S MEWTWO!

The little Toad immediately ran off into a nearby house as Mewtwo, Birdo, and the female mages stepped foot into Fungeria.

Mewtwo - ~Interesting... I would've expected this sort of reaction had I sprouted spikes and horns...~

Birdo - Well.... I mean.. you ARE Mewtwo.

Mewtwo - ...

Birdo - I.. er.. I'm sorry sir. I'm not saying that's your fault..
Schweiz oder etwas
[12:55] (Dr_Death16); I swear, the word drama needs to be stricken from the dictionary, for I've heard it so many times, it will permanently be imprinted on my brain








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Posted on 05-22-06 03:07 AM Link | Quote
Grey backed up a few steps, and fell over when Kirby landed on him and wrenched the PET out of his terrified hands.

Grey: "Yargh, I know it's Schala, but really now..."

He got up and dusted himself off, shaking his head at Kirb's aggression.
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!!








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Posted on 05-22-06 03:26 AM Link | Quote
"Dearest Kirbynite,
I... am still fine. My situation is less than desirable, but I know you shall succeed in finding me. I still do not know where I am, but be cautious: the villains who captured me have become relentless in searching for the treasure. Good luck. Love, Schala."

Kirby: Grr... freakin'... bastards... better not have done anything to harm Schala....

Megaman.EXE: Ki-kirby! You're squeezing the PET too hard..

Kirby: Alright people, let's get a move on. We need to go back to the door and find the next star!

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Dani - Ick. I totally did not enjoy writing that message... Well, whatever, I'll be going back to my room now, Rob.
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Posted on 05-22-06 04:34 AM Link | Quote
ROB: Wait, Queen Dani, I wanted to ask you something... This person, Kirbynite... There is a data entry which mentions him in my memory... But it predates my first date of operation, and there is no identification on who entered it. The writing style does not match that of any user on this system, and after more searching I have found even older entries in the same style. What's more, they are all located in the same data area as my main operating system. This does not compute. It is the second error I have ever encountered, and again it relates directly to you. You were able to diagnose the previous error. Do you have any idea what might be the cause of this one?

----------

However, at least one Fungerian was still in the streets.

Martin1186: Mew-who? I was inside a dragon for a couple months, folks, I'm not exactly up on current events
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

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Posted on 05-22-06 01:48 PM Link | Quote
Dani - I... :: blink :: What? I don't understand your technobabble. I.. don't deal with computers, alright? Can I go back now?

--------------------------

Mewtwo - ~He'll do, I suppose.~

Birdo quickly runs up to Martin1186.

Birdo: You there! Toad-man! Have you seen Danielle Zeal? She's a strong woman dressed in purple robes, has purple hair, and purple eyes.

------------------------------

Kirby: Hey, people! Move it! C'mon!

Kirby stuffed the PET into his pocket and started walking towards the entrance of the tree. He momentarily looked back and waved his hands at the Punies.

Kirby: Uh.. yeah... be seeing you. It was fun, I guess.
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Posted on 05-22-06 01:57 PM Link | Quote
ROB: Yes, Queen Dani, of course.

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Martin1186: You mean her?

Martin1186 points to a nearby house with a poster of Dani on the side of it.

Martin1186: Other than that poster, no. But then, the only thing I saw for most of these past couple months was the inside of a dragon.
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

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Posted on 05-22-06 02:11 PM Link | Quote
Dani - Alright, whatever.

Danielle shook her head as she turned and walked out the door.

-------------------------------------

Kirby walked out and looked around. The world was still in its monocrhomatic scheme. Thoughts started to seep into his mind, slowly pushing away the agitation lodged into his brain.

Kirby: You know.. I wonder if this was how the world looked like to Pops way back in his day...

-------------------------------------

Birdo - Ugh, you're useless.

Mewtwo - ~... Perhaps we might try at that house.~

Mewtwo floated over to the house. Before he moved closer to the door, a fungerian shrieked.

Fungerian Otaku: Noooooo! Y-you m-may be M-Mewtwo, b-but I'm n-not going to l-let you have m-my treasure!

The fungerian, who was standing behind his house, ran around and pulled the poster off the wall. However, before he tried to run, Mewtwo lifted his right hand and psychicly lifted the fungerian off the ground.

Fungerian: N-noo! I'm a goner! Atleast I'm with my t-treasure!

Mewtwo - ~I hate this story.~

Birdo - Stop your bellyaching, Toad-man. We just want information.

Fungerian: I don't know anything! I swear!

Birdo - This whole town's useless!
Schweiz oder etwas
[12:55] (Dr_Death16); I swear, the word drama needs to be stricken from the dictionary, for I've heard it so many times, it will permanently be imprinted on my brain








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Posted on 05-24-06 02:44 AM Link | Quote
Grey: "Depends on your view of back in the day..."

Grey pulls out a Nintendo DS and begins mashing buttons on it, as the soundtrack to River City Ransom plays out of the tinny-sounding synthesizer of the miniscule piece of gaming hardware. He's clearly idling, but then he notices something odd.

"Hey, this looks kinda familiar..."

Using a special knob he installed on the side of the DS' top screen, he turns the color setting on the monitor down to nothing. It, much like the rest of the world, is entirely in monochrome. A wave of realization washes over him as, after the fact entirely, he comes to an understanding.

".....Oh. I see what you did there."
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

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Posted on 05-25-06 11:43 PM Link | Quote
Kirby: We don't have any time for games! We need to go go go!

Instead of waiting for the rest of the group to keep up, Kirby just took off towards the sewers. He was fueled by determination as he leapt into the air and dove into the Warp Pipe.
Schweiz oder etwas
[12:55] (Dr_Death16); I swear, the word drama needs to be stricken from the dictionary, for I've heard it so many times, it will permanently be imprinted on my brain








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Grey: "Finally, some action!"

He slams his DS into sleep mode, grabs an OT-ing Jack and Fem, clocks Melvin and Smithy in the head, and high-tails it back to the pipe, emerging on the other side alongside Kirb.

"I'm not liking these sewers very much. They get very unsanitary if they're not properly maintained, and if that's the case I have to ask how you can stand this kind of travel!"

He wipes a bit of slime off of his vest, an obvious remnant from the pipe's last cleaning. As he waits for Jack and Fem to come to their senses, Grey spurts out a quick monologue.

"Let's see what I can remember about these pipes...

I recall hearing once that the pipes of the Mushroom Kingdom, the Beanbean Kingdom, Rose Town, Fungeria, Moleville, and all points west were originally supposed to be a part of a huge mass-transit system to unite all of the territories on this continent. Needless to say, it was an obvious failure, given how we have to travel from the surface to the pipes and vice versa.

What I heard was that the Princess and her counselors were attempting to construct the system based on the efficency of underground travel, the structural integrity of the common sewer pipe, and the odd cleanliness that the unique mushroom cap heads of the Toadsters were able to exhibit."

He tapped on the walls of the cement sewer. There was almost no knocking noise, indicating that they were very solid.

"Keeping in mind, of course, that the foundations for the sewers themselves were based mostly on the sanitation systems that the Mushroom Kingdom had already employed. These are separate from those systems, but as you can see, the rushing water nearby indicates that such transit points are actually useful in aiding the sanitation system by providing a filtering point for the rather yucky water. It's still not the best idea in the world to fall in, though.

The attack on the Mushroom Kingdom by Bowser and his Koopa Troop back in the old days left this plan devastated by the financial difficulties associated with the various ransoms of Princess Peach, the reconstruction efforts of the surface, and the legal fees associated with such efforts. Even when Mario came along and started to stop Bowser, he was forced to use the half-completed transit systems to get around, when on-the-surface travel was too dangerous and there was no way to get around via an aerial or naval means. The legal fees associated with the various apprehensions of Bowser, and the fees that were associated with the reconstruction of the prisons he subsequently broke out of were another detriment to the transit system, and it was eventually abandoned in its half-completed state, leaving nothing more than localized tunnels around certain sections of the kingdoms. One exception to this is the tunnel system between Rose Town and Moleville, which was completed independently of the Princess' jurisdiction based on the necessity the Moles held for the tunnelling system. Known as the Pipe Maze, I'm pretty sure only the Moles know how to navigate it nowadays...

But aside from that one area, you'll never find a truly complex pipe system that connects two major regions in the Mushroom Kingdom and all outlying areas. It's fascinating, really."

He notices the sleep bubbles filling and deflating around him, and decides to stop his yammering, before he got really boring and described the various lairs of Belome...


(edited by Xyger on 05-26-06 12:56 AM)
(edited by Xyger on 05-26-06 01:03 AM)
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!!








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Posted on 05-26-06 02:09 AM Link | Quote
Kirby: ... Are you trying to drag Zerodius or Schwa in here? That was.. just pointless, and I would never think the Princess of the Mushroom Kingdom would've considered to put Warp Pipes in Rogueport. Jack told me this was supposed to be a wretched and villainous place......

Grey's ongoing monologue for the bored seemed to have hastened the trip to the Thousand Year Door.

Kirby: And these sewers we're in.. This used to be a city long time ago, I think.

As the other two times, lights began to shoot out in unusual formations around the pedestal as Kirby held a piece of parchment infront of him. After the lights went away, Kirby looked at the map. An island appeared on the map. However, it was a bit odd, as it was placed high in the sky, hovering over the ocean.

Kirby: Glitzville?! Aw, for the love of.. This has to be the worst time for the Warp Stars to be out of service....
Schweiz oder etwas
[12:55] (Dr_Death16); I swear, the word drama needs to be stricken from the dictionary, for I've heard it so many times, it will permanently be imprinted on my brain








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Posted on 05-26-06 02:18 AM Link | Quote
Grey: "Well, it was OBVIOUSLY an attempt to mimic the style of travel presented by a wealthier and more influential nation! Of course they're going to use ancient cities for it, they don't have the money to dig and reinforce their own caver-- Oh, what...?"

He peers over Kirby's shoulder, and notes the oddly-drawn map.

"Glitzville? Never been there..."


(edited by Xyger on 05-26-06 01:18 AM)
Kirbynite

Phan Phan

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Posted on 05-26-06 02:24 AM Link | Quote
Kirby: I've seen commercials for it on tv. It's basically like New York City. Only it's about one block big... Oh, and no crime.... And cleaner. There aren't many stores there, but it's all basically about the Glitz Pit.. All about Pro-Fighting, and such.

Kirby closes up the map and turns to Fem.

Kirby: Fem.. should we go speak to your grandpa about this, or do you know of a place that can take us to the sky, ASAP?
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Posted on 05-26-06 02:33 AM Link | Quote
Fem: I think they have a blimp of some sort, but we could always use the tr-

Fem was unable to complete this thought, as Jack had placed his hand over her mouth.

Jack: No messing with the sidequests.
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