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| Acmlm's Board - I3 Archive - Modern Art - Drawing: Hikari Tendo |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan  I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!!                     Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| Click me for piccy!
I recently finished watching the anime Grenadier, and fell in love with Rushuna Tendo. She's so awesome in everyway.. except the fact that she has ridiculously large breasts 
Anyway, there's a story that takes place in a western setting on my message board, and the main character I use there is Hikari Nite, which in normal canon would've been my main character's future daughter. Hikari's weapon of choice the bow and arrows, but I let that slide for the purpose of drawing her dressed up as Rushuna Problems... The most problem I had would obviously be the chest area. I don't think I've ever drawn a non-flowy shirt for a more grownup female. Her legs kinda seem weird to me.. But there wasn't anything i could do when I realized it. I was too far to fix it, and after working on the picture almost nonstop for a day, I wasn't up for going back. Ah well.. I atleast drew it. I'll eventually get better. As long as I just try to keep drawing ; |
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Kattwah Acro RIP Acmlm's Board: Feb. 18 2007  Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6290 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| Oh good lord, that anime... that sparked so many balloon jokes it wasnt funny XD
Either way, the only complaints I have are that the belt looks... flat and plain, and the boots... yeah... you said that already .
Nice picture none-the-less...  |
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Schweiz oder etwas [12:55] (Dr_Death16); I swear, the word drama needs to be stricken from the dictionary, for I've heard it so many times, it will permanently be imprinted on my brain  Since: 11-17-05 From: Kingston, Rhode Island Last post: 6290 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| Surprisingly, that's not actually the way I imagined her. But it's very, very close. | |||
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| Sidenote: Yes, those are being pushed up. Just don't tell Hikari I said that ;
Gahh! The belt! I knew I wasn't paying attention to something... And just for you, Grey, I'll show the normal version of Hikari. (It wasn't drawn by me, but I colored it) |
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Skydude Armos Knight  Since: 02-18-06 From: Stanford, CA Last post: 6564 days Last view: 6564 days |
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| Ah, good to have a nice mental image for Hikari...though maybe you should draw her in A Western Tale clothes so those of us in the story don't have to mentally switch outfits? | |||
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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I guess I'll get to it  But I'm gonna say that she's gonna be drawn in a more chibi/super deformed fashion, because it takes me about 10% of the time it takes me to draw stuff like that |
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Thoughtless [Danielle] Thoughtless is my secret lover [Danielle] *flutters eyelashes* [Thoughtless] SECRET IS OUT I miss my two pussies :( (Part II) Since: 11-17-05 From: PR Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| I like the drawing. Only iffy part are the legs which KATW and yourself mentioned previously.
The legs kinda remind me of Mega-man's legs. I kid you not. Aside from that. I like her outfit as well. Nice job Kirbster. |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| Yeah, I understand what you mean. The shoes are kinda inaccurate.. the bottom part, atleast. I also tend to draw boot-type of shoes
Shoes are also another finicky thing I have Atleast I can deal with them better than fingers. |
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Thoughtless [Danielle] Thoughtless is my secret lover [Danielle] *flutters eyelashes* [Thoughtless] SECRET IS OUT I miss my two pussies :( (Part II) Since: 11-17-05 From: PR Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6290 days |
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Originally posted by Kirbynite I hate drawing fingers. Everytime I had to draw fingers I contemplated having the character have hooks for hands. |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| After doing a quick doodle.. I realized that technically, all you had to do was add a cowboy hat onto that picture of Hikari with the blue jacket.
Sky.. either you were too lazy to imagine that, or I was tricked into drawing |
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Skydude Armos Knight Since: 02-18-06 From: Stanford, CA Last post: 6564 days Last view: 6564 days |
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| Oh, I could imagine that, and I did. But I would rather actually SEE it than NEED to imagine it. And in that light, thanks, I appreciate seeing it as you have included it. Looks good. | |||
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Cruel Justice I have better things to do. Since: 11-18-05 From: At my house! Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| The face looks slightly off but overall the drawing is fair.
[ + ] Great coloring [ +/- ] The clothwork was well-placed but a tad bland. No points taken, no points given. [ + ] Linework is a bit above average [ - ] Face looks awkwardly placed I give it an 8/10, marginally good but can still use some improvements. Suggestions: -Work on the perspective of the head, especially the eyes. -Try to add more clothwork to make your character more interesting. v Edit: Anytime!  (edited by [GGS] Cruel Justice on 03-05-06 11:51 PM) |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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Wow, you gave me some good insight, there, man 
I guess I was a bit lazy with the clothwork.. but the face.. no excuse for that... Thanks |
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Sion Im Back Baby!  Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| I think she needs wider hips. |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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... And you couldn't tell me that in any of the earlier versions I showed you?! That some one of the things that I could've easily fixed on the spot  |
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Sion Im Back Baby! Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| I didnt realize it at the time. | |||
Tarale    2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6290 days Last view: 6290 days |
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I agree that the hips need widening. Hips always need to be wider than the shoulders for girls (and with boys its the opposite) otherwise you wind up with boyish girls (and girlish or overweight boys) 
Otherwise you've done very well. Coloring is very nice and vibrant Like the exp |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| Sion.. you say that so confidently ;
Thanks for the keynote there, Tarale. I tend to remember drawing certain things by reading tips like that.. And I'm almost positive that's gonna stick in me brain. *nod nod* *bows down to Tarale* |
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Tarale 2710 Affected by 'Princess Bitch-Face Syndrome' ++++!! Persona non grata Since: 11-17-05 From: Adelaide, Australia Last post: 6290 days Last view: 6290 days |
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| It's one of those things that stuck in my brain when I was learning... I even went and bought a book on how to draw female anime characters and it's one of the first things it taught me.
That and how to draw panties. Panties on, panties off, high cut panties, panties from behind, panties from the front, panties from underneath, panties panties panties.... And another ten pages on breasts.... breasts from above, below, squashed, in a bra.....
I'll stick to giving you the much more simple, useful information... like the hip thing |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!! Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6305 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| ..... I.. er.. I think I'll try my best and remain with my comic-y style. I think I'm far too bashful to train like that.. ;; |
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