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Deleted User Banned                Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6299 days |
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| I'm writing a fantasy novel right now. I've showed some people at work and other places already and they like it; would anyone like me to post my first chapter?
The book is called: Emeralis: "AWAKENED" (Tentative title) The first chapter won't have any fighting in it, but tell me what you think anyway. |
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emcee Red Super Koopa       Since: 11-20-05 Last post: 6299 days Last view: 6298 days |
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| I don't think you have to ask first, but I'd suggest not posting too much at a time, I think people get discouraged be small scrollbars. | |||
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A couple of people at my work liked this story so far, so i wanted to share it with you guys!  I poured my heart and soul into this story for nine years, but of course over time I changed the storyline, I started at age 12, and now at 21 I've made it far more better than i could ever know.
Here is my prologue, the first chapter starts after this; before you read it, this prologue tells the past events of long ago... Time; a precious element ordained from the heavens. Being priceless, yet very wasted. The lives of men are fallen into the eye of it, being unprepared, because of the vanities of their negligence. But it will be kind to those who take advantage of it, living every moment as though it was their last. The dark wizard named Dorvan long ago, cast the spell to curse everyone in living in a circle of time with no end, thus the past will be repeated as the future emerges into it. But the spell had no effect on Dorvan; he could benefit form the knowledge ahead of time; he could destroy the ones who sealed him away, and be free again. He knew every move of everyone’s intent before it happened. Red, was a young boy from a quaint village, this young one learned knowledge of the spell, and was born into the very second it was cast; he could see the near future, and all of the past with physical contact to objects or people; he touched Dorvan. His mind showed him the spell, and was able to use every advantage; Red destroyed the evil Dorvan, and the people never knew of the curse, they were naïve to it. Dorvan’s daughter Dorvia tried to end the life of this hero, but she failed, and was destroyed as well in later years. Dorvia’s son, Dorvian, was even more mightier than both of them together, and could not destroyed, at least not with the power Red had, but instead he found the power of the Tellak, and sealed Dorvian away forever in a darkness unknown to any man. Dorvian lives, but only in a prison trapped in blue light, a light to repel magic in the depths of Emerald. He is never to be found, but he cast one last spell before the prison was constructed. He made an encryption on the base of the prison structure, a form of the Zekonian tongue, to open his prison. Never will he be totally imprisoned, for his chances may be slim, but they are chances for his return. One may find him, and use his power. Who would be so foolish…? Shall I Continue? (edited by Fox on 03-02-06 05:13 PM) (edited by Fox on 03-02-06 05:15 PM) |
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