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Deleted User Banned                 Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6297 days |
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I only use gfx wath I make_¬ new screenshots:  (edited by legoman on 02-26-06 09:40 AM) |
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Terry Micro-Goomba    Since: 11-19-05 Last post: 6626 days Last view: 6626 days |
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| I think it looks cool. I like hacks that use characters other than Mario. | |||
Zachio Knuckle Joe  Since: 11-19-05 From: Q forever Last post: 6329 days Last view: 6328 days |
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| Seriously, that is boring. and you can hartly see 'virtual man'. | |||
Imajin Bot Local Moderator Currently affected by 'No syndrome' ---!!!   Since: 12-05-05 From: Camineet, Palm Last post: 6297 days Last view: 6297 days |
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| If you're going to have a stick figure Mario, you should apply similar line graphics for the levels... | |||
Sickness Red Goomba Since: 01-25-06 From: NL Last post: 6629 days Last view: 6629 days |
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| this is probably the reason legoman has such a bad name on the boards here, mixes too many awkward styles in his hacks | |||
Riku Sledge Brother Unpredictable. Watch your backs. Or not. Whichever. I want Metal Gear Solid 4 so badly. Since: 11-17-05 From: Tompkinsville Last post: 6296 days Last view: 6296 days |
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| Legoman, I know this might sound a little mean, but I'd like to know why you don't focus on ONE hack at a time. Geez, I see a lot of crappy announcements for hacks, but you never finish them.
All in all, I don't like this hack for multiple reasons. When you come forth with retarded stick figures in hacks, I kinda lose my self-respect. It kind of makes me feel like crap. SMW hacking is sorta becoming a bad name. Second, those GFX are horribly drawn. And some are edits of old ones. Not good edits either. First screen comment: FAKE STICKMANS OMG Seriously, that screens a little square. The stickmans suck. Second screen comment: What the fuck? It's the old SMW level. GFX suck. Third screen comment: An old SMW level! Bad GFX. Fourth screen comment: Too... Empty... 5th - 8th What the hell? It looks even more empty. A simple recolor in paint isn't going to change my opinion. This hack sucks.  (edited by Riku on 02-26-06 08:58 PM) |
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cpubasic13 I'm ahead of myself... Wait...  Since: 11-17-05 From: Citra, Fl. Last post: 6298 days Last view: 6296 days |
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| Now, while everyone might go all crazy on your ass, but I am not.
Let's take a look at what can be improved. I am only doing the last four screenshots since those are the ones that are needed to be judged. 1. The stickman could definitly use some touching up. While I do like the idea somewhat, the stickman can go from being one pixel lines to something a little bit... more defined. Sure they are supposed to be simple, but not that simple. Try making the stick figures a certain color and then outline the outside of them. For the faces, put in a color that will suit well. You could keep the heads not filled, though, but it wouldn't look right with an outline, so make the head the color of the stick's body, then make the eyes and mouth black. That should help some. It would also possibly make the FG blend in as well. 2. You will have to change the SMW graphics as they don't fit the style of the hack that you are trying to head for. 3. Rexes need a definite change. Also here is where the edges need to be refined. The slopes and corners don't fit with the flat ground. Remove all the curves in the slope and make them straight diagonals. Also, remove the shading underneath the grass. 4. Same argument. As Riku said, try focusing on one hack at a time instead of many. Sure you wouldn't be able to make as many, but they would be of higher caliber than your previous works. Good luck with improving this though. Heh. And to think that my hack had a Stick Figure Hills level in it...  |
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Joshi Red Goomba  Since: 01-28-06 From: Nowhere Last post: 6646 days Last view: 6646 days |
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| Orignally posted by cpubasic13
----------------------------------------- Now, while everyone might go all crazy on your ass, but I am not. Let's take a look at what can be improved. I am only doing the last four screenshots since those are the ones that are needed to be judged. 1. The stickman could definitly use some touching up. While I do like the idea somewhat, the stickman can go from being one pixel lines to something a little bit... more defined. Sure they are supposed to be simple, but not that simple. Try making the stick figures a certain color and then outline the outside of them. For the faces, put in a color that will suit well. You could keep the heads not filled, though, but it wouldn't look right with an outline, so make the head the color of the stick's body, then make the eyes and mouth black. That should help some. It would also possibly make the FG blend in as well. 2. You will have to change the SMW graphics as they don't fit the style of the hack that you are trying to head for. 3. Rexes need a definite change. Also here is where the edges need to be refined. The slopes and corners don't fit with the flat ground. Remove all the curves in the slope and make them straight diagonals. Also, remove the shading underneath the grass. 4. Same argument. As Riku said, try focusing on one hack at a time instead of many. Sure you wouldn't be able to make as many, but they would be of higher caliber than your previous works. Good luck with improving this though. Heh. And to think that my hack had a Stick Figure Hills level in it... --------------------------------------- I completly agree there |
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