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Koneko Plasma Whisp                   Since: 11-17-05 From: Tartarus. We get faster internet than you. Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| (ooc: As you wish, I will stop complaining. Interestingly enough, you seem to be unfamiliar with the way that out of character speech happens in null-time. You see, Snow hasn't even been thrown in there yet. Observe.)
Snow was initially surprised with the speed at which the ROB closed the distance between them and threw him with what must have been supernatural strength. However, as he soars through the damp underground air, he glows for a moment with a soft green light, and his path changes. Instead of heading towards certain oblivion, he directs himself towards a stone pillar, off of which he jumps with amazing speed towards the transformed NES X. As he approaches, Snow draws out of seemingly nowhere a lance made of some type of blue crystal, positioning it to skewer the offending robot. He'd rather not actually have to fight, but that's how the story goes... |
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Ed The Robot Shyguy   Since: 01-07-06 Last post: 6649 days Last view: 6649 days |
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| Popple leaps up and steals the spear thingy that Snow has, and fawful, now contious, begins to charge up his laser, bun unfortunently, NES X takes the hit hard, and begins to short curcet. as fawful charges up his ray beam, he wonders if Zim got his E-Mail...
..."GIR YOU MORON!!!!" Zim screams, "WHY DID YOU STUFF A RUBBER PIGGY INTO MY DISK DRIVE!!!! I NEED THAT TO CHECK MY E-MAIL!!!!" and then GIR says "I DUNNO!!!" and Zim responds, "WHY ARE YOU SCREAMING?" and, finnaly GIR says: "I LIKE SCREAMING!!!! WEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!! oooooooooo... I love this show..." and he gets distraced by the television. |
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cpubasic13 I'm ahead of myself... Wait...  Since: 11-17-05 From: Citra, Fl. Last post: 6292 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| As the waves crashed on the beach of Florida, William was lounging in a chair. He hadn't had a vacation in a while, and he really needed it.
However, his peacful rest was disturbed with a bickering of characters arguing over something. Crap, he thought as he quickly jumped up and headed for his ship lying in the grass. His friends were wondering where he was headed, but they went back to the fun in the sun. ------------------------------------- Tyantas shook his head in disbelief as he was not being noticed. That was until he saw binary code circle around beside him. With a flash, William was teleported... well, a hologram. William didn't want to go down to the dungeon where the sword lie. William: "What's going on here?" Tyantas: "Ummm... a battle for a sword." William glanced over. William: "Eh, I am content with the Black Thorn. Seriously, there is a problem here. I got a message from my modchip." Tyantas: "But you aren't the mod anymore..." William: "...huh... guess I should have gotten rid of this... but here I am..." Just then R.O.B. grabbed hold of some guy named Titanis and throws him into a room that just randomly appeared. William: "...I think that he was going for you..." Tyantas: "Hee kant spel write!" Then R.O.B. came forth to grab Tyantas. William's hologram stepped forth and stopped time in the middle of the battle. Huh... how were his mod powers still in effect? He did not know... William: "I hate to be so harsh on you, but this needs to be settled. I may not be mod here anymore due to inactivity, I still know the proper way of battling. Let's go back to your throwing section for example." A rewind went back to the moment when NES X was going to grab Tyantas. "See here? Problem. You say you threw him into a room. Well, first off this is a dungeon that was premade, so if there was a room specified as 'DANGER! CRUSHING SPIKED WALLS, SNAKE PITS AND OTHER TRAP CLICHES' at that time, it would have been mentioned. However, since it wasn't, there is no such room. You must introduce this room in some way. Don't just make it appear. "Now, for your random off-the-wall stuff. It is ok if you are developing a storyline for the character, but right now... the whole movie and Zim plot was getting nowhere. Well, the movie thing was, but lead to an illegal move. The Zim storyline seems pointless unless you somehow manage to get him here too as a summon. If he isn't a summon... then there are going to be problems since you are barely passing using Popple, Fawful, and NES X, powerful enough to be characters on their own, to fight together. Adding in Zim would have to have some sort of balance play off. "Finally, god modding. Just after Snow attacked NES X, you have Popple go in and steal the lance. There was no attempt. He just steals it. THAT is god-modding. Don't assume everything is going to hit. That is a big problem if you do that. If everyone said their hit was going to work, then we'll have someone do a OHKO the first move and then this whole forum would hafe fallen apart before I even became a member here in 2003. "Now, sorry I am being harsh, but I had to warn you in some way. As Snow's writer, Koneko, said, you have time to look over your stuff. This isn't about winning the fight. It is about writing battles with as much action and story as possible. I'll let this slide for now, but next offence... I'll see if some sort of action can be done." Time resumed from when NES X was about to grab Tyantas. William was no longer there... ------------------- Tyantas was grabbed by the feet and was tossed along the room, Snow flying beside him. He looked ahead to notice the room he was about to head into and laughed hard. He watched Snow kick a pillar and pierce the robot. He grinned as he flew into the random room. Tyantas was apparently in the room, but didn't come straight out. Curious... what was his plan? |
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Stephan Reiken Blipper  Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6298 days Last view: 6292 days |
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| Yukiro: "Well, I supose its time for another spell. This is one strange battle if I do say so myself."
Yukiro steps back and stands there, summoning magic into himself. Blue Mana can be clearly seen building up around Yukiro as well as in his Staff. The energies occiasonally shoot off small mana bolts, but those are harmless. Yukiro: "This spell is always fun." Yukiro closes his eyes and waits for the right moment... EDIT: Just a slight Grammer correction (added nd to a to form And) (edited by Stephan Reiken on 01-16-06 09:25 PM) |
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Koneko Plasma Whisp Since: 11-17-05 From: Tartarus. We get faster internet than you. Last post: 6291 days Last view: 6291 days |
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| As Popple attempts to grab the spear from out of his hands, Snow smiles slightly. Whatever Popple uses to try to steal it passes right through, in fact causing electrical damage to whatever it was. The spear only exists for you if Snow wants it to, and since it didn't exist for Popple, his instrument of theft clutched in vain at the air.
After driving his lance hard into NESX, Snow jumps backwards with equal speed, kicking off of the same pillar at the same speed towards Yukiro. If it works the first time, try, try again... After the first impact, some runes begin to form along the length of the weapon. They're very complex, and they don't seem to be doing anything yet... but they're worth noting. |
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Ed The Robot Shyguy Since: 01-07-06 Last post: 6649 days Last view: 6649 days |
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| Fawful finnaly lunches his charged laser attack at snow, an suddenly, popple goesinto a defensive stance. a transperent rod appears and Popple begins to glow with a light Blue energy
(by the way, I still need a discription of the ice spell I stole with Popples ability.) |
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