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Since: 11-17-05
From: Somewhere between Mars and Jupiter, Sitting on an Asteroid

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Posted on 12-22-05 04:19 PM Link
If any of you have any poetry that you have written, or poetry that you like, post it here for people to read.

For me, my favorite poet is William Cullen Bryant, the guy who invented "Free Verse" poetry. I am a huge fan of "Thanatopsis"...

TO HIM who in the love of Nature holds
Communion with her visible forms, she speaks
A various language; for his gayer hours
She has a voice of gladness, and a smile
And eloquence of beauty, and she glides
Into his darker musings, with a mild
And healing sympathy, that steals away
Their sharpness, ere he is aware. When thoughts
Of the last bitter hour come like a blight
Over thy spirit, and sad images
Of the stern agony, and shroud, and pall,
And breathless darkness, and the narrow house,
Make thee to shudder, and grow sick at heart;�
Go forth under the open sky, and list
To Nature's teachings, while from all around�
Earth and her waters, and the depths of air�
Comes a still voice�Yet a few days, and thee
The all-beholding sun shall see no more
In all his course; nor yet in the cold ground,
Where thy pale form was laid, with many tears,
Nor in the embrace of ocean, shall exist
Thy image. Earth, that nourished thee, shall claim
Thy growth, to be resolved to earth again,
And, lost each human trace, surrendering up
Thine individual being, shalt thou go
To mix forever with the elements;
To be a brother to the insensible rock,
And to the sluggish clod, which the rude swain
Turns with his share, and treads upon. The oak
Shall send his roots abroad, and pierce thy mould.
Yet not to thine eternal resting-place
Shalt thou retire alone, nor couldst thou wish
Couch more magnificent. Thou shalt lie down
With patriarchs of the infant world,�with kings,
The powerful of the earth,�the wise, the good,
Fair forms, and hoary seers of ages past,
All in one mighty sepulchre. The hills
Rock-ribbed and ancient as the sun; the vales
Stretching in pensive quietness between;
The venerable woods�rivers that move
In majesty, and the complaining brooks
That make the meadows green; and, poured round all,
Old Ocean's gray and melancholy waste,�
Are but the solemn decorations all
Of the great tomb of man! The golden sun,
The planets, all the infinite host of heaven,
Are shining on the sad abodes of death,
Through the still lapse of ages. All that tread
The globe are but a handful to the tribes
That slumber in its bosom.�Take the wings
Of morning, pierce the Barcan wilderness,
Or lose thyself in the continuous woods
Where rolls the Oregon, and hears no sound,
Save his own dashings,�yet the dead are there:
And millions in those solitudes, since first
The flight of years began, have laid them down
In their last sleep�the dead reign there alone.
So shalt thou rest; and what if thou withdraw
In silence from the living, and no friend
Take note of thy departure? All that breathe
Will share thy destiny. The gay will laugh
When thou art gone, the solemn brood of care
Plod on, and each one as before will chase
His favorite phantom; yet all these shall leave
Their mirth and their employments, and shall come
And make their bed with thee. As the long train
Of ages glide away, the sons of men,
The youth in life's green spring, and he who goes
In the full strength of years, matron and maid,
The speechless babe, and the gray-headed man�
Shall one by one be gathered to thy side
By those, who in their turn shall follow them.

So live, that when thy summons comes to join
The innumerable caravan which moves
To that mysterious realm, where each shall take
His chamber in the silent halls of death,
Thou go not, like the quarry-slave at night,
Scourged to his dungeon, but, sustained and soothed
By an unfaltering trust, approach thy grave
Like one who wraps the drapery of his couch
About him, and lies down to pleasant dreams.
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Since: 12-31-05
From: NYC

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Posted on 12-31-05 06:16 PM Link
My favorite poem is "Dream within a Dream" by Edgar Allen Poe

Take this kiss upon the brow!
And, in parting from you now,
Thus much let me avow-
You are not wrong, who deem
That my days have been a dream;
Yet if hope has flown away
In a night, or in a day,
In a vision, or in none,
Is it therefore the less gone?
All that we see or seem
Is but a dream within a dream.

I stand amid the roar
Of a surf-tormented shore,
And I hold within my hand
Grains of the golden sand-
How few! yet how they creep
Through my fingers to the deep,
While I weep- while I weep!
O God! can I not grasp
Them with a tighter clasp?
O God! can I not save
One from the pitiless wave?
Is all that we see or seem
But a dream within a dream?

------------------------------------------

I write poetry.. and I guess I'll share one.

assimilated within dreams and living within lucidity
hallways morphed within glass portraits hung lopsided
in contrast to the floors
a swelling sensation surrounding a stairwell
and steps decline as people breathe
out airy possibilities
the storm caught my attention
high winds and friction molded around the math lesson
and later as i walked in the rain and was
drenched by azure fraught raindrops welded within neglect
i smiled as i entered your warmth
a maze of roads and troubled storms
azelia's crept up the pavement and the clouds tore holes in the sky
where light could shine on all the germs
all the lost souls and the hopeless romantics
all the loved ghosts and schitzophrenics
all could melt in the moment
i witnessed the sacred rite
of evaporation.
Kyoufu Kawa
Intends to keep Rom Hacking in one piece until the end








Since: 11-18-05
From: Catgirl Central Station

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Posted on 12-31-05 06:44 PM Link
I am torn between Shakespeare and Stupid.

And since I'm too lazy to open the eBook and find the right passage in Hamlet, I type the following from mind.

Originally posted by Shakespeare

Alas, poor Yorick. I knew him, Horatio. A fellow of infinite jest, of most excellent fancy. He must have born me on his back a thousand times yet now, how abhorred in my imagination it is.


The stupid is in my custom title.

Oh, and the Ode to Spot ofcourse.


(edited by Kyoufu Kawa on 12-31-05 05:44 PM)
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Posted on 12-31-05 06:54 PM Link
By Robert Herrick:

Gather ye rosebuds while ye may,
Old time is still a-flying;
And this same flower that smiles today
Tomorrow will be dying.

The glorious lamp of heaven, the sun,
The higher he's a-getting,
The sooner will his race be run,
And nearer he's to setting.

That age is best which is the first,
When youth and blood are warmer;
But being spent, the worse, and worst
Times still succeed the former.

Then be not coy, but use your time,
And, while ye may, go marry;
For, having lost but once your prime,
You may forever tarry.


Carpe Diem. If you've seen the movie "Dead Poets Society" you'll probably recognize this. Without a doubt my favorite poem I've read.
Koitenshin +∞

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Since: 12-24-05
From: Misery

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Posted on 12-31-05 07:29 PM Link
Here is a free copyrighted work of mine just for all of you. But you have to give me credit...seriously.

Why does it hurt? © by Christopher Bay

Small clouds, lots of rain.
No emotions, tons of pain.
I don't know why it hurts so much;
It seems our lives are just a crutch.
I will survive, that I know;
Without a fight, I won't go.
Why does it hurt so much? I ask God.
He suddenly tells me and I just nod.
I am all too human, of that I am sure;
But now, I am not so good and pure.

It's been published but looking back on it I think that one sucks out of my entire collection of writings.


(edited by Koitenshin on 12-31-05 06:31 PM)
NITIN

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Since: 03-17-06
From: Bangalore, India

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Posted on 04-04-06 12:37 PM Link
I don't write poetry but I really enjoyed
'The Rime of the Ancient Mariner' by Samuel Coleridge.
It was part of my tenth grade English textbook
NSNick

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Posted on 04-04-06 02:15 PM Link
I met a traveler from an antique land
Who said: Two vast and trunkless legs of stone
Stand in the desert. Near them, on the sand,
Half sunk, a shattered visage lies, whose frown,
And wrinkled lip, and sneer of cold command,
Tell that its sculptor well those passions read,
Which yet survive, stamped on these lifeless things,
The hand that mocked them, and the heart that fed,
And on the pedestal these words appear:
"My name is Ozymandias, King of Kings:
Look on my works, ye Mighty, and despair!"
Nothing beside remains. Round the decay
Of that colossal wreck, boundless and bare
The lone and level sands stretch far away.
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Since: 05-08-06

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Posted on 04-05-06 05:04 PM Link
I absolutly love poetry, and I have written quite a bit the last 2 years heres a dark one:



Lonely Forever
To my dark lonely side

I am lost, I am lonely
from this dark hole, I wish for someone to save me
O how my heart aches for someone to love
But some people tell me these matters are not yet to shove
Why is it that the evil men get their way?
But the innocent are tormented and slain?
Slain? As in physically slain you ask? Oh no!
I mean slain as in emotions; to love; about to go mad!
Why can't induviduals that desire it, obtain it?
to get what they long for, within where their heart sits
I'm searching and searching, is it not meant for me?
But why is it meant for fools who will torment and tease?
It hurts to have this emptiness inside
but I'd rather have emptiness than a fool's pride
The cacklings of low intelligence I will endure
Maybe I am supposed be lost... lonley... forever...


I've got a bunch more



(edited by Skyon on 04-05-06 04:04 PM)
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Since: 11-17-05
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Posted on 04-05-06 08:42 PM Link
Nick, you stole it! "Ozymandias" is by far my favorite poem.

Also, I like this one, by Emily Dickinson:

"To make a prairie it takes a clover and one bee,
One clover, and a bee,
And revery.
The revery alone will do,
If bees are few."

I also write poems from time to time, but none of them are any good.
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Since: 11-18-05
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Posted on 04-05-06 10:30 PM Link
I don't read your pathetic past 1400 poetry.

Give me Beowulf any day!
The Onyx Dragoon

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Since: 11-17-05
From: Somewhere between Mars and Jupiter, Sitting on an Asteroid

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Posted on 04-07-06 05:14 PM Link
To be honest, I don't really like the poetry style that focuses itself around discomfort and lonliness. I would like to see poetry with really peaceful elements in it.

And Plus Sign Abomination, I think Beowulf is cool too .
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Posted on 04-07-06 05:55 PM Link
Why are you looking at threads that are 4 months old?

Seriously.

And how did Nick miss that?
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