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| Acmlm's Board - I3 Archive - The Pit of Despair - shots of evil qurst |
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golden goomba Red Goomba                  Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6644 days Last view: 6644 days |
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here is some new shots of SMEQ
you know before i was fbp but my user got deleted so... now im golden goomba |
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The Kins Hoarder   Since: 11-18-05 From: Hurf. Last post: 6309 days Last view: 6295 days |
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| Oh, god.
I can't wait! |
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Pasgeti_;   560   Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6334 days Last view: 6305 days |
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Bowser eat moshoom skin he's so evil 
We have a rope a normal pipe and an multicolored pipe... AWESOME[/sarcasm]
Just......
You destroyed the great smw overworld with your own crappy overworld be proud. |
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golden goomba Red Goomba Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6644 days Last view: 6644 days |
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dont be mad this is my first hack |
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Pasgeti_; 560 Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6334 days Last view: 6305 days |
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| How to make this hack a little better in easy steps:
1. Fix all spelling errors. 2. Get rid of the multicolored pipe. 3. Fix the overworld. The hack would still look really bad but it would be an improvement. (edited by Dragon master on 11-18-05 09:39 AM) |
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Cruel Justice I have better things to do. Since: 11-18-05 From: At my house! Last post: 6296 days Last view: 6295 days |
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That's the funniest hack I've ever seen. 
Don't jump in the water! Water burn baby! Water burn baby! |
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The Kins Hoarder Since: 11-18-05 From: Hurf. Last post: 6309 days Last view: 6295 days |
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Originally posted by golden goombaFirst hacks are never very good. Experiment, learn, throw around a fre hacks as you learn, ask questions. Just realise that your first hacks will likely suck and people will tell you as such.  |
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S.N.N. wtf Since: 11-17-05 From: Ontario, Canada Last post: 6301 days Last view: 6295 days |
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I'm gonna assume English isn't your strong point? It's ok 
I don't know how you can stick a pipe on the OW with an unrevealed path next to it - pipes can't reveal events. The pipe can't be a level. Unless you're gonna change it, I highly DON'T recommend putting the pipe there. I'd suggest, since it's your first hack, take your time, and learn how it works. Then give a shot at another one, and it'll probably turn out better. |
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Deleted User Banned    Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6296 days |
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| Some of the screens look weird, but its a good try. The best of luck to you. | |||
Andy Zora Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6624 days Last view: 6624 days |
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| Did you cahnge the events or just put them at different levels? The vine leading to the green switch place dosn't make sense to me. (edited by Andrew on 12-24-05 10:38 AM) |
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Rain Man Paragoomba Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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| My mom could make a better hack than this. | |||
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Bloodstar 660 blue boar boobies Fatal error: Allowed memory size of 8388608 bytes exhausted (tried to allocate 35 bytes) in /var/www/acmlm.org/board/profile.php on line 42 Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6295 days Last view: 6295 days |
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WHAT. Mario collects some strange thing to grow, eh?
zzzz- what? Don't wake me up now!
REEEEEEWENGE! *hic*
My first OW was better than this. And that's sad... Yeah... You should look at other hacks and see how they're made. Eventually you'll get better, though... don't quit because people don't like your first. (though that mushroom IS horrible...  ) |
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Clockworkz Birdon Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6295 days Last view: 6295 days |
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| I pray this is a joke hack. I can't believe this. And yes; my mother could make a better hack, as well.
There's nothing redeeming about this. At all. |
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Chris Spiny Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6405 days Last view: 6405 days |
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You have a lot to work on... I see that it's your first hack, so I kind of understand and all. Just try to work more on it. It could be better; really, it could...  |
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Rain Man Paragoomba Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6430 days Last view: 6430 days |
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| Being his first hack doesn't compensate for the poor grammar. | |||
Smallhacker Super Koopa I AM A Group Of Officially Frustrated Younglings, G.O.O.F.Y. MEMBER |
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C'mon, people. Give some constructive criticism instead.  It's hard to get better with crappy feedback. |
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Deleted User Banned Since: 05-08-06 Last post: None Last view: 6296 days |
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I remember my first hack, it´s name was "Super Mario World: The Tree Red Moons". I´ve cancelled it and it never has published on my homepage. Some levels of it are very cool, with very good ExGFX, but....bah  (edited by andres on 11-18-05 05:56 PM) |
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Kailieann Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6295 days Last view: 6295 days |
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| First of all, for everyone who pointed it out, I just feel compelled to point out that many of the better hacks out there have multicolored pipes.
As for the actual screens...
The mushroom sprite is a bad edit, but it's not the worst I've seen (because, of course, I read sprite comics..) Using the paw prints and Ms to indicate the dialogue between Yoshi and Mario is a good idea, but it still needs a little work on the presentation. The alignment of the text is poor. You should make sure the Auto Space box is checked in the editor, and check the preview to make sure it looks good. The spelling and grammar needs work. It should be: "Yoshi: Mario! Help! Peach is gone again. I think it's Bowser. Look at this mushroom. Bowser ate all the skin! Mario: Let's-a go!"
As I already said, many of the better hacks out there have multicolored pipes. That doesn't mean it's a good idea. Move it over a tad, especially if you're using it as an exit. I'd say the level design isn't very good, but there doesn't really seem to be much design. Either move the rope down a little so it's closer to the bottom of the screen, or put something underneath it so that it doesn't look quite as empty. The water level and the mountain background don't mix. At all. Change the background to match the level.
"I want revenge! Meet me in the pipe." Other than that, it's fine. Generic, but fine.
Too much open space. Looks like a whole lot of nothing. The paths on the left edge don't line up. Putting two levels right next to eachother isn't a good idea for your first hack, it can cause problems with movement. The vine doesn't look good. The edges of the lake don't line up. Overall, it sucks, but it's not completely beyond hope. And, more to the point, everyone has to start somewhere, and first hacks are usually not the best. (edited by Kailieann on 11-18-05 07:29 PM) (edited by Kailieann on 11-20-05 01:40 PM) |
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Sparx Waddle Doo  Since: 11-18-05 From: San Diego Last post: 6308 days Last view: 6295 days |
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| Exactly. Fix the spelling, try to make the overworld better if you can, and NEVER use multi-colored pipes. | |||
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golden goomba Red Goomba Since: 11-18-05 Last post: 6644 days Last view: 6644 days |
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| i know... i fix it tomorrow |
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