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mortalkenshi2 Paratroopa                  Since: 12-10-06 Last post: 6281 days Last view: 6280 days |
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| Aright, when you read this story, you have to read it like you reading it to pre-k kids. That will make it a better experience. Enjoy:
( I made this as a joke while was talking to a friend so I used many chatting words sorry!!!) Story! let me tell u a little story.... i was talkin to this turtle and he was like "yea yea i like that monkey too but hate that other dog" and I was like "other dog what other dog oh my friends fathers brothers sisters friends"and he wuz like "NO it was my friends fathers dogs pet cockaroachs father who had a mother that had a son that had a girl friend that had his owner a human who was really my father so he....so he sat on a couch smoked a cigarette took a beer bottle threw into the air shot a gun took out some more bullets fling them at my girlfriend and managed to knock her senseless and she ended up scratchin the wall making a hole where the cockaroaches started invadings and she squashed the little bugs one by one until she met the mommy and he was like hey pet rock the pet rock was really a lion who scientifically mutated from a golden rock that ended shooting a gun and was really rich cause his father was henry III when they really know it was really his brother that led him to be rich cuz he was King edward IV but they were like no it was his sister Elizabeth VIIII when they all actually really knew it was u! but then they said no because u are poor so maybe it was the pet rock that was wealthy cuz of himself they really dont know until it hit them!*doink* and that went away with his coconut head and imaginary world that had to do with him corrupting a rom by dumping the trash when he was using gameshark to cheat and since it broke he used his action replay to cheat but then that broke too so he just had to play the regular video game even though it wasnt much fun so he ended getting another pet turtle named pet rock and then he had a seizure since he was mad that he was a turtle named pet rock even though he was a turtle he kept arguing about being called a pet rock cuz he felt like a midget since he was tryin to be funny but it wasnt funny he was just funny lookin but then they said wait we all a bunch of funny people so lets celebrate but the turtle said no but they keep calling me a pet rock even though im a turtle but then the pet rock said lets go back to lala land and then he renamed himself turtle so the turtle was pet rock and the pet rock was turtle. But then they both got confused so they called themselves petturtlerockturtledove and petrockturtledoveturtlerock but then one was like no im the petturtlerockturtledove and his friend rocko was like no, i have a crush on your little midgets cousins fathers daughters mothers sisters dogs fathers midgets pet rocks pet dogs pet chickens pet dumbo who was really an elephant who had a father who knew a dog that was really a tiger but mutated from a ugly piece of sky who was a flyer to an airplane who liked febreze cuz it made him smell good even though he liked the smell of dog doo doo but then in battle star galactica where they didnt like friends and family, on the WB eleven darmha and greg start off the party (edited by mortalkenshi2 on 01-24-07 09:01 PM) |
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Kirbynite Phan Phan  I'm sick of being bogged down by homework!!    Since: 11-17-05 Last post: 6294 days Last view: 6279 days |
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| I was about to punt this over to the writing forum, but then I decided to look at some of the stuff written.
I am not going to bother reading everything that you wrote down, but from what I have read, it looks like a bunch of words put together to attract hits from a search engine. Speaking of pre-k kids, maybe you should try considering some Schoolhouse Rock. The grammar is attrocious. And it is just unsightly to read. A huge wall of text with nothing segmented.. I kinda hope this was not a serious attempt. If it was a joke... Eh... |
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