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The Red Snifit
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This is one of the best pixel art pictures I've seen in a while.
There are only 2 things that bother me...'
1. The island is tilted a little toward the front.
2. The water coming out is coming out more like goo.
Besides that, it's just about perfect.
Teddylot
Posts: 244/286
Originally posted by raar
I always post my WIPs around, hoping to get critisism and such on them, ideas, whatever, while I was working on this I got next to no help from forums/chats whatever, kinda disapointed me, but I guess with how much artwork I churn out its just "oh setz is making new artwork yawn"


I feel ya.

Anyway, I've been looking at this picture for a while and it's well done. I can't say much about your execution because you've pretty much mastered making pixel artwork. The lighting and shading is probably the best part of the piece and it helps it make it even more aesthetically pleasing. The bubble, also, very cool.

Right off the bat, however, something bothered me. The perspective is not quite right. Judging from the water, the horizon line should be slightly just above it ( about where the land actually is. ) However, the land is at an even greater angle from the viewer's point of view than the angle on the water. I don't know if I'm actually getting my thoughts across, but the basic idea is that the perspective's screwy ... unless the land formation in the globe is silly as well. .-.

Last thing ... the crack with the draining water is a nice touch, but Bernoulli says you have your fluid dynamics represented poorly. The water should actually thin out as it's falling ... just saying. =P

Anyway, I wouldn't bother actually making the changes because it would be a hassle, but just keep them in mind for next time you start creating something.

Other than that, I can't make any other comments on your stuff because I don't know what you're trying to say or if you even are trying to say something. Technicalities is as far as I can help you.
Simon Belmont
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Originally posted by KP9000
I remember you showing this WIP to us in #rom-hacking. This rocks hard. Love the background. I always enjoy looking at your work!



I always post my WIPs around, hoping to get critisism and such on them, ideas, whatever, while I was working on this I got next to no help from forums/chats whatever, kinda disapointed me, but I guess with how much artwork I churn out its just "oh setz is making new artwork yawn"
KP9001
Posts: 103/180
I remember you showing this WIP to us in #rom-hacking. This rocks hard. Love the background. I always enjoy looking at your work!
ibz10g
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Thats is really cool. Any inspirations, or just an idea?
Simon Belmont
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tons of fun (and colors :p)
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