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Darkdata Posts: 810/983 |
There has been an update, Comic 5 is up for your viewing pleasure. |
Sonicandfails Posts: 745/917 |
As I said in IRC last night, it could be much more improved upon, but if it does have a set story, then it should turn out alright. The newest one wasn't that bad, but again, those "empty" spaces between the panels was kind of bothersome... It should be changed to a different color, or even a background of some sort behind the comic... |
Darkdata Posts: 799/983 |
There has been an update. Comic 4 is now up for your viewing pleasure. |
Kattwah Posts: 3145/3349 |
zomg is that twink?
IS THAT TWINK (not twinkle star that we hate ) Pretty good, but I feel your textboxes are taking up too much space... I really cant say anything about the story since, you know, its only three strips |
Darkdata Posts: 796/983 |
Originally posted by Dr_Death16 Thanks for the comment. Also Not a problem anymore, thanks DD16 |
Dr_Death16 Posts: 653/970 |
I like it, and the SMRPG sprites are a nice base to work from. But I want to know what happens next. Also,
3rd comic, first cell: "hear" is spelled incorrectly. |
Darkdata Posts: 795/983 |
Hello and thank you for taking the time to look at my comic.
The Comic's name is A Princess' tale with a plot that will grow and develop as comics pass. -------- Plot -------- A scheme, a Kingdom, a power, a legend, and a Princess. What will happen? -------- Thanks to: -------- Beam Lansir Yosho Tonberry2K (this guy is the best ever) And Bacon. --------- Comics --------- Comic 1 Comic 2 Comic 3 Comic 4 Comic 5 --------- Other --------- All critique, pointing out mistakes, and non-flaming points are welcome. Imageshack is only temporary while I secure a website. |