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| Cruel Justice Posts: 309/1637 |
I don't think she's really "emo", I mean, the poem was alright. I hope you're not still sore about your last relationship. :\ |
| Deleted User Posts: 158/-7750 |
Your poem reaks of being emo in a sense, and you used "cuz", you had a nice flow until then.  |
| Koneko Posts: 80/656 |
I love your poem, but hate, absolutely HATE your layout overflow.
Well, a few of the lines are a little eh, but mostly I think it's very well done. Just fix your layout. |
| Iori Yagami Posts: 81/570 |
Love equals Hate by Me/Dark Vampriel (don't steal please)
Roses are red Violets are blue So love must be true Until I met you Nothing but lies and hate Now all I see is crimson regret Must be fun messing with Fate As you lost and I gain Hate fuels my vengence, don't you see? The thought of your face racked with pain Fills my desire to annihilate And yet you fail to see Just how much pain you gave to me Your love is a joke for anyone Including your pathetic self Now I hope you die 'Cuz it will make me feel peaceful inside Yeah made this in like five minutes and I think it sucks. Quick write, quick name for a title and the beginning just stuck in my head so I had to write it. Don't think I need to explain my self any further about this poem and what it means.  |
