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| Cruel Justice Posts: 1530/1637 |
They aren't refined quite yet. Don't be afraid to trace over your existing drawings or pen them in photoshop.
Remember what you need to do with lines. Thickest lines - Outer form Thick lines - Significant parts Thinnest lines - Minor details/hair Really, your compositions are great but you need to polish them man!!! |
| Jilkon Posts: 212/227 |
I really wouldn't call that shoujo style, it looks fairly shounen. Shoujo is more along the lines of.. say.. this. On a related note, the title of that manga is disturbing. |
| Clockworkz Posts: 872/984 |
Actually, Francine's thumb is tucked uner her fingers. That's what I inferred from the reference I used.
And Kevin's proportions are exaggerated as part of "omg ridiculously shonen styled man" proportions. Thanks for the crit, setz; I'll use it to my advantage  |
| Simon Belmont Posts: 1151/1773 |
kevin needs a new pair of shoulders, and a thicker head for all that bulk. His right forearm seems oddly shaped and muscles overall seem to need some workings
link I kinda scribbled over one of your drawings, it's kinda hard scribbling with a mouse, it's obviously not perfect in any form of the word, but maybe it could help with some flaws I seen? I'm no anatomy expert. (god theres that dreaded word again) and plus that brush-tool can get abit jumpy on me yeah. you're welcome. |
| Clockworkz Posts: 867/984 |
Straightforward and to the point.
Good. Done 1 week ago: Keira, a character from Innocence Gone Combative Francine, posing Done just now: Kevin is too sexy for his shirt. Actually, I think his muscles destroyed it, but whatever. OMG I drew Shojo Style. What the fuck. I want attention. Thank you.  |
