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06-18-24 09:29 AM
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Acmlm's Board - I3 Archive - Modern Art - I'm posting art now. Look at this thread, please.
  
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Cruel Justice
Posts: 1530/1637
They aren't refined quite yet. Don't be afraid to trace over your existing drawings or pen them in photoshop.

Remember what you need to do with lines.

Thickest lines - Outer form
Thick lines - Significant parts
Thinnest lines - Minor details/hair

Really, your compositions are great but you need to polish them man!!!
Jilkon
Posts: 212/227
I really wouldn't call that shoujo style, it looks fairly shounen. Shoujo is more along the lines of.. say.. this. On a related note, the title of that manga is disturbing.
Clockworkz
Posts: 872/984
Actually, Francine's thumb is tucked uner her fingers. That's what I inferred from the reference I used.
And Kevin's proportions are exaggerated as part of "omg ridiculously shonen styled man" proportions.
Thanks for the crit, setz; I'll use it to my advantage
Simon Belmont
Posts: 1151/1773
kevin needs a new pair of shoulders, and a thicker head for all that bulk. His right forearm seems oddly shaped and muscles overall seem to need some workings

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I kinda scribbled over one of your drawings, it's kinda hard scribbling with a mouse, it's obviously not perfect in any form of the word, but maybe it could help with some flaws I seen? I'm no anatomy expert. (god theres that dreaded word again) and plus that brush-tool can get abit jumpy on me

yeah.

you're welcome.
Clockworkz
Posts: 867/984
Straightforward and to the point.
Good.

Done 1 week ago:
Keira, a character from Innocence Gone
Combative Francine, posing

Done just now:
Kevin is too sexy for his shirt. Actually, I think his muscles destroyed it, but whatever.
OMG I drew Shojo Style. What the fuck.

I want attention.
Thank you.
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