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| Clockworkz Posts: 813/984 |
Originally posted by [GGSYou could at least try to, I dunno; elaborate. If you don't, it's not a critique, doesn't help, and only serves to damage my ego. Meanie. 
EDIT: Also, I'm only revealing what I want to reveal. The storyline is far more complex than it seems at first glance  |
| Dragon hellfire Posts: 113/162 |
The drawings were alright, still nothing turning my head. The story, was a little to the point, it should be more spread out. Else you will get burnt out on idea's to fast. |
| Cruel Justice Posts: 1429/1637 |
Dude, you did a fantastic job on your last drawings, what happened? 
If you don't mind my saying so, it all looks quite rushed. Perhaps you should fine-tune the shapes. Don't be too timid to take references from cutscenes or pictures of people. |
| Clockworkz Posts: 812/984 |
omg mspaint comic. That said, there is no color, and little to no shading, but trust me; it looks nice to me, personally. Don't kill me.
Storyline: In the late 25th century, scientists happened upon an artifact known as the Satyrisis Rune. Upon examination, it seemed that "Belezebub's chant shall awaken His power", an obscure inscription, was traced to an old Armanian scroll. When this chant was recited in front of the stone, the skies turned blood red, and cracks opened in the surface of the earth, and Hell's demons made their way onto the planet and decimated the human race. Only when or if the rune is found and destroied, then the demons will return to hell, never again to plague the earth. The surviving humans wage their war against the demons as Demon Hunters, but one man in particular has shown an amazing amount of skill with his equally amazing gun. He is Kain Maxwell, and he is the best hunter alive. Archives: Comic 1: Completed Comic 2: In progress |
