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Tarale
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Yeah, it needs more pirate paraphernalia. Swords, parrots, patches?
KTurbo
Posts: 77/164
Looks good. Could you try to shade out the bandana too, as you did with pretty much the rest of him. (Arms for instance)

Speaking of adding things, add a sword for gods sake.
Yeah, that and an eye patch. That's really all I can come up with that's not there.
Simon Belmont
Posts: 379/1773
head updated. pink bandana ew =[ robots with beards ftw. for the wise crack I'll probably have a textbox with something lame in it. hand will be pointing a finger.
cpubasic13
Posts: 517/1193
Yeah, they can smoke, I guess.

Hmm... give him a built-in parrot on his shoulder to add to the wisecrack part. I dunno... the palette probably wouldn't make it look right... but it would be funny if done...

I don't know pirates much, basically what I know from Pirates of the Caribbean. But my friend seems obssessed with pirates. I'll ask him later about suggestions to this.
Tarale
Posts: 1102/2713
Originally posted by setz
well, it had a circle head with visor-type eyes and a patch, but it looked so horrid that I just cut it out altogether. this pallete is driving me insane with its lack of contrast between some of the shades. I might go with a more angular head and a tilted cap + cigar. Do pirates even smoke cigars?


I dunno. I'm more of a Ninja person, myself

Sure, they smoke cigars I guess. They also drink. Yo ho ho and a bottle of rum, and so forth.
Simon Belmont
Posts: 378/1773
well, it had a circle head with visor-type eyes and a patch, but it looked so horrid that I just cut it out altogether. this pallete is driving me insane with its lack of contrast between some of the shades. I might go with a more angular head and a tilted cap + cigar. Do pirates even smoke cigars?
Tarale
Posts: 1098/2713
Wow, when they say "wisecracking pirate robot" the first thing to come into my head is Bender with a pirate hat on.

I'm not sure what to critique yet with your robot; I'd be interested in seeing what you have in mind with regards to its head and facial features. Is it gonna have a big piratey robotty moustache?
Simon Belmont
Posts: 373/1773
Originally posted by Faktablad

NEW PALETTE AND REQUIREMENTS:

CURRENT PALETTE:


CURRENT REQUIREMENTS:
``Image must be 100 x 160 pixels
``Image must be a waist-up portrait of a wisecracking pirate robot

remember you can continue submitting pixel art for any past sets.


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Yep. those are my restrictions, here's what I got so far;

I'm not so much asking for technique critique, because I wouldn't expect that here, but design, because I'm as un-creative as a pedophile with a squirt gun.
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