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| Lunar MM Posts: 269/426 |
At least you're not using the GBA Meta-Knight... 
Anyway, you're text boxes are getting better, plus the jokes are getting more obvious.  Nicely done.  |
| Riku Posts: 1024/1823 |
I'm trying to follow your guys advice.
Originally posted by Skreename He's nervous and spat out something to save his life. SMW2 sprites are kinda hard to make stable on SMAS and SMW. I tried to make it look as stable as possible.
Comment: I hope Meta-Knight can control his temper. |
| JDavis Posts: 249/648 |
Like THIS. It's not that hard to figure out. It's only how all comics have done speech bubbles since EVER (or at least since the invention of the speech bubble). |
| Skreename Posts: 700/1427 |
Okay, two things: First, the line "To my mistake" doesn't quite make sense to me, and second, the characters' tendency to stand IN the floor is a bit odd.
Otherwise, it doesn't look bad. It may help a bit to make the text markers for Hookbill a color other than black (they're hard to see), though. |
| Sukasa Posts: 834/2068 |
Maybe make the triangles part of the box, and not just black triangles or lines... as in, white polygon with red outline, with the triangle being part of the polygon. |
| Riku Posts: 1023/1823 |
Comment: What?  |
| JDavis Posts: 247/648 |
Not bad, but it'd be better if you used wedge/arrow things coming from the speech bubbles instead of lines, and if you didn't actually touch the characters with them. |
| Peardian Posts: 950/1757 |
I'm not a big fan of the language, but otherwise it's pretty good. The panels are a little off (by a pixel or so), though.
I like Hookbill. |
| Lord SkyLart Posts: 231/307 |
Looks nice keep up the good work.  |
| Riku Posts: 1019/1823 |
Comment: THE RAISE! THE RAISE! |
| Clockworkz Posts: 722/984 |
Fuck the fucking language. I think it's decent, but I'm not great on sprite comic crits. I'll have to see more... |
| Lord SkyLart Posts: 228/307 |
It looks nice just watch your laungage. |
| Riku Posts: 1015/1823 |
I've recently got back into sprite comics, so be constructive about the comments.
So, without further delay, I present Super Mario Bros: Deception. 
Comment: Can you guess what happened? |
