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| Tarale Posts: 569/2713 |
Yes, well I was too o.o Which is why even though I have some twenty pages in a book dedicated to tits and arse, I still can't draw tits and arse 
The other useful thing I remember is girls are like a figure 8 but with a bigger bottom bit than the top bit of the 8 |
| Kirbynite Posts: 365/1334 |
..... I.. er.. I think I'll try my best and remain with my comic-y style. I think I'm far too bashful to train like that..  ;; |
| Tarale Posts: 566/2713 |
 It's one of those things that stuck in my brain when I was learning... I even went and bought a book on how to draw female anime characters and it's one of the first things it taught me.
That and how to draw panties. Panties on, panties off, high cut panties, panties from behind, panties from the front, panties from underneath, panties panties panties.... And another ten pages on breasts.... breasts from above, below, squashed, in a bra..... 
I'll stick to giving you the much more simple, useful information... like the hip thing |
| Kirbynite Posts: 364/1334 |
Sion.. you say that so confidently ;
Thanks for the keynote there, Tarale. I tend to remember drawing certain things by reading tips like that.. And I'm almost positive that's gonna stick in me brain. *nod nod* *bows down to Tarale* |
| Tarale Posts: 560/2713 |
I agree that the hips need widening. Hips always need to be wider than the shoulders for girls (and with boys its the opposite) otherwise you wind up with boyish girls (and girlish or overweight boys) 
Otherwise you've done very well. Coloring is very nice and vibrant Like the expression on the face, she looks very cheeky. |
| Sion Posts: 413/639 |
I didnt realize it at the time. |
| Kirbynite Posts: 312/1334 |
... And you couldn't tell me that in any of the earlier versions I showed you?! That some one of the things that I could've easily fixed on the spot  |
| Sion Posts: 407/639 |
I think she needs wider hips. |
| Kirbynite Posts: 308/1334 |
Wow, you gave me some good insight, there, man
I guess I was a bit lazy with the clothwork.. but the face.. no excuse for that... Thanks |
| Cruel Justice Posts: 754/1637 |
The face looks slightly off but overall the drawing is fair.
[ + ] Great coloring [ +/- ] The clothwork was well-placed but a tad bland. No points taken, no points given. [ + ] Linework is a bit above average [ - ] Face looks awkwardly placed I give it an 8/10, marginally good but can still use some improvements. Suggestions: -Work on the perspective of the head, especially the eyes. -Try to add more clothwork to make your character more interesting. v Edit: Anytime! |
| Skydude Posts: 486/2607 |
Oh, I could imagine that, and I did. But I would rather actually SEE it than NEED to imagine it. And in that light, thanks, I appreciate seeing it as you have included it. Looks good. |
| Kirbynite Posts: 302/1334 |
After doing a quick doodle.. I realized that technically, all you had to do was add a cowboy hat onto that picture of Hikari with the blue jacket.
Sky.. either you were too lazy to imagine that, or I was tricked into drawing |
| Thoughtless Posts: 850/2405 |
Originally posted by Kirbynite I hate drawing fingers. Everytime I had to draw fingers I contemplated having the character have hooks for hands. |
| Kirbynite Posts: 301/1334 |
Yeah, I understand what you mean. The shoes are kinda inaccurate.. the bottom part, atleast. I also tend to draw boot-type of shoes
Shoes are also another finicky thing I have  Atleast I can deal with them better than fingers. |
| Thoughtless Posts: 838/2405 |
I like the drawing. Only iffy part are the legs which KATW and yourself mentioned previously.
The legs kinda remind me of Mega-man's legs. I kid you not. Aside from that. I like her outfit as well. Nice job Kirbster. |
| Kirbynite Posts: 298/1334 |
I guess I'll get to it But I'm gonna say that she's gonna be drawn in a more chibi/super deformed fashion, because it takes me about 10% of the time it takes me to draw stuff like that |
| Skydude Posts: 472/2607 |
Ah, good to have a nice mental image for Hikari...though maybe you should draw her in A Western Tale clothes so those of us in the story don't have to mentally switch outfits? |
| Kirbynite Posts: 296/1334 |
Sidenote: Yes, those are being pushed up. Just don't tell Hikari I said that ;
Gahh! The belt! I knew I wasn't paying attention to something... And just for you, Grey, I'll show the normal version of Hikari. (It wasn't drawn by me, but I colored it) |
| Schweiz oder etwas Posts: 714/2046 |
Surprisingly, that's not actually the way I imagined her. But it's very, very close. |
| Kattwah Posts: 1279/3349 |
Oh good lord, that anime... that sparked so many balloon jokes it wasnt funny XD
Either way, the only complaints I have are that the belt looks... flat and plain, and the boots... yeah... you said that already .
Nice picture none-the-less...  |
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