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me99909

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Posted on 02-06-05 10:07 PM Link | Quote
For years now, a strange, "magic" portal has set foot on Amestris. This strange portal releases monsterous creatures by the dozens which ravage the land. The Burning Blade Alchemist has been fighting them ever since the monsters came and destoryed his hometown, along with both his parents and the alchemist that first taught him Alchemy. Now comes the hardest assignment yet the face the Burning Blade Alchemist, journay to the portal and destroy it.

OOC: The Buring Blade Alchemist's name is Stephan Reiken

Colonal Trake:"You have done everything the State has set before you, and did them all to perfection."

Stepan: "Thank you Sir."

Colonal Trake: "You know full well that every attempt to get to the Portal has failed, and only one lived from trying to get to it. As you know, the King personally selects the best of the best to go, and yet not one party has yet succeded. The King has chosen you to go and try to destroy the portal."

Stepan: "I will do my best in destroying the Portal, Sir!"

Stepan turns around. The double doors swing open, revealing two unfamilar persons.

Colonal Trake: These two will be helping you...


OOC: This is the world of Fullmetal Alchemist, but it has been tainted by demonic magic. While Alchemy may seem like magic, it is a carefully studied science that is used to enforce the law higher up than simple town police.
Those two who join, may choose any char they so desire, whether of this world or not. If you are Familar with Fullmetal Alchemist, then you will have an easy time of this. Otherwise, ask me anything you want to know.
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Posted on 02-10-05 06:07 AM Link | Quote
*one of the figures stepped forth*

I am Neon. Even though I haven't been studying Alchemy that long, I've already reach the levels of a State Alchemist. I am proud to be under yor service.

*he took another step forward and tripped forward onto his face*
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Posted on 02-11-05 07:47 PM Link | Quote
OOC: I have senn two episodes of fma so i think this wont be that much of a problem.

A man looking like he was very calm but yet strict came in he had a cape ,a pair of sunglasses, and finaly a alchemist sign (or what they were called in fma) showing he knew his stuff.

Whats up my codename is dragon master, i would rather not give anyone my name the first time i mett him. And just so you know i got my codename for a reason.

He then took up neon from the floor without any challenge at all.

I hope you heard that because i dont want to repeat myself.

He then put neon down and sat down on a chair.


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XXIX

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Posted on 02-12-05 12:19 AM Link | Quote
*brushes himself off*

I could have done that myself.

*he glares at "Dragon Master"*

ANd what's the deal with not giving us your name!!! I gave him mine!!! Its common courtesy!!!!
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Posted on 02-12-05 12:27 AM Link | Quote
Dragon master stood up showing how tall he really was and walked over to neon.

If you deserve to know my name i shall give it to you sonner or later.

He then used his alchemy to create a wall betwen him and neon and said.

But for know i dont want to see you!

He then walked to the chair,sat down and started chewing on some chewing gum


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Posted on 02-12-05 12:34 AM Link | Quote
Why you!!!!! I'll...

*punches the wall*

I'll show you!!!

*continually punches the wall*
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Posted on 02-12-05 12:57 AM Link | Quote
If you continue like that i'll show you why i am named Dragon master.


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Posted on 02-12-05 01:25 AM Link | Quote
Go ahead and try!!!

*he takes out a piece of chalk and draws an Alchemy Circle on the wall. he puts the chalk away and puts his hands on the circle. Hueg vines appear on the other side of the wall, and start to whip around, banging into the walls and celing and floor*
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Posted on 02-12-05 01:36 AM Link | Quote
Dragon master gets out of the chair avoid the vines and transform the wall to a huge living stone dragon the dragon then takes neon in his jaws and spits him onto the wall. Dragon master then transform the dragon to an axe an throws it hitting the wall one millimetre away from neon

And next time i'll actually try to hit you.

Dragon master then takes out another stone dragon to guard him. he then looks at stepan who hasent said a thing after Dragon master came in.


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Posted on 02-12-05 04:46 AM Link | Quote
OOC: You guys post two fast.... There will also be another who joins us. I expect you two to take this a bit more seriously.

Colonal Trake shakes his head...

Colonal Trake: "Both of you, behave yourselves!"

Colonal Trake: "I'm sorry Stephan, These two will not make your mission easier as you travel. I also have something to show you. He will also be going with you, but his appearence will startle you. He should be here soon."

Stephan: "Any help is good."

These two defineatly have issuses. But this third.. that is unusual.
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Posted on 02-12-05 04:48 AM Link | Quote
A strange figure whose body was completely covered with black armor was in the back of the room.

Bone Angel: "Hi. My name is... well, it's weird so I'll just tell you my codename. I am Bone Angel. Why Bone Angel? "Bone" for control over the souless. "Angel" becease of what is under the armor. Colonel? You already did the presentations?... or shall I continue on?"

Bone Angel's voice was quite... unnatural. There was no other adjective. It was unlike any voice they had heard. It was as if the being speaking was not human...


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Posted on 02-12-05 04:53 AM Link | Quote
Stephan looks at the strange figure.

Colonel Trake: "I expect you all to keep this under wraps, so go ahead and show them Bone Angel."

Trake shivers at the thought of what is about to happen.
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Posted on 02-12-05 05:13 AM Link | Quote
OOC: That would be what we call God-modding, Dragon Master. Just sayin.

*Neon looks at the newcomer with curiousity*


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Posted on 02-12-05 05:17 AM Link | Quote
Suddenly, Bone Angel's armor broke down into thousands of pieces, revealing the newcomer's true identity.

Before them was no longer a being in armor... there was now a tiny form-less mass of flesh with a single sky-blue eye in the middle. It was barely half the size of a regular human. The being's 8 long tentacles with head-shaped hands clashed with the body. The tentacles were so long and yet, the body was so small...

Also, while the being seemed to have no bone in it's body, it still wasn't crawling on the ground like a slime. In fact, for some reason, it was floating a bit above the ground... and even more strange was that altought it seemed to float above the ground, it was still affected by gravity. It was as if the being truly had invisible legs or something...

Bone Angel: "Did you ever heard of the captured intelligent monster named "Unholy Legion" that has been terrorising towns by haunting the graveyards and somehow "eat" the bodies of the dead? Well... I am that monster. Officially, I was terminated years ago... but they have secretly used me for missions that are too dangerous for regular humans. I'll let you stare at me and make an opinion for yourself... and then, when you're done watching me, you'll get me a new armor and will let Trake begin the actual briefing!"


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Posted on 02-12-05 05:23 AM Link | Quote
*snorts*

Trust me, I've seen worse.

*an apparent lie. he hadn't*

I agree, though. I missed the preliminary briefing.
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Posted on 02-12-05 11:44 AM Link | Quote
Dragon master starts looking at bone angel. And after a while he says

So you were that unholy legion...... Well at least i know what will happen to my body if i die on this mission.

He then looks forward at trake to see when he will begin the briefing


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Posted on 02-13-05 06:48 AM Link | Quote
Stephan pulls into a battle stance, ready to use alchemy

Colonal Trake: "Stand down, he is unlike those that you have fought. He can tell you about the Portal."

Stephan refuses to relax, but does not attack.
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Posted on 02-13-05 07:11 AM Link | Quote
*looks at stephan*

I suggest you calm down. I got the feeling we're gonna be travelin with BA for a while.
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Posted on 02-13-05 10:01 PM Link | Quote
Bone Angel closed his eye for a while and then, he began to speak.

Bone Angel: "We aren't talking about any portal... we're talking about the Portal itself. The Portal... is a mysterious vortex that allow passage trought the human world and the world of the monsters, where I was born. Normally, the Portal only opens once per millenias or something like that and only let up to 4 people pass trought... but something went wrong with the Portal. It has opened itself and just won't close. As such, thousands and thousands of monsters pass trought it everyday and even as we speak. However, that, in itself is not the main threat of the Portal. Monsters have always found a way into your world and humanity was never destroyed. In fact, most of the monsters cohabit peacefully with humans without ever being noticed. As such, the arrival of more peaceful, harmless "monsters" won't harm humanity... even if among these monsters, they are some that are worthy of their bad reputation. The main threat is that the Portal can be controlled."

Bone Angel paused.

Bone Angel: "Humanity can handle the few aggressive monsters that flow from the Portal at the current rate they are arriving... but if a human with evil intentions or a monster overlord was to take control of the Portal, I fear that no force in the entire world could stop this being. Furthermore, I do not think that it is possible to seal the Portal. No matter what, it will continue to send monsters. As such, the Portal must be destroyed. It's terrible power must never become the property of any being, human or monster!"

Bone Angel suddenly realised something...

Bone Angel: "OOPS! Sorry Colonel! I think I explained everything while you were the one that was supposed to explain everything... Well! Anyway! I bet I forgot some key details so I'll let you continue on."
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Posted on 02-14-05 04:41 AM Link | Quote
*stares at Bone Angel*

That just went through one ear and out the other. I thought all monsters were bad...
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