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Alastor the Stylish
Hey! I made a cool game! It's called "I poisoned half the food, so if you eat you might die!" Have a taco.


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Posted on 01-13-05 12:19 AM Link | Quote
There are three reasons that it's been so long since I last displayed progress:

1. College is hard.
2. So is making a good ghost house tileset.
3. I'm lazy.

Note that there area few old pics mixed in with the new ones because there are a lot of people who have joined recently and never saw them. I didn't feel it necessary to make lots and lots and lots of pics and upload them - just enough so people get the feel of what I'm doing with it. So anyway... Here are eight nine eleven pics.













EDIT: Oh, and I'd like to thank GoYo for allowing me use of his backgrounds. I mean, again. He's awesome. Very awesome. And nice.


(edited by Kyouji Craw on 01-12-05 04:25 PM)
(edited by Kyouji Craw on 01-12-05 04:25 PM)
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Posted on 01-13-05 12:38 AM Link | Quote
I like the font. Not enough people change the font.
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Posted on 01-13-05 12:42 AM Link | Quote

Those re-designed Monty Moles are way cool. Took me a while to figure out what the holes in the ground were, though. Go me.


The colors seem a bit...drab. Might just be the gray road though. Might be your intention, too.

Also, the little hills in the water seem a bit odd looking. I think it's the green color.


Creepy. I likes it.


The new font for the status bar is neat. Looks better than the original. Not sure I like the little powerup box thingy, the name of which escapes me, but that's just a question of style.


Ravens. Sweet. Those replace the Goombas, right?


Don't see anything wrong with this one.


That background freaked me out because I thought you were using transparency or something. Looks good, though. I can't figure out what those light blue things are, though. They look kinda like doors, but then there's one behind spikes, so I assume it's part of the background. Looks a little odd. Also, that's a really long time limit.


Seems kinda boring. No background or layer 3 fishies. I like the bloober though.

Overall, looks good. I look forward to playing it.

EDIT: Served by editing. Nice updates, though, and the fishies help a lot.


(edited by TheCube on 01-13-05 12:11 AM)
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Posted on 01-13-05 12:44 AM Link | Quote
Screen 1: Are those walking eyeballs? They look alright, I like how you reconfigured the monty mole holes.

Screen 2: OW looks decent, I like the dark effect to it.

Screen 3: Er...Mario head?

Screen 4: Nothing too impressive here.

Screen 5: Nice ravens, which sprites do they replace?

Screen 6: Pretty nice BG.

Screen 7: Good BG, but I'd suggest making the FG darker.

Screen 8: Looks a bit plain, interesting squid at the end.

Overall, it looks okay.
Alastor the Stylish
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Posted on 01-13-05 12:55 AM Link | Quote
In response to your comments, I've changed a few things around and gotten a few better pics, if you would look again.
Golden Yoshi

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Posted on 01-13-05 01:01 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Kyouji Craw

EDIT: Oh, and I'd like to thank GoYo for allowing me use of his backgrounds. I mean, again. He's awesome. Very awesome. And nice.


Don't thank me, I didn't make either of those BG's. The cave BG is from the ExGFX workshop, and the castle BG was ripped by FPI.
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Posted on 01-13-05 01:02 AM Link | Quote
Well well well. Lemme put out my results for these screens here.

S1: I can't recognize those sprites, but its a pretty decent screen.
S2: That dark effect. Very nice...
S3: Looks very plain.... Mario's head?
S4: Decent..
S5: A few new sprites.. Pretty good.
S6: The middle part of the bg looks way different from the other parts of the bg.. Its not a problem, I'm just pointing it out.
S7: Hmm.. That bg there looks like its from Castlevania. Nice work!
S8: Nothing to interesting there...
S9: Pretty nice..
Alastor the Stylish
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Posted on 01-13-05 01:06 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Golden Yoshi
Don't thank me, I didn't make either of those BG's. The cave BG is from the ExGFX workshop, and the castle BG was ripped by FPI.
Ah, I see. You will note that I did some retooling of the backgrounds to better fit my tastes. And I'ma thank you anyway, since you're awesome

Chris: You don't recognize them because I hand-drew them =/
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Posted on 01-13-05 01:37 AM Link | Quote
1: Nice, love the ? block. The font seems too small, though.
2: Pretty dark, Mario looks rather out of place. The small font actually looks pretty good for OW names.
3: Cool for weirdness' sake.
4: Nice ravens.
5: I like how the ground isn't totally flat, but the big bumps at the sides of the hole look odd.
6: Cool. The blue thing does look a bit out of place if it is indeed part of the BG though.
7: Not bad, but the cement blocks don't really fit underwater, and the BG should be a little darker. (For that matter, maybe a real BG would be good.)
8: Cool idea but it looks crappy, the water's too bright. A palette change would probably fix it.
9: Looks neat. Now how's Mario to get out of there? The Boos especially look awesome.
10: Again, very nice. Ghost Guys > Eeries.
11: Aaah, my eyes! Other than the black and white stripes, it looks good, but you might want to lower the ground a bit so it's not taking up half the screen.
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Posted on 01-13-05 02:24 AM Link | Quote
looking very nice, no complaints.
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Posted on 01-13-05 02:35 AM Link | Quote
No one ever changes the font.


The screenshots are good, with the Mario heads (Koopa shells, for those who don't know)... Other than that, not much.

The font could definitely be improved, it's too small. Look at this, which was developed before that:



That used to be mine.

(and yes, that worked in game. I changed two palette entries.)


(edited by Xkeeper on 01-12-05 05:35 PM)
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Posted on 01-13-05 02:50 AM Link | Quote
I'll start off with the bad things.
1. The lights in the Ghost House BG look... Off.
2. The first water screenshot is kinda bland.
3. The title screen hurts my eyes.

Now for the good points.
1. The new graphics are great.
2. Nice font.
3. The sprite changes are good. (the eyeball thingies are kinda creepy though)
4. Cave BG is sweet.
5. OW looks good, but the lighting is kinda strange... It's like a bright cloudy day.
6. The Item Reserve Box looks good.

All in all, looking good! Just spruce things up a bit, and you'll have a great hack!
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Posted on 01-13-05 08:42 AM Link | Quote
Bad:
-The blue mountains look a bit contrasty
-The shot with the head needs some decoration to liven the scenery
-The lights need more of a gradiation. Right now it can easily be mistaken as a glitch.
-The underwater scene lacks decoration and a background more less. I could understand the problem if you were using layer 3 however.

Good:
-Wow, you're actually making up some sprites! Eyeballs are fun, and squishy!
-The head was a creative idea
-The YI graphics were pretty nicely assembled
-The change in letters shows that effort has been put into the hack
Alastor the Stylish
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Posted on 01-13-05 08:49 AM Link | Quote
Thanks for your input, everyone. Some of your comments have been taken in to consideration

Also, the little walking eyeball is called Eyetite... It's a cross between Eye and Tektite, which was the first thing that came to mind when Chris said he thought it was from Zelda.
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Posted on 01-13-05 08:00 PM Link | Quote
Cool Ghost House gfx, totally awesome. Actually, all of the graphics are awesome...except the title screen. You might want to consider changing that. Well, I see some nice cameo appearances from ravens and bloopers. Good jorb.
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Posted on 01-14-05 02:47 AM Link | Quote
1: No complaints
2: Darker Palette = Rock!
3: BG... maybe a bit too blue... Good none-the-less.
4: Nothing Wrong
5: Please tell me you are changing the ? block animation
6: Mmm... Cavey. FG clashes with BG a bit.
7: Nothing wrong
8: Blue BG just does not work with water levels.
9: Water.
10: Ghost...
11: Shy guy
12: MY EYES THEY BURN! Please... no diagonal stripes

I see everything has improved... All except the still-flat status bar Needs more color.
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Posted on 01-14-05 04:40 AM Link | Quote
ok i know you probably answered this already, but since i was too lazy to read the entire thread, here comes the question> any idea for a demo release? *makes puppy eyes*
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Posted on 01-14-05 05:04 AM Link | Quote
Or he could just keep you drooling for a release. Most released demos aren't demo-type stuff, they're usually just the beginning of the game with the rest chopped off.

But yes, change the title screen. Arrhg, it burns.
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Posted on 01-14-05 11:11 AM Link | Quote
Am I the only one who likes the title screen? The diagonal stripes are...well, they're not pretty, but I still like them.
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Posted on 01-14-05 08:08 PM Link | Quote
With the right colors I think it'd have potential, but right now... *shudders*
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