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Sokarhacd

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Posted on 11-13-04 08:42 PM Link | Quote
Well, since many people dont look in the game creation forum, so I thought I would get some feedback on this title screen for a game im working on...the sword I did from scratch, I think the blood looks nice, it was way different, until I made it splattered....anyway. here is a link

http://gametech.mihopa.com/Astaria/images/Titlescreen.png
a link because its 800x600 and 238kb

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Posted on 11-13-04 11:08 PM Link | Quote
I always thought blood should be smeared with a few splatters..

It looks quite nice, Just work on the blood bit a bit more, ok?
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Posted on 11-13-04 11:52 PM Link | Quote
Perhaps you could make use of all that black background in some way .

The text could blend in a little more, though it looks pretty good.
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Posted on 11-14-04 12:03 AM Link | Quote
well, in the center of the swords, will be taken up with the menu so its not gonna be all that blank when I get it into the game, and program everything right..


(edited by Dcahrakos on 11-13-04 03:10 PM)
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Posted on 11-14-04 01:23 AM Link | Quote
The flames on the text look completely out of place.

This is more of personal pickiness, but why would blood only appear at the tips of the swords? Is this a game where you poke people?
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Posted on 11-14-04 02:59 AM Link | Quote
Alrighty, here is the new titlescreen, along with a banner for the site

http://gametech.mihopa.com/Astaria/images/Titlescreen.png
http://gametech.mihopa.com/Astaria/images/banner.png
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Posted on 11-14-04 03:00 AM Link | Quote
looks pretty cool, good job Dcahrakos.
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Posted on 11-14-04 11:15 AM Link | Quote
What does a banner have to do with anything?

It's looking better now though, good improvement.
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Posted on 11-15-04 08:05 PM Link | Quote
The banner is for the Astaria Online website im working on, just thought I would show it along with the titlescreen.
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