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Gavin

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Posted on 08-21-04 05:54 PM Link | Quote



quickly as sunlight breaks the morning mists
and washes all the leading lands
tip-toe softly lest you wake
the walking numen with trembling hands
he'll cast us all of out grace
and past the shooting stars
self-righteous are the ripened jesters
hasting us to spurious wars

tread subdued limbs from tract to terrace
lest you entice unwanted eyes
fumbling forward try not to falter
never remove your weathered guise




...

ahh! big thing drop in sky. run fast.
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Posted on 08-25-04 01:48 PM Link | Quote
It sounds kind of neat. What's it mean? Nothing? Yeah, I used to do that too. You know, have vague ideas and form sentences that almost sound meaningful. Then I pulled my head out of my ass. Good start though.
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Posted on 08-25-04 04:18 PM Link | Quote
actually it's just discussing a situation:

walking quickly before the light (representing truth, insight, and understanding) shines on you or your beliefs. shout your lies just loud enough not to wake the wrath of god (numen), using his name unjustly to bolster your beliefs. it talks about self-serving jerks who throw us into war. keep on pushing through, don't take off your mask. never show your true face or intentions to any person...or nation ( i beleive the situation the poem is about should now be explained )

the comet in the picture is approaching disaster.
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Posted on 08-25-04 04:33 PM Link | Quote
Damn. You didn't get all upset when I insulted your poetry, you just explained yourself. That completely defeats my plan. =(

Why is it all in lowercase? And why all the whitespace and non-italics? Bah. Formatting without reason makes me pee my pants and cry.
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Posted on 08-25-04 04:59 PM Link | Quote
hah, oh that?

it's probably for the same reason you fellate yourself every night. and no, i'm not suggesting your dick is that large, i'm suggesting that your head is so big that your mouth can't help but find it's way to your cock.

hey bud, have a good one
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Posted on 08-25-04 05:01 PM Link | Quote
Interesting. Is that your next poem? I wish to buy the rights to it and sell it to the smithsonian institute of retards.
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Posted on 08-25-04 05:06 PM Link | Quote
as you can probably tell from the first post, i'm not known for literary merit. Nor have i learned the tangential skill of message board insulting. well played.

*gavin shrugs* fuckit.
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Posted on 08-25-04 05:09 PM Link | Quote
It's easy. Talk shit and don't let up. Occasionally drop hints that you're unserious, so that when someone tries to take action you can claim you were joking and they don't have a sense of humor.

Good job placing yourself on the moral high ground by the way. I think I'll involuntarily suck my own dick now. =(
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Posted on 08-25-04 05:14 PM Link | Quote
haha, i was hardly going for high moral ground. i was only saying that i realized that most, if not all, of any additional posts i would make would probably be countered by anything you would have to say. i'm sure if i had the means and skills at hand, i'd keep going.

suck or dont suck, at your own discression.
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Posted on 08-26-04 10:49 AM Link | Quote
Seriously though, you done good by not rising to my stupid bait that first time. I just hate poetry.
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