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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30  Posts: 174/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| This is a story that you are free to submit a part onto it. I write a part, and then you submit a new piece of the story! Interesting, huh? Well, here goes... ----- Do you remember the time that Ash and his pals, with Rayquaza, defeat Deoxys? Well, you thought Deoxys was gone for good then, right? Well, you were wrong. Deoxys was thought to have been vanquished. But little did anyone know that it had return to it's initial form; a very smart, very powerful disesae microbe from space. It somehow made it's way to Mossdeep's Space Station, where it was hit by a laser. It was then reborn. Now it can swap forms- it can go from Normal to any one of it's forms- speed, offense or shield. And now, nothing can stand against it... KA-BLAM! BOOM! CRASH! SLAM! "Aaaaaaaah!" one of the professors in the examination room screamed. The medical team headed over th the room. They opened the door... They noticed the power for this room had been cut. They heard a small crash, like a tiny, tiny test tube falling, breaking... They looked th their right, and switched on their flashlights... Then, the beam hit something. Something orange and green. It leapt! Two of the three medics fell to the floor, out cold. They would be okay, but fo now were unconcious. "My rebirth has proven that I cannot be stopped!" a malicious voice said from the darkness. "And don't worry about escaping. I cut all of the power while you were away from the shuttle! But I'm not going back, not yet. I have a little score to settle...against your entire species!" The third medic fell to the floor, out cold like the others. ----- The astronauts and researchers quickly noticed the power fKitten Yiffer. "Low power." a computerized voice said. Halfway between preparing for launch, the shuttle stopped. All was still and dark. Then, a huge chunk of the ceiling smashed down! It didn't hurt anyone, but it pinned down a researcher! That researcher was an old man named...Dr. Fuji... "I see you're suprised by my return! Your computers almost let you know I can return to virus form at any time. I'm the DNA Pokemon, but also a SHAPESHIFTER Pokemon! I erased the data, though. I wanted it to be a suprise! Well, here I am! And here I go!" The lights came back on. Suddenly, like ropes, every cable in the room snapped and bound the researchers, binding them, immobilizing them! Deoxys leapt away from the now badly damaged island of Mossdeep and switched to Offense mode. It headed to Pallet Town... ----- "Whew, that path was tiring, but here we are, back at Pallet!" Oak said to Ash, May, Misty and Brock. "I didn't know Aipom lived here!" Ash exclaimed! "They're very hard to spot." Brock commented. "Well, I'd better head back to the Lab." Oak said. At least, that's what he would've said. Because right at that instant, Deoxys grabbed him and sped into a remote part of Pallet Town- into the jungle-like forest! "Professor!" Ash and Brock called after Oak! They quickly gave chase, running off as fast as they could into the uncharted and undiscovered territory... ----- However, one person had not witnessed the chase scene. May had fallen so far behind that by the time she made it to Pallet town, the others were miles away. Of course, Deoxys had been running so fast (it had switched to Speed mode), it had destroyed all of the trees in it's wake, leaving a clear path. May suddenly realized where the others were! But what could she do? She stood there, not knowing what to do, confused, wondering what had made the others run into the undiscovered, uncharted forests, what had destroyed all of those trees, what had happened. What should she do next? (edited by MetalBlueKirby on 08-12-04 07:15 PM) |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66  Posts: 481/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| OOC: Okay I'll participate, but just so everyone knows, I'm using a character I'll never use in any other stories or battles. This is a temporary Schwa. "Squaaaaaak!" called Spirit from above, quite alarmed. Schwa looked up at the steel bird. "Whoa, what's wrong Spirit?" he called to it. Spirit flew down and landed in front of him. The metal bird then started making a low, grinding sound, a sign that it knew of great danger. This seriously alarmed Schwa. "Take me to it and we'll settle this. Sparky and Chirpy, assist me." Schwa flicked 2 Pokeballs backward, and in a brilliant flash of light, an old, elite Raichu and wily Fearow were revealed, ready for a day's adventure. "Sparky, on Chirpy," Schwa commanded as he pointed. "Spirit, you and I lead the way." Schwa leaped up and landed on his young Skarmory. The two birds then took to the air, Spirit leading them all toward the commotion in the forest. None of them had ANY idea exactly how much danger they could be getting themselves into. |
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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30 Posts: 176/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| Nice addition! Very good. ----- Ash, Brock and Misty had caught up to Deoxys, which had stopped at a crater. "You have no idea where you are, do you?" Deoxys said calmly. "That thing can talk?!?" Misty screeched in suprise. "Oh, yes. I can talk very well. I am very proficient. But that is not why I am here. There is another Deoxys. A good Deoxys. Destroy him for me...and I will let the Pokemon Professor Oak live, and he shall be returned to safety." "And how are we supposed to know you aren't lying?" Brock countered. "That is easy...if I was lying, I would've destroyed you right now for saying that!" Brock whispered to Ash and Misty, "Don't do it. We need to preserve any resistance we have against it. A good Deoxys is obviously considered 'resistance.' If there's nobody to stand against it, this Deoxys will have a clear field for world domination, and possibly worldwide destruction!" Ash could not believe what he was hearing. But, just then, Schwa, riding on Spirit was in the area. Misty whispered to Ash and Brock, "There's a trainer riding on a bird Pokemon above us. Don't let Deoxys know!!" But Schwa didn't have time to land. Deoxys switched to Offense mode and whipped out a tentacle, smashing it into Spirit. Spirit fainted. Schwa called on Fearow, which swung by. He grabbed a clawed foot, and then recalled Spirit. But the weight was too much. The trio fell to the ground, at the mercy of Deoxys. But then, the good Deoxys arrived. He switched to offense mode. It was a Deoxys showdown! Suddenly, May came tumbling through the woods... |
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Grey the Stampede Don't mess with powers you don't understand. And yes. That means donuts. Level: 82  Posts: 640/3770 EXP: 5192909 For next: 16318 Since: 06-17-04 From: Kingston, RI, USA, Earth Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| OOC: Man, I've always wanted to do one of these... A large squawk filled the Pallet forest as Grey was awoken from his bed! At first, he thought it was just Blazer coming back from a hunt, but lo and behold, a Fearow with a strangely clothed young man on board was slammed into the ground not a football field's distance from his house. Grey: "What the hell? What was that?" Grey immediately sprung out of his bed, pulled on some clothes, and ran outside his house, only to see none other than Deoxys itself, two of them even, battling it out within the forest! "Wow! This'll be a day to remember for sure... Blazer!!! We've got something to investigate!" Blazer, a bright green Scyther, tore through the foliage and leaped to Grey's side. It was a bit beat-up, the survivor of many a Pokemon battle, but it definitely had both health and experience on its side. Grey never kept it in a Pokeball, honestly he didn't see the point. If he allowed it to run wild, he knew it'd get to be a strong and wise Pokemon that'd serve him well and regard him as not only a trainer, but a friend, too. "Come on buddy, let's get moving. That's one heck of a Pokemon, and we're gonna go see just how much heck it can give!" |
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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30 Posts: 196/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| Nice addition! That was also very good. ----- Grey arrived at the Deoxys sight. He had gotten there only moments after the Deoxys showdown. Good Deoxys went to speed, charged Deoxys, slammed him... but Evil Deoxys had went shield, blocking and deflecting all damage. Good Deoxys was sent flying a few feet away. It lay there, motionless... |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 482/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| OOC: MetalKirby, try not to control my character. You can say that my Pokemon fainted, but who said I wanted Fearow to help? *sigh* Well, let me work with what I got... Schwa stared at the fainted Skarmory. "Damn, this is gonna be one heck of a fight. I didn't even believe in legendaries until now... Let me revive Spirit here." Schwa pulled a Max Revive out of his pack, and sprayed it on Spirit. Within 5 seconds, Spirit was back at full health and awake. "Okay, we need a plan. We need to overpower it somehow. For instance, can it defend against 5 Pokemon at once including thunderbolts from the sky? Sparky, we'll need you for this." The stalwart Raichu gave a nod in approval, and leaped on Spirit's back. Spirit then took to the sky, ready to assist if possible. Schwa pointed a Pokeball at Chirpy. "Chirpy, that's all." In a flash of red light, Chirpy was restored to his ball. Schwa then bravely pulled 3 more balls from his belt, and flinged them up. "Boomer, Glyph, and Foxfire... assist us now." Out of the balls appeared a ninjalike Marowak, a peaceful looking Gardevoir, and a sleek Ninetales. Schwa then called to the evil Deoxys, "Exactly how good are your social skills? Or do I want to find out?" |
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Grey the Stampede Don't mess with powers you don't understand. And yes. That means donuts. Level: 82 Posts: 647/3770 EXP: 5192909 For next: 16318 Since: 06-17-04 From: Kingston, RI, USA, Earth Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| OOC: Schwa, I haven't played Ruby and Sapphire, only Red, Silver, and Yellow, so you're gonna have to forgive me if I ask what kind of Pokemon you're pulling out, should you use one from R/S. I realize Deoxys is a R/S Pokemon too, but I know about him, he's pretty famous. Grey: "What? Two of them? And they're destroying everything in sight!" Grey sees the spray of Pokemon flashing from the balls that Schwa pulled from his belt, and realizes this is gonna be a huge rumble... Grey: "Alright, I don't know what's going on here, but I'm definitely gonna help, especially if that big Pokemon's gonna try to hurt innocent people!" Pulling a trio of Pokeballs from his belt, Grey releases some of his best fighters; From one ball came Windy, a beautiful, red crested Pidgeot. From the second, Slink, a small, but quick and nimble Furret. And from the third, Hodge, a.... Jigglypuff? Grey (breaking the fourth wall): "Hey, you'd be surprised at what it can do... OK, guys, ready to go?" A chorus of irritatingly cute voices screamed out their own names in unison, as Grey sent them all off to what would probably be certain doom at the hands of Deoxys. Blazer stayed behind. |
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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30 Posts: 213/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| sorry 'bout usage o' your chars, Schwa. ----- Ash attacked the evil Deoxys with Pikachu. But May whispered, "Ash! Both of those Deoxys are gonna destroy this entire area if we don't hurry!" But Ash was focused on the fact that Pikachu had hit not the evil Deoxys, but the good one. "Aw, darn it, how am I supposed to help if I can't tell which is which?!? I lost track hours ago!" Ash exclaimed. "But it's only been 45 minutes!" Misty said, puzzled. "Hey, you're right..." Brock said, looking at his watch... The showdown continued. Deoxys v.s. Deoxys! And nobody could help without risking the fact they could hit the good Deoxys as well as the evil one. "Perhaps..." Brock said. He whispered a quick comment as the good Deoxys came by. And suddenly, to everyone's suprise, the good Deoxys turned from orange and green to blue and yellow! "Now we know!" Brock said. "Pikachu! Use your Thunder on the evil Deoxys! The orange one!" Ash commanded. "Starmie and Staryu, team up and spray that Deoxys away! The orange one!" Misty ordered. The Pokemon tag-teamed to take Deoxys down. Good Deoxys went to speed and charged the evil one. Pikachu used Thunder, and Starmie and Staryu used Hydro Pump! But that still wasn't enough... ===== Well? We need to do something! Is this the end of the Pokemon world? ===== |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 490/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| OOC: Look for Gardevoir pics on Google to see a picture, I guess. I tried to post a picture of her but couldn't get it to work... Glyph, the Gardevoir stares directly into the evil Deoxys's eyes. It seems like nothing is happening, but unknown to anyone but the Pokemon, Glyph is psychically talking to Deoxys. "What is the purpose of your fighting?" she says. "Anger is senseless. Nobody here will try to harm you, for my trainer Schwa is peace-loving. Tell me why you must fight!" Schwa, Boomer and Foxfire get ready to rumble with the Deoxys if necessary. |
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APH Striker Spiny Level: 37  Posts: 306/579 EXP: 321882 For next: 16371 Since: 05-17-04 From: Tacoma, WA Since last post: 58 days Last activity: 58 days |
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| OOC: I've been thinking that this kind of story would show up sooner or later. Oh, by the way, the character I'm using is NOT the real APH. APH is having a peaceful walk in the woods when, to his suprise, he is hit by a big explosion. He looks around and sees...Deoxys? And Ash? And a bunch of other dudes? "What's going on? It looks like a Pokemon massacre! I'm joining in!" He gets out two pokeballs and sends them out. The balls explode into a Victreebel and a Cloyster. "Quick, Victreebel, use Sleep Powder!" The Grass guy uses Sleep Powder on both Deoxys. |
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Zerodius Aquamentus Level: 65  Posts: 577/2036 EXP: 2243783 For next: 91845 Since: 03-16-04 From: ??? Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 2 days |
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| Off: As always... I'm going to use a Chronicles of Darkness character for this RP... only this one shall be modified a bit... in fact, only the name and physical appearance remain. Also... you'll surely notice that my character is acting as if it was all-powerful and all... but do not worry, I'm not going to god-mod. My character isn't all-powerful... yet. (NOTE: My character is neither a good guy or a villain. Depending on the way the other characters will interact with my character, I may choose to turn it into a good guy or villain.) Of course, if you have problems with my character, all you have to do is PM me and I'll change it/delete it. ____________________________________________________________________ A shadow in front of the evil Deoxys... ??? "I have waited for a long time for this to happen..." The shadow took a physical form. ??? "My name is Ex. I have fought with all of the so-called legendary creatures alive... and yet, all that I encountered was weakness and foolishness. Of all creatures, only 2 were able to show me true power..." The creature who called herself "Ex" turned around and stared at Ash... Ex: "...but these two creatures destroyed each others... while they're still alive, their power was sealed so that they wouldn't destroy the world as such... I am left with only one reason to live... to increase my power and become what my creators intended me to evolve into... and for this, I need to see the power of all other creatures..." The shadow revealed it's true form! It was some kind of female humanoid pichu?!? Ex: "...Will you fight with me? Or do you fear that the outcome wouldn't be in your advantage?" |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 495/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| Schwa and ALL his Pokemon stare at the female humanoid Pichu like it's insane. Totally offstruck, they are. Then, secretly, Glyph talks to the evil Deoxys again. "Maybe you should fight it. You'd know more about it than I would... I'm only a Gardevoir..." |
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APH Striker Spiny Level: 37 Posts: 308/579 EXP: 321882 For next: 16371 Since: 05-17-04 From: Tacoma, WA Since last post: 58 days Last activity: 58 days |
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| "WHAT?" APH is shocked at the oddity standing near him. "I'm probably underestimating it, based on it's appearence here." He calls back his Pokemon. and sees what happens next. | |||
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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30 Posts: 236/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| That's amazing! I'd have never thought of THAT! Nice! ----- Ash pulls out Pikachu. But then, ANOTHER trainer arrives. "Ex, return!" He holds out his Poke Ball. But nothing happens. Ex: I disabled the Poke Ball when I escaped, puny human. Ex slashes the air. A huge gust of wind blows the trainer back. Trainer: Go!...RAYQUAZA! Attack Ex now! Use OUTRAGE! Rayquaza sped toward Ex. It was a legendary showdown! The Deoxys awakened and continued to fight! Ash's Pikachu joined in and attacked Ex! May uses Torchic to distract Deoxys...and realizes she forgot to heal it at the Pokemon Center! It's still fainted from their last adventure! Misty: Staryu, Starmie, Psyduck! Group attack! Psyduck acquired a headache when it stumbled into evil Deoxys' path. It used many psychic attacks that it didn't even know against evil Deoxys! Staryu used Hydro Pump on the evil Deoxys, blasting it away...'cept that Staryu missed and hit a wandering tourist. Tourist: The service here stinks! But Starmie went for Ex. Ex was fighting very well, using a combo of strength, agility, karate and electrical attacks. Ash could not believe his eyes. "Man, how are we gonna bring that thing down?!?" He asked to no one in particular. ----- What should Ash and the others do next? You have to hurry! The fate of the Pokemon World is at stake!! (edited by MetalBlueKirby on 08-14-04 11:00 AM) |
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 497/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| OOC: You're controlling others' characters again, MetalKirby. I won't participate in this story if you keep doing that. It's not fair. | |||
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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30 Posts: 252/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| sry, i have too much of a habit...i'll try more...hard...whatever...sry...sry...and sry. | |||
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Zerodius Aquamentus Level: 65 Posts: 579/2036 EXP: 2243783 For next: 91845 Since: 03-16-04 From: ??? Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 2 days |
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| Off: Actually... Ex has NO trainer. She is an independant pokemon. I consider that MetalBlueKirby's post never existed. | |||
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MetalBlueKirby Mole Permaban - You didn't learn from your ban. Level: 30 Posts: 266/365 EXP: 154566 For next: 11303 Since: 06-29-04 From: Dream Land, Popstar Planet Since last post: 435 days Last activity: 339 days |
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| oh. didn' know. sry, again. someone please post another part to replace mine. can't think of anythin'. | |||
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Schwa Green Birdo The Embodyment of Good, infused with the Living Assets "Alpha Psibeam!" (echo effects) Level: 66 Posts: 520/2214 EXP: 2457091 For next: 4760 Since: 04-25-04 From: Spanaway, WA Since last post: 1 day Last activity: 13 hours |
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| OOC: Hey, guys... This story was turning out pretty good, uh, what are we gonna do now that MBK is banned? Should we continue without him? | |||
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APH Striker Spiny Level: 37 Posts: 329/579 EXP: 321882 For next: 16371 Since: 05-17-04 From: Tacoma, WA Since last post: 58 days Last activity: 58 days |
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| Umm...I think we could continue this (MBK controlled a lot of characters anyway) but we need to have someone new to control what the Deoxys's do. If none of you want to do it, I will. Or, we could wait until 8/22... |
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