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Cruel Justice

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Posted on 07-21-04 05:38 AM Link | Quote

Here's a preview of my latest hack...
The demonstration alone took me about 3 hours to perfect.
I added some custom blocks like the conveyor treads. I had an idea to make a strange factory made of wood; like a mill. I will give this hack a japanese theme to it given the name "Shiranai Tabi!!!", which means "Strange Journey".

The theme to this particular level is an anchient steel mill with soot balls coming out of the attic. This was inspired by the stories my grandfather told me about the soot spirits that live in people's attics and chimineys.

I will have some of the levels complete and some updated pics posted here. The demo version is expected to be released next week. I'll provide a direct link to the ips patch once I finish the first world.


(edited by The_Raven on 07-20-04 08:40 PM)
(edited by The_Raven on 07-20-04 09:12 PM)
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:10 AM Link | Quote
Sounds like kind of a strange story, but a fat plumber having to beat up a giant dinosaur isn't?

I hope you implement a lot of the conveyor belts into the game, make the levels frantic.
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:17 AM Link | Quote
Cool. The title screen is REALLY over croweded. Try and move stuff into the bottom left or right cornors. You don't really need that 'property of' thing. Also, get rid of the wooden boarder at the top and bottom. This will give you more space to less over-crowd the screen.

EDIT: This will be in english tho right?


(edited by Keikonium on 07-20-04 10:17 PM)
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:43 AM Link | Quote

How's that?
I had all the sprites and such to add life to the intro and this is also a playable level, so you can expect a bit of a challenge!

[j/k] This is just there to intimidate the player a tad [j/k]
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:51 AM Link | Quote
MUCH BETTER! Just two things:

1. It looks like the top left cornors writing is cut off. Probably just because of cropping the screenshot.
2. Why do you need the MARIO name there? Is there not two player support that has luigi?

EDIT: Juast to be clear I didn't mean the sprites cluttered the pic, it was all the text, and boarder.


(edited by Keikonium on 07-20-04 10:52 PM)
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:57 AM Link | Quote
Eh, the top usually glitches when I take a screenshot, otherwise, it's no big deal.
The Mario is there like only mario shows up on the title "Super Mario World" never saw the name "Super Mario and Luigi World" before... But I guess I could add that too...
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:59 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by The_Raven
Eh, the top usually glitches when I take a screenshot, otherwise, it's no big deal.
The Mario is there like only mario shows up on the title "Super Mario World" never saw the name "Super Mario and Luigi World" before... But I guess I could add that too...


I guess....It just seems out of place, but its your hack, you do what you want.
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Posted on 07-21-04 08:15 AM Link | Quote
It's alright, although I am not totally dependant, I am open for criticism and suggestions; to me, people come first and I love to improve things. An improvement is one step closer to perfection and satisfaction among the people that admire your work. It's a very sincere form of flattery I am sure, and I thank you for it.
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Posted on 07-21-04 12:21 PM Link | Quote
Raven, if you want to say "strange journey", don't you think "fushigi na tabi" sounds a little better? "Shiranai tabi" sounds more like "a journey that I don't know about". Or if "unknown journey" appeals more, how about a somewhat-classic sounding "shirarezaru tabi"?
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Posted on 07-21-04 01:16 PM Link | Quote
Uh, what's the RRH on the title screen stand for? Raven Rom Hacks? I've been using "RRH" in my hacks for several years now (for "RuSteD ROM Hacks"), so you might want to change that...



*points at the bottom*

Other than that, looks pretty nice. Very clean and simple.


(edited by Neko54123 on 07-21-04 04:19 AM)
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Posted on 07-21-04 04:44 PM Link | Quote
Looks quite good... that could be so far the best usage of the SMAS doomship set I've seen in an SMW hack. If there weren't the bullet bill guns. The flat, windows-3.x-looking SMW original GFX in many aspects don't fit well with the rather 3dish windows 95-like SMAS stuff... imo. Try making something new or rip the SMAS bullet bill launchers (use TILER).

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(edited by blackhole89 on 07-21-04 07:45 AM)
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Posted on 07-21-04 07:39 PM Link | Quote
I like The_Ravens title screen, but you should change the rrh bit.
(Hes a mod! Trouble will happen )


(edited by Banzai_Bill on 07-21-04 10:39 AM)
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Posted on 07-21-04 10:35 PM Link | Quote
It looks good, but for the RRH, which you and Neko uses, change it to 'The_Raven Presents' or ' ARP = A Raven Production' or something like that, but don't use RRH, because you can get in trouble like Banzai_Bill said in his post.
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Posted on 07-21-04 11:29 PM Link | Quote

With your help, changes have been made! Thanks for the suggestions!
I am also thinking about animating the bullet bills as well...
TR2H stands for Thunder Realm Rom Hacks and the title has been changed to Fushigi Na Tabi...
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Posted on 07-22-04 12:14 AM Link | Quote
Yeah, comes good, but you may remove the three exlamation marks at the end of the title, makes it AOL-ish.
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Posted on 07-22-04 02:17 AM Link | Quote
Not using shirarezaru, huh?

Yeah, the exclamation points look silly. How about a tilde on either side?

~ Fushigi na Tabi ~
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Posted on 07-26-04 05:16 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by The_Raven

With your help, changes have been made! Thanks for the suggestions!
I am also thinking about animating the bullet bills as well...
TR2H stands for Thunder Realm Rom Hacks and the title has been changed to Fushigi Na Tabi...


Did you use custom blocks using blocktool for the conveyor belts?
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Posted on 07-26-04 06:18 AM Link | Quote
yay, i really loved those conveyor belts. very good use of smas gfx

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