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Populous

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Posted on 04-30-04 07:48 PM Link | Quote
Okay, iv`e got a great idea for hack,
but i doooon`t have a storyline!
My hack`s name is: Sun Island.
Can someone help me a bit?
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Posted on 04-30-04 07:54 PM Link | Quote
Maybe you find this story good.
Mario & The Princess are gonna take a vacation.
Bowser followed them in the Sun Island and kidnapped the Princess in Sun Island again.
Then Mario must rescue her a second time.

How is the story.
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Posted on 04-30-04 07:58 PM Link | Quote
I think it`s almost same as orginal.
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Posted on 04-30-04 08:00 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Hidden Mario
Maybe you find this story good.
Mario & The Princess are gonna take a vacation.
Bowser followed them in the Sun Island and kidnapped the Princess in Sun Island again.
Then Mario must rescue her a second time.

How is the story.
BOOOORRRRIIIINNNNGGG.
Really. Do you know how many times that has been used? Do you?
It's an overused plot idea. Invent something fresh and original.

Populous, I suggest that you read some books, and get some general ideas. If your school has any writing classes (like Creative Writing), take that course! It will help.

Populous

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Posted on 04-30-04 08:02 PM Link | Quote
Hmm... Maybe.
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Posted on 04-30-04 08:20 PM Link | Quote
How about Mario is lost in time and must find his way back, at the end of each castle he is transported to another time

sounds like the lost vikings though but could make for some neat graphical changes

or how about...he's jumping from reality to reality trying to find his way back to his reality....

sounds like sliders though but could make for some neat graphical changes

or how about...he's jumping from planet to planet trying to find his way back to his planet....

kinda sounds like farscape though but could make for some neat graphical changes
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Posted on 04-30-04 08:23 PM Link | Quote
How about all those ideas would require you to be unable to go back to previous worlds which, while possible, makes it so you can't go back and play the really fun levels over?
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Posted on 04-30-04 08:32 PM Link | Quote
HabsoluteFate: It`s name is Sun Island. Doh!
Kyouji "Kagami" Craw: No, i think it`s bit of boring.
To play levels again.
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Posted on 04-30-04 08:47 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Populous
HabsoluteFate: It`s name is Sun Island. Doh!
Kyouji "Kagami" Craw: No, i think it`s bit of boring.
To play levels again.



You're weird...

How about you make a game without a specific plot, and instead make it go to random levels you created, like DD did with Super Mario R?



By the way, why did you give it a name if you didn't even consider a storyline?
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Posted on 04-30-04 08:56 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Kefka
Originally posted by Populous
HabsoluteFate: It`s name is Sun Island. Doh!
Kyouji "Kagami" Craw: No, i think it`s bit of boring.
To play levels again.



You're weird...

EDIT:You`re weird too...

How about you make a game without a specific plot, and instead make it go to random levels you created, like DD did with Super Mario R?



EDIT:One word: What do you mean?

By the way, why did you give it a name if you didn't even consider a storyline?

EDIT:Because i think that name for 30 minutes.
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Posted on 04-30-04 09:46 PM Link | Quote
My idea:

Mario travels to Sun Island, a tropical island with fresh fruits, friendly people and relaxing sunshine. However, unknown to Mario, Bowser is still angry after his fKitten Yiffer in Super Mario Sunshine and have kidnapped "Sol", the god of sunshine. Unless "Sol" is returned to his temple within 5 days, the sun will dissappear, which would erase all life on the planet Earth. Mario must find Bowser and "Sol", return Sol to his temple and save the world from destruction.
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Posted on 04-30-04 11:44 PM Link | Quote
One day, Pimp-daddy Mario (that's the hero's name) was mackin' his bitch, Peach. Then, Bowser, the Lizard-Man Whore, says, "Hey, pimp! You've been mackin' this bitch long enough! I gotta get me some royal pussy too, you know!" So Lizard-Man Whore Bowser takes Peach to his crib. Pimp-daddy Mario must rescue his ho before Bowser shoots his wad!

I dunno. I was bored... In fact, I may make this into a hack...
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Posted on 04-30-04 11:55 PM Link | Quote
The Mushroom Kingdom has been pursuiting the known terrorist leader Bowser Koopa. You, Mario Mario, must infiltrate the Sun Islands, and search them for this creature. He is believed to have red hair, and a large shell.

Ok, not too good.
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Posted on 05-01-04 12:12 AM Link | Quote
I have to say mine's better.
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Posted on 05-01-04 12:42 AM Link | Quote
I concur wholeheartedly. What you say doesn't really fit, but, it's original.
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Posted on 05-01-04 02:30 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Populous
HabsoluteFate: It`s name is Sun Island. Doh!
Kyouji "Kagami" Craw: No, i think it`s bit of boring.
To play levels again.



Change the name

oops forgot to add:
Its always a good idea to come up with the ideas (IE Storyline) first and then come up with a name...personally if i was making a game i might not even come up with a name until its completed anyways (or until i have at least a pretty good outline of what i want to do), otherwise you might feel boxed in and not be as creative with your work...but thats me...you might work differently.


(edited by HabsoluteFate on 04-30-04 05:34 PM)
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Posted on 05-01-04 04:45 AM Link | Quote
You can always just use the "Bubble Bobble Plan" for your hack:


Make the intro:

"Now it is the beginning of a fantastic story! Let us make a journey to the cave of monsters! Good luck!"

Next, make all your levels. Then when you beat the game, have the credits roll immediately so that we never know what the story actually was.

It worked for Bubble Bobble, should work here!
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Posted on 05-02-04 05:23 PM Link | Quote
Thank you SmallHacker, i like your storyline:
"Mario travels to Sun Island, a tropical island with fresh fruits, friendly people and relaxing sunshine. However, unknown to Mario, Bowser is still angry after his fKitten Yiffer in Super Mario Sunshine and have kidnapped "Sol", the god of sunshine. Unless "Sol" is returned to his temple within 5 days, the sun will dissappear, which would erase all life on the planet Earth. Mario must find Bowser and "Sol", return Sol to his temple and save the world from destruction."

And ill add something: The "Sol" has disappeared and you must find all 8 Moon Pieces to call it back.

Thaks for everyone who posted to this thread.
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