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Kario In Possession of a Stolen Shovel Level: 65 Posts: 2018/2082 EXP: 2321379 For next: 14249 Since: 03-15-04 From: Texas... Yeehaw! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 17 hours |
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| It doesnt have a title, just tell me what ya think I guess. Knowing how you were Seeing what you've come to be You arent the same person Yet you dont seem to see It tears me up inside Knowing nothing can be done Your life, your decision That time has come and gone I dont want you to see me hurt So I go home and cry I cant just sit and watch As you let the old you die I ask myself why I care so much I havent known you long You would only be a few words If my life were written as song I know I cannot leave But if you want, I will You could never see me again If I travel on down that hill Yet deep down inside I know If I never saw you again You would still be in my life If only written with this pen |
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Dark Vampriel Lynel "Life is just a dream on the way to death." Level: 57  Posts: 1406/1658 EXP: 1400355 For next: 85573 Since: 08-29-04 From: Somewhere..... Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 4 min. |
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| That's pretty good and as for a title how about "Change of Time." *shrugs* | |||
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Kario In Possession of a Stolen Shovel Level: 65 Posts: 2025/2082 EXP: 2321379 For next: 14249 Since: 03-15-04 From: Texas... Yeehaw! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 17 hours |
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| Thanks for the idea for a title. Thanks for the comment as well. Ya know though, I would rather have 50 people say "This sucks" than not have any reply at all. | |||
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ExKay Somebody set up us the bomb! Level: 50 Posts: 905/1114 EXP: 908268 For next: 39049 Since: 03-15-04 From: Hannover, Germany Since last post: 14 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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Very nice, I definetely will remember that one. Good job.  |
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Kario In Possession of a Stolen Shovel Level: 65 Posts: 2033/2082 EXP: 2321379 For next: 14249 Since: 03-15-04 From: Texas... Yeehaw! Since last post: 2 days Last activity: 17 hours |
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| Thanks Ice Man. Anyone else have any comments? |
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