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Rainbow Yoshi

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Posted on 08-03-05 09:46 AM Link | Quote
Story Line:
Once upon a time there was a plumber, who set of on an adventure to save a princess who was kidnapped by an evil king.
The New Yoshi's Isle


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Smb3 Koopas


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Smb2 FG


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New Pirhana Plants


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When Yoshi's Attack


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Yoshi's Gone Wild


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Any Suggestions?
Chris

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Posted on 08-03-05 10:12 AM Link | Quote
You've got more than a lot to work on... For one, status bar problems. That's about it... You've also got to find a better way of designing your overworld. Looks kinda plain the way you have it right now... And well...that's about all I have to say.

Decent work though.
fabio

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Posted on 08-03-05 10:14 AM Link | Quote
I have to agree with Chris on that one, it's really hard to see any part of the status bar including the numbers. That's pretty much your only main problem as of now.
HyperLamer
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Posted on 08-03-05 12:13 PM Link | Quote
Yoshis as enemies? Interesting idea...
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Posted on 08-03-05 12:44 PM Link | Quote
Looks interesting to say the least. I'll give it a play if a demo gets released. Yoshi's as enemies though... sounds like how I put them in my hack... Hmm... oh well. Maybe give the yoshi enemies (Rex replacements I'm guessing) a more edited look.
KawaiiImoto-e

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Posted on 08-03-05 02:14 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by The Crimson Chin
Yoshis as enemies? Interesting idea...

The Killer Yoshis from 'The Rise of the Mushroom Kingdom' comes to mind...
Keikonium
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Posted on 08-03-05 07:10 PM Link | Quote
Well, at least you can use ExGFX. The Yoshi enemy is a cool idea. The piranha plant replacement looks like a tulip. The BG looks great. The status bar sucks. The FG palette looks like crap (sorry, it just looks really nes-ish).

Overall, your main problem is palettes. Fix them up and this will be good.

Also, your shots are kind of uninteresting. Get more action shots.
SoNotNormal

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Posted on 08-03-05 07:35 PM Link | Quote
I like all the screenies, but yoshi's island seem a bit plain. Maybe add some scenery, a pool of water in the middle or something? And yeah, your status bar is tough to read unfortunately. But not bad so far
Golden Yoshi

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Posted on 08-04-05 01:00 AM Link | Quote
Good job, Butt, I don't have any other suggestions besides the ones listed above. All I can say is that I'd like to see some more screens of other levels with different levels with other BG's and FG's, since you did a good job with the BG in these screens, with the palettes and the setup. Your new Yoshi Gone Wild sprite looks pretty cool as well. You need some work on several things but you have the potential.
Cruel Justice

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Posted on 08-04-05 01:07 AM Link | Quote
The only thing that needs work is the overworld map, and the FG palette on the second screen. Other than that, it's good work!
Nintendude

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Posted on 08-04-05 03:18 AM Link | Quote
I agree with Cruel Justice.
Rainbow Yoshi

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Posted on 08-05-05 12:23 AM Link | Quote
The Story




Overworld



Level 1

Smb3 Koopas

Out the Pipe

Beware of Man-eating Tulips

When Yoshi's Attack

Yoshi's Gone Wild



Level 2


Sunny Days

Thanks Mr. Plumber

Yoshi Sex

Yoshi dont do foursomes

Too Many Tulips

I win!

I lose...


Level 3

Fire Mario

A hippity Hop



The Demo
Note: You must register to download. If for some reason you really want to try the hack, but don't want to register, e-mail me and I'll e-mail it to you.


(edited by Mr. Butthole on 08-04-05 03:24 PM)
Sukasa

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Posted on 08-05-05 05:16 AM Link | Quote
Who wants a copy of the IPS? I'm registered already.
andrés

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Posted on 08-05-05 06:01 AM Link | Quote
I like those idea of Yoshis as enemies...
Glyph Phoenix

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Posted on 08-05-05 06:20 AM Link | Quote
Don't use a contrasting dark BG color with a light bg like in level 2, don't make screenshots of things that aren't changed at all from SMW like the bonus levels, don't put pipes on an x-shaped box like that with rounded corners, and if you ever try to imply screenshots are dirty like that again I'll kill you.

And maybe Shyguy too while I'm at it... that old gif he used to have was so freaking stupid, and if I'm going on a whole "Kill the stupid obscene comedians" rampage I might as well kill two jerks with one stone.
Rainbow Yoshi

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Posted on 08-05-05 06:55 AM Link | Quote
Let me just say go ahead Darkflight the only reason I did that was because I was toooo lazy to find a host for it, and funpic doesnt allow external linking.(Meaning you had to download it from my site)
fabio

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Posted on 08-05-05 06:59 AM Link | Quote
Holy crap, I didn't see the second set of screenshots. What does the Mew do in this games? A few screenshots in the second set looks almost the same as the first set.
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Posted on 08-06-05 04:02 AM Link | Quote
Blue Yoshi? ROTMK Yoshi would cool sharp teeth and red eyes. Awesome.


(edited by MarioMaster on 08-05-05 07:02 PM)
andrés

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Posted on 08-06-05 04:05 AM Link | Quote
It looks interesting, I want the demo!
Rainbow Yoshi

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Posted on 08-06-05 05:38 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Dr. Weird
Holy crap, I didn't see the second set of screenshots. What does the Mew do in this games? A few screenshots in the second set looks almost the same as the first set.


The Name of the Island is Mew Island, and Mew does nothing I am just really fond of Poke'mon.
Edit: Overworld Sucked I made a new one.

Comments please.


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(edited by Mr. Butthole on 08-05-05 08:38 PM)
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