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Forte.EXE Buzzy Beetle Level: 31  Posts: 143/396 EXP: 170237 For next: 15126 Since: 07-23-04 From: DenTech City - Maverick Hunter HQ Since last post: 1 hour Last activity: 1 hour |
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| I dunno if this is considered a story, sounds more like a short poem or drabble, but here goes. Hope to get back some comments. Somewhere in the darkest regions of the internet, there is someone walking along a dark path. Footsteps echo out into the air, as that person appears out of nowhere from the shadows. "I, am the darkness... my life, revolves around darkness... my hopes, my dreams, shattered before my eyes years ago." His name brings shivers down every Navi's spine. Those who talk about him, gets deleted in one fell swoop. Those who have the guts to battle him, meets the grim fate that befalls all who dared challenge his power. That Navi's name... is Forte.EXE, The Black Shadow. "A long time ago, I was once respected by many scientists when my creator made me. I was the first customized NetNavi made by the world known scientist, Dr. Cossack." The dark Navi is wearing a brown cloak that covered most of his body, except for his face. His helmet is black with large, cobra like fins on either side, with red eyes. Going down the sides of his face under the eyes were purple streaks. He continues walking down the path, every step he takes echoing out into the dark air. "I was very strong, but my powers were kept in check because of my Get Ability Program. They said I carried too much power, and I was put on a statis hold to keep them under check. Everything was fine, passing tests and virus busting training, getting more respect from the fellow scientists, and my creator... who I once considered my father. The scientists had another project they called Proto, which is a living primal internet. It was basically a program that runs all of the net in the past. But they didn't know that Proto gained too much knowlege, and gained a mind of its own, and began devouring other data, basic programs, everything. Everything went to hell one day, when Proto decided to attack the net and attempt to absorb it all for itself in hunger. Believeing that I was the cause of it, the scientists sent an elite team of security Navis out to delete me." Forte closes his eyes as he remembers that tragic day. There is a flashback to that day, when Forte stumbles out from his cell. He was surrounded by a troop of security Navis. The leader ordered to attack, and they all converge on Forte. Forte jumps away and uses the only weapon he had, his buster. He aims and begins blasting back the Navis, in order to survive. While fighting he tries to contact those who watched him, but got no response. When he tried his Net-op, the PET was disconnected to him. He turned around, just in time for the leader's blade to come down on him. He moved his cloak aside and ran his fingers along the slash that's across his icon on his chest, remembering the horrible pain he indured from that sword attack, the one which gave him that scar. "I snapped when the leader slashed me with his Sword, and I survived when I broke free of the hold on my true potential after that one fatal blow." Another flashback back to the same memory, Forte falls to the ground, damaged, slightly bleeding, and in pain. The leader sneered and was about to trust the sword into Forte, until the dark Navi suddenly broke free of the rings that kept his powers locked, and grabbed the leader's sword arm. His hand glowed, and before long, Forte had a copy of the leader's blade. Smiling, he fought back with his Dark Arm Blade, deleting every single security Navi. "I felt so betrayed that day... I decided to wander away before they sent more out to delete me during my state of weakness." Forte stops and looks up into the dark sky. "It's been many years since that day, and this scar I got is a reminder of the humans who wanted me dead for something that I never caused. But one day though, I will get my revenge, and when I do..." The Black Shadow then turns around, staring into the black abyss, "I will savior the moment when I shed the blood of those who betrayed me." He then continues walking, until he mysteriously vanished into the darkness up ahead. Edit: Corrected typo. (edited by Forte.EXE on 07-15-05 11:58 PM) |
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Grey the Stampede Don't mess with powers you don't understand. And yes. That means donuts. Level: 82  Posts: 2705/3770 EXP: 5192909 For next: 16318 Since: 06-17-04 From: Kingston, RI, USA, Earth Since last post: 2 hours Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Not too shabby, Megaman fan. I'm gonna kick this over to Modern Art, though. You'll get a good bit more response there, if you ask me. | |||
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Forte.EXE Buzzy Beetle Level: 31 Posts: 149/396 EXP: 170237 For next: 15126 Since: 07-23-04 From: DenTech City - Maverick Hunter HQ Since last post: 1 hour Last activity: 1 hour |
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| Sure hope so. The drabble is based on Forte's dark past, which led him to be alone. To me, once I read through it myself, it sounded sort of dark. Maybe it's just me. |
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