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Link2004

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Posted on 07-06-05 10:08 PM Link | Quote
http://www.freewebs.com/terencev1/hacks.htm

I know I remade this game a thousand times, but I want to get it right. I want this game to fun and enjoyable. I would love to see this game in the SMW finished hack threed. If enough people like it ,I'll make a sequel with better graphics and storylines. The patch will be out friday and I'll post it here. So tell me what you think of these screenshots and I'll answer them later tonight.
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Posted on 07-06-05 10:50 PM Link | Quote
Looks good. *waits for patch*
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Posted on 07-06-05 11:06 PM Link | Quote
Kyouji Craw: http://board.acmlm.org/thread.php?id=15950
Glyph Phoenix: What?
Kyouji Craw: Look at the screenshots.
Kyouji Craw: I'm so disgusted I can't even seen to say something horrible to him.
Glyph Phoenix: They don't suck as much as I expected them to.
Kyouji Craw: Not all of them, no
Kyouji Craw: Some are actually kind of nice.
Kyouji Craw: Most, even.
Kyouji Craw: But the ones that aren't.
Kyouji Craw: Are some of the worst I've ever seen.
Glyph Phoenix: You comment. I have work to do.

Posting the convo is easier than actually doing what he says.
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Posted on 07-06-05 11:10 PM Link | Quote
Looking at the screens, you have some palette work needing to be done. The status bar at the top is bad, looks unorganized and random. Also, the palette for Fire Dr.Mario is bleh. I dont like it. Make him wear red or something, the black looks weird.
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Posted on 07-06-05 11:35 PM Link | Quote
for the screen that uses the kong fused cliffs BG, the clouds and BG color look a little bit weird, try setting color 6 to "240, 248, 248", color A to "160, 192, 240", and color E to "192, 216, 248"
Link2004

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Posted on 07-07-05 03:45 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Kyouji Craw
Kyouji Craw: http://board.acmlm.org/thread.php?id=15950
Glyph Phoenix: What?
Kyouji Craw: Look at the screenshots.
Kyouji Craw: I'm so disgusted I can't even seen to say something horrible to him.
Glyph Phoenix: They don't suck as much as I expected them to.
Kyouji Craw: Not all of them, no
Kyouji Craw: Some are actually kind of nice.
Kyouji Craw: Most, even.
Kyouji Craw: But the ones that aren't.
Kyouji Craw: Are some of the worst I've ever seen.
Glyph Phoenix: You comment. I have work to do.

Posting the convo is easier than actually doing what he says.



Heh... I knew Kyouji Craw would have some smart ,stupid, not contributing to helping me, pretend like your funny but your not, dumb ass remark to say because he has plenty of beautiful hacks out there ....Wait, he dosen't

-Looking at the screens, you have some palette work needing to be done. The status bar at the top is bad, looks unorganized and random. Also, the palette for Fire Dr.Mario is bleh. I dont like it. Make him wear red or something, the black looks weird.-

Fire Mario is the Red color Dr.Mario from SSBM. Black Mario is from SSBM too and he's Player two. I'm not changing those so don't play it since it bugs you.The status bar is even, All coin related things on the left, score and time on the right. I agree with you that I have to work on the status bar palette, though.

For everything else I'm still working on the palettes. Give me more ideas on the BG palletes like smwedit did (thanks) so I can work on them. Completly ignoring Kyouji Craw and everything he post unless it contributes to helping me, I'm going to continue and post more screenshots thursday. So please give me BG palletes ideas. I WILL make this game SMW archive worty.



mikepjr

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Posted on 07-07-05 04:28 AM Link | Quote
The only thing i can say something good about is the backgrounds in all the screen shots but one.
And it has way too much red in use, what is bad is that it is the same shade of red. Mario himself needs a bit of work.

And that is really all i have to say that is good, i mean the stuff that is bad should be obvious to you.

And yes that includes the status bar.
Link2004

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Posted on 07-07-05 04:57 AM Link | Quote
That "all red" level is the inside of a body, How nice can that really look?


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Posted on 07-07-05 05:59 AM Link | Quote
You do realize you said my comment was both smart and stupid, correct?

Edit: I also loved the part where you sarcastically implied my hacks are ugly. 'specially since even Aioria said parts of its graphics look beautiful, and we have a mutual hate for each other and would like to see each other die. (Certainly not the entirety of it, but eh.)

Flatly put, you hack looks crappy and you suck at taking criticism, lashing out at those who say what is the truth (or at the very least those who don't mindlessly praise everything); thus I in no way expect it to improve anytime soon.

There, was that more useful?


(edited by Kyouji Craw on 07-06-05 09:04 PM)
(edited by Kyouji Craw on 07-06-05 09:05 PM)
(edited by Kyouji Craw on 07-06-05 09:07 PM)
Link2004

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Posted on 07-07-05 10:25 AM Link | Quote
Originally posted by Kyouji Craw
You do realize you said my comment was both smart and stupid, correct?

Edit: I also loved the part where you sarcastically implied my hacks are ugly. 'specially since even Aioria said parts of its graphics look beautiful, and we have a mutual hate for each other and would like to see each other die. (Certainly not the entirety of it, but eh.)

Flatly put, you hack looks crappy and you suck at taking criticism, lashing out at those who say what is the truth (or at the very least those who don't mindlessly praise everything); thus I in no way expect it to improve anytime soon.

There, was that more useful?


...Sigh....Things can never go easy when I post here, Theres always someone who just have to push my buttons.........Kyouji Craw,YOU suck at taking criticism, YOU still didn't help with anything, your still not funny, and from what I saw on ice board, YOUR game looks like crap. Talking about my backgrounds (that I was going to edit anyways) when yours look like dog's shit. Basicly, you can kiss my ass Kyouji, so do or post whever you whatever you want like always because repling to you like this is complely childish and stupid, and it helped my hack in no way. You don't scare me. I'm not like these others that sits here and takes your crap. Bottom line is this, my hack is coming out on friday;
1. People who play it ,Thanks, I hope you enjoy it. It's an awsome game and I worked very hard on it.
2. People who don't, you miss out..
3. People who hate it, your entitled to your opinion.

I can NEVER get along with anyone on this board and I shouldn't have to get into arguments every time I post my games here because somebody tries to be funny at my expense. This happend with my Mario is Missing game, It's NOT going to happend this time....just forget it...
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Posted on 07-07-05 10:50 AM Link | Quote
Dude, chill. The red background does ned improvement, though. Try a game where you are in some kind of intestinal level, like Boogerman or Earthworm Jim. That oughta do the trick.

Kyouji is just..... Kyouji. He is known for his blunt criticism. That's not bad most of the time.
mikepjr

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Posted on 07-07-05 11:25 AM Link | Quote
What i meant about your inside of a body just needs more shades of red, is all i am saying, it looks as if you used the same shade of red for everything, played this game one time on the snes called congo's capers, check out like the 3rd level i do beleave of that game, it is the inside of something alive.

It should give you better insparation and a better idea of what needs to be done for that level in particular.

But everything else is good.

And as long as the status bar is readable do not worry about what people say about that.

Next time just ignor K C, pretend he is not here, and just go to the next responce in the thread, that is usuely what i do when someone says something i dislike.

Now im not saying your hack is bad, it is just that one part, just try more that one shade of red for everything, or at least the monsters.

So far what i have said has just been constructive critasisum(i know i spelled that word wrong).

But anyhow, it is not as bad as alot of hacks i have seen on this board(not going to say what hacks though).

Just calm down and ignor anyone that makes you upset.

And i have seen the insides of a body up close, so i know how it looks.

Ever see a dead body up close?
Not something one would forget.

Anyhow, just more shades of red would help it, not saying you have to, just saying it would look better.
And more people would play it, unles you do not want them to.
Ok, i have said enough.


(edited by mikepjr on 07-07-05 02:26 AM)
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Posted on 07-07-05 01:46 PM Link | Quote
It's actually pretty nice... but the all red level is kinda bleh. :\

All in all, I'm going to want to play this.
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Posted on 07-07-05 04:52 PM Link | Quote
Ok...we've all agreed Kyouji Craw is a twat ok? We've all decided his hack sucks proper ass.

Now Link2004....make a few changes and you can save yourself from being as bad at SMW editing as Kyouji Craw is.


(edited by richyawyingtmv on 07-07-05 07:53 AM)
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Posted on 07-07-05 05:02 PM Link | Quote
While off topic, you really need to change your site design. It is butt ugly. Geez. These random ugly Link pictures in the background? STARFIELDS? That's terrible, man.

Now, on to the hack related stuff. You need to have the tops of clouds placed in the bonus round area. The way Dr. Mario's threads turn black or pinkish on some areas is a big no-no. Don't have the logs in the forest level just end at the foreground trees. The backgrounds, while often surprisingly nice, have terrible palettes. They should be grayed out and possibly lightened so they don't conflict with the foreground. Water that has risen to the very top of the ground area is really bad. Gaumel forest is too cluttered.

Now, the red picture.... that is just terrible. The fuzzies are the same color as the bg, which is bad. The BG is just one of the worst things that ever was. No level should ever be paletted that way. That pink... THING.... I can't even tell what it is. And the ground is an ugly shade of pink.

As for the rest, while little things such as lava and water being right next to each other (and not at the same level) take it down a little, are surprisingly good. Your backgrounds, often with poor palettes, aren't that bad. The rock in the underwater level doesn't seem to have terrible errors. Surprisingly not so terrible, but definately not enough to make me download this one. But to be fair I've probably downloaded like 3 hacks since the last SMO demo.
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Posted on 07-07-05 07:07 PM Link | Quote
Although I agree with you link2004 (some people don't have very good social skills, too young or two geeky... that is why they post so much on forums), I'm not taking sides nor do I recommend you to start any flames. It got me in trouble several times.

[Back on Topic]
-Might I suggest you add in the little virusy guys from Dr.Mario? Dont get me wrong though, I like what you've done so far, pretty creative.
-To be honest, you may also need a slightly better palette selection though.
-Also, what is the plot (if any) if you don't mind my asking? You may be able to figure out a creative way of making custom graphics to fit in.
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Posted on 07-07-05 07:48 PM Link | Quote
Some people just make less sense with each post they make

That said, I'm still going to give this a shot when you release it. Hopefully I won't regret it.
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Posted on 07-07-05 08:39 PM Link | Quote
As you go lower in the "body" levels you have to fight a virus(big boo boss). All the enemies in that area fade transparent when he appers.That why the enemies look redish like that. It can't be helped...can it?

EDIT:um Glyph Phoenix, my site is just to hold my hacks, not for show(yet). I haven't worked on it for months, so thanks for the motivation to work on it. Read the above posts and you know why Dr. Mario is black and red and what kind of level is the "red" level.



(edited by Link2004 on 07-07-05 11:51 AM)
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Posted on 07-07-05 09:19 PM Link | Quote
Originally posted by richyawyingtmv
Ok...we've all agreed Kyouji Craw is a twat ok? We've all decided his hack sucks proper ass.

Now Link2004....make a few changes and you can save yourself from being as bad at SMW editing as Kyouji Craw is.


*Ahem*

Kyouji IS on staff. You know that, don't you?
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Posted on 07-07-05 09:24 PM Link | Quote
Yes but it doesnt change what I stated George Bush is a dick, and hes the president.

No more about this please?

And I agree about what Cruel Justice said, you should try adding in some more elements from the Dr Mario games.
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